All the photos are sideways. But apart from that its a pretty darn good effort for a first timer! Much better than what I ever did
lol.
I personally prefer the paler white colour. makes them more fleshy morbid in my opinion. The green also works and makes them seem a bit more dirty and gritty so its a personal preference. A winter base with the greener models would cool cool
IMO.
Remmeber to do the bases. Some really easy tutorials.
Mostly some sort of fine gravel/sand/ballast sand etc. a generous helping of bas epaint a shade and a coat or two of drybrush should do the trick.
If you are feeling adventurous and moneys no issue there are plenty great basing products and tutorials available.
For these I could see an "autumn" theme base working well with the cool pale pallete potentially.
Minor point: The showcase forum is meant for finished projects being showcased. Might be worth asking a mod moving this thread to the P&M blog section sot hat you can get proper feedback and also ramble away