First Warp Talon complete, critique welcome!

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**Squallbuddy**

Just finished painting my first Warp Talon. Rules are pretty aweful but they look so cool! Critique welcome and appreciated!

**nareik**

I like the painting style, reminds me of the 2nd ed codex!

Are you going to be putting any freehand on the shoulder pad? One of the legions?

**Squallbuddy**

They are actually going to be part of my Daemonkin so probably the only thing appropriate would be a Khorne symbol, which would look very nice and make it look complete and not waste all that empty freehand space! Not sure why I didn't think of it and thank you!

**ZergSmasher**

I only hope I can make my own Warp Talons look this good! Excellent painting!

**Ratius**

Really made him pop, good work.

**Talizvar**

Picture has a wee bit too much blue light.
I suspect the model "pops" a lot more than what I see here.
I like the multiple ways you "outlined" transitional edges (shoulder pad in particular).
The eye glow effect is well done.
That is such a "busy" model I am glad you restricted the colours other than red and gold to small areas.
Well done!

**corpuschain**

I like it! Nice highlights and the face has an eerie look to it.