so, since sly marbo is out of the IG codex, and i have the marbo model flying around, rather than simply asking the opponent to be allowed to still play him, i thought of my own rules.

the main thought is switching him to a purely shooty "covert ops" character, with enhanced survivability versus shooting, while sucking serious ass in CC.


Dimitriy "Dima" Mayakowski 150 pts (+1 to who gets the reference and discovers my extremely creative naming process for my model's names...)
WS 4 / BS 5 / S 3 / T 3 / W 3 / I 4 / A 2 / LD 10 / Sv 5+

special rules:
-fearless
-hit and run
-fleet
-shroud
-ambush: when deployed from reserves, he may be placed in any terrain area/piece on the board, further away than 1" from enemy models.
-does precision shots on 4+

wargear:
-flak armour
-frag and krak grenades
-defensive grenades
-melta bomb
-close combat weapon
-camo cloak
-modified vendoran pattern assault pistol: 12" S4 AP2 Pistol 4, pinning




in direct comparison to marbo, he lost poisoned CCW, lost poisoned on the pistol, gained two shots and gained a lot better survivability in terrain. but VERY vulnerable to ignores cover weapons or melee.
i did leave out the demo charge, which was the main thing which made marbo so stupid, and which makes "dima" bearable IMO.

with his precise shots, he has a statistically decent chance of killing a mook squad leader and get away with it like a true commando soldier, instead of wiping the entire squad like marbo.

 SisterSydney wrote:

Tons of good advice. I'm not sure why GW hasn't hired me to write the next Sororitas Codex.

I'm right there with you, they probably should do that. I'm also on the same page regarding being over/under-costed. I'd rather err on the side of caution, especially if it's a character you'd ever want to actually play with or against.

I gave her Archangel's Radiance the traits of a Rosarius, so that should improve her save a little. I know she's made of paper-mache, but I like the idea that you'll really have to work to guard her - if you do, she'll help a lot. I also tossed out Shield of Faith and replaced it with Adamantium Will, as well as got rid of Fearless for redundancy. If you haven't noticed, I haven't gotten a chance to actually play my Sisters on the table yet, so I'm still figuring out their nuances in the rules. I left Finger of the Mountain unchanged for wholesome, template-based disintegration in the name of the Emperor.

As for Watchdog, you're right, that might be too strong. I think firing for Overwatch is just as thematic, without being as punishing to the other player. I tweaked it, but I'm still thinking about the points cost. I mean, you HAVE to take Adelaide to gain access to (basically) a stock Vindicare with the bonus trait. Which means that, if you compare him to another Vindicare he's better, but you're required to make a ~200 point investment to get the bonus trait. So I stuck him at 165 points and called it a day.

**Side note** I got my two other knight chassis in the mail today, and I'm looking forward to doing some conversion work to try out that Knight Angelus. The guys at my FLGS are super casual, so I'm sure I could find a game with it!

Firebrand Adelaide, Ecclesiarchy High Priestess
- Adelaide enjoys a freedom to pursue her own ends at the fringes of the galaxy, if only because she is as feared by her would-be cohorts as she is by her enemies. Her odd, distant and often distracted behavior belies her ruthlessness and fervor on the field of battle. The records of her assignment to her post are mysteriously absent, although her superiors turn a blind eye to such a minor issue with the consistent results Adelaide sees on the battlefield. However, this did not stop them from sending her as far away from Terra as possible, and placing her in the charge of a relatively new Adepta Sororitas Minor Order, the Roses Ardentia. Even at the edge of the galaxy, there is plenty of heresy to purge.

WS 3 / BS 3 / S 3 / T 3 / W 3 / I 4 / A 1/ Ld 10 Sv - / 195 pts.

Unit Type: Independent Character (Infantry)

Special Rules: Independent Character, Adamantium Will, Battle Hymns, Zealot, Watchdog

Warlord Trait: Beacon of Faith

Wargear: The Archangel's Radiance, Finger of the Mountain

The Archangels Radiance: Functions as a Simulacrum Imperialis and a Rosarius, with these additional effects: Any friendly units which can draw LOS to the beacon at the top of the Archangel's Radiance are Fearless. Additionally, enemy units that within 12" of Adelaide must past an initiative test at the beginning of their turn or are Blinded (WS and BS reduced to one)
- The Archangel's Radiance is a staff which channels the bearers furious passion into a holy light that rivals the rising sun. Carried high and shining with brilliance as Adelaide enters the field of battle, it is a signal for which all of her allies may rally to.

Finger of the Mountain: /Range: Template/ S 6 / AP 2 / Assault, Instant Death
- Implanted into Adelaide's right hand, The Finger of the Mountain is said to be a channel through which Adelaide can enact the will of the Emperor himself. It is said that those who are bathed in it's glow are judged by the Emperor, and while those that are righteous and holy are spared, those with heresy in their blood are suitably condemned. No one can recall anyone having been spared thus far. In actuality, the weapon is a relic from the Dark of Age of technology. It functions by generating a conical field that rapidly excites any molecular compound it touches, causing it's constructing atoms to violently tear themselves away from each other. Potentially, anything that remains in the field for long enough will be turned to dust, however the force with which the victims 'deconstruct' is so aggressive that they often 'explode', as their body is literally pulled in every direction at once.

