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Level 2 Blood Angels Tank

Inconsistent painting outside the lines. It really shows on the treads. As I have said and others before you will get harsher criticism showing it as commission work.

I think your missing a piece of the model that covers the drivers viewing hole, right next to the blood angel iconography. Also the red on the lascannon sponson doesn't seem to match the red of the hull. Its very tabletop standard(which is not a bad thing) and I think some weathering and/or highlighting would really do it some justice.

On a non-painting related note, some sort of tripod will go a long way in your photography. Right now all of your pictures look as if they're just sliiiiiightly blurry in places, which makes it harder to give good criticism on your painting.

This is definitely not the level I would expect from a commission painter. I hope this is a very budget-minded commission.