Watchdog: Adelaide's bodyguard and companion, the Vindicare assassin Adagio, may be included as an allied detachment to an army that includes Adelaide. Adagio functions as a standard Vindicare, with these additional changes: The points cost to include Adagio is 165. Adagio may fire Overwatch at enemies declaring a charge against a unit that contains Adelaide as though he were a part of the unit, as long as he is within range and can draw clear LOS to the unit declaring the charge. His To-Hit Roll for Overwatch is made at full BS.
- In high contrast to Adelaide's quirky, eccentric behavior, Adagio is ever silent, ever focused, and always watching. It is unknown how Adagio was placed in the charge of Adelaide, as much like her own records, Adagio's are mysteriously absent. He may not exhibit the same passion and righteous fury that she herself shows on the battlefield, but one can be certain - if Adelaide is on the frontlines of a charge, there is a poised Vindicare with a watchful eye on her nearby.

195 might be a bit cheap considering an ap2 ID template weapon...

Edit: although, the weakness may cancel that out.

 Co'tor Shas wrote:
195 might be a bit cheap considering an ap2 ID template weapon...

Did you read Sister Sydney's post?

Starting with a Heavy Flamer: Template/S5/AP4 - 10pts
+1 Strength - 10 pts.
+ 2 AP - 10 pts.
Instant Death - 10 pts.

For a total of 40 pts. for the Finger of the Mountain. I trust Sydney's math, she's always on point, even erring on the side of over-priced, generally.

Yeah, Adelaide's squishiness off-sets the advantage of being in that sort of range, I hope.

Well, ID is quite rare, so it tends to be valuable (in my mind at least). I probebly overvalue it by having lots of multi-wound models though .

 Co'tor Shas wrote:
Well, ID is quite rare, so it tends to be valuable (in my mind at least). I probebly overvalue it by having lots of multi-wound models though .

Oh, fair enough. I think it's one of those things like Fear (although obviously much better than fear) in the sense that depending on who you use it on, it could be game-changing or totally worthless. Against guardsman or orks, it's not going to make any difference, but against terminators it could be huge. Like most template weapons, though, if you spread out and maintain coherency, at most you're going to take 1 or 2 hits from it.

It would be a great counter to big things like wraithknights and such, if you can get that close.

Hmmm.... I need to work on another "good guy".

 Co'tor Shas wrote:
It would be a great counter to big things like wraithknights and such, if you can get that close.

Yeah, that's the thing. It's a Template weapon on a T:3 Sv:4++ character. She has to be towards the front of her blob o' bodyguards to have even 8" of range. Oh, and she's Infantry, so unless you are using the fire point on a transport, good luck catching most high-value targets.

Land Speeder Maximus (Land Speeder Typhoon)
Rules: Same as regular Land Speeder Typhoon, but with these differences.
Armour F 12 S 11 R 10
140pts (multi-melta, advanced typhoon missile launchers)
Special Rules:
'Thank you so much, Calgar!': Marneus Augustus Calgar, Lord Macragge and chapter master of the Ultramarines gave this land speeder to The blood angels after Commander Dante sent out an urgent call for help asking for more land speeders. Calgar outfitted this Land Speeder with the best Typhoon Missile Launchers he could find, and a multi-melta. When Ultramarines and Blood Angels are working together, one missile launcher can fire krak missiles at one target, and frag missiles at another target. This can happen an unlimited amount of times per game, unless it has moved more than 18 inches (see below). The blood angels thank Calgar for Land Speeder Maxiumus with unending gratitude.
Faster Movemen and firing: Land Speeder Maximus can move 18+ inches and still fire its weapons, but when it chooses to fire if it moved 18+ inches, it can shoot either frag or krak missiles at one target.

 FistusMaximus wrote:
i did leave out the demo charge, which was the main thing which made marbo so stupid, and which makes "dima" bearable IMO.

You are not fit to call yourself a true servant of the emperor. Go die in a spike filled hole, heretic scum.

 CREEEEEEEEED wrote:

 FistusMaximus wrote:
i did leave out the demo charge, which was the main thing which made marbo so stupid, and which makes "dima" bearable IMO.

You are not fit to call yourself a true servant of the emperor. Go die in a spike filled hole, heretic scum.

i was tempted to keep the demo charge, but people would not allow the guy then

This is one I made a while ago. It's made for 6th edition though.

Codex: Tau Empire

Unit: Kal'rian the Hawk and three X-39 experimental sniper drones

Kal’rian the Hawk
WS:2 BW:6 S:3 T:3 W:3 I:3 A:3 Ld:9 Sv:5+ Infantry (character)

Wargear:
Z-71 Rail Sniper
Drone controller
Advanced Targeting System
Blacksun Filter
Photon Grenades


Special Rules:
Shrouded.
Lone wolf: Cannot be joined by ICs, nor can she be the warlord
The Hawk’s Eye: If a unit charging your warlord is within line of sight and range of her, she may fire over watch at that unit, these shots are resolved at full ballistic skill. This uses up her one overwatch chance per turn.


X-39 experimental sniper drone
WS:2 BS:3 S:3 T:4 W:3 I:4 A:1 Ld:7 Sv:4+ Jetpack Infantry (drone)

Wargear:
Z-71 Rail Sniper
Advanced Targeting System

Special Rules:
Stealth



Z-71 Rail Sniper 48" S:6 AP:1 Heavy 1, sniper.







I'm not sure about pricing at this moment. She is an altered fireblade, and the drones are special sniper drones so that shouldn't be too hard, The tricky one is the rail sniper.

It's sort of the bastard child of a rail rifle and a longshot pulse rifle. My idea is that you never need more than 4+ to wound, and the thing gets rending and pinning.

Jimmy the Chaos Cultist: My first casualty ever... He died in vain

Shas'O Kel'Vash - "The Silent Hunter"
225 pts
XV46-4 Vanguard Commander Battlesuit - Jetpack Infantry
WS BS S T W I A Ld Sv
4 5 5 5 4 4 4 10 2+/4++/5+++
DX-11 Exploratory Drone x2 - Jetpack Infrantry
WS BS S T W I A Ld Sv
2 2 5 5 2 4 2 8 4+

Equipment:
Iridium Armour
Shield Generator
Blacksun filter
Drone Controller
Multi-tracker
Vectored Retro Thrusters
Stimulant Injector

Weapons
2 - TL- Fusion Blasters
8 / 1 / 18" Melta, Heavy 1, Twin-linked
2 - Fusion Blades - Earthcast fixed these - no longer short out.
8 / 1 / Melee, Blind, Armorbane, Fleshbane
Defensive Grenades
Assault Grenades

Drone wargear:
Stealth field projector - Stealth and Shrouded
Sensor array - Removes Stealth, Shrouded or Invisibility of enemy units within 24" of the drone
Blacksun Filter
Target Lock

Drone Weapons:
EMP Discharge
2 / 5 / Large Blast, Heavy 2, Haywire, Blind
Fragmentation Burst
5 / 4 / Large Blast, Heavy 2, Shred, Pinning

Special Rules -
Infiltrate - Drones and Commander can do this as a team or as individual units
Lone Wolf - Cannot join or be joined by other units/models, other than its 2 drones
Exploratory Drone - Drones can leave the unit and scout head - can rejoin the unit.
Drone Bursts - these drones is armed with defensive burst pods that were initially used to clear rubble, deactivate defense systems of derelict space hulks - each drone can do either burst when they attack - Place the large blast template over the drone for each attack.

Modified from - http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/XV46_Vanguard_Void_Battlesuit

Death solitaire (Learned human follows group taken in( harlequin perform for most races human, eldar....)

Jack the Ripper 225 Pts
Ws 7 Bs 7 s 3 t 3 w 3 I 8 A 6 ld 10 sv 3++
Holo suit(special 3++)
Knights death Harlequin's caress(caress + re-roll to hits and to wounds on a charge)
flip belt
Shurikan pistol Blood moon- 12" str4 ap5 blade storm, pistol (Assault=A1/2)
Mask of fear- -2 ld to opponents in 6" or can take away atsknf)

Special rules
Deep strike, eternal warrior, fear, fearless, fleet, furious charge, hit and run, precision strikes, prismatic blur(12" move), Ml1, rage, Fnp, The Bastard.
(powers taken from the harlequin's chart)
(the Bastard- gains 1 A for each enemy model in an assault with him-2's rolled to hit hit, 1's hit friendly models in the assault.)

Name: Yomoma
ws1 bs1 s1 t1 w1 i1 a1 sv6
wargear: rolling pin for ccw, and apron
special rule: prefer enemy (SoB not the sisters of batttle)

name: yomoma's mama!

Kraagon Gorefist: 170 points

The lord of gladiator group 138.

WS: 5 BS: 5 S: 4 T: 4 W: 3 I: 5 A: 3 Ld: 10 Sv: 3+/4++

Unit Type: Infantry (Character)

Unit Composition: 1 (Unique)

Wargear: power armor, power axe, plasma pistol, frag grenades, krak grenades, sigil of corruption, mark of Khorne

Chaos Artifacts:
The Slaughter Crown

This ring of bony spurs juts out of Kraagon's skull and marks him as one of Khorne's favored champions. Kraagon uses these spines to gore his foes.

Kraagon's Hammer of Wrath attacks are resolved at strength 7 with an AP of 4.
Warlord Trait: Tenacity

Special Rules: Adamantium Will, Champion of Chaos, Counter Attack, Fearless, Furious Charge, Hammer of Wrath, Independent Character, Rage

Blood-Soaked Champion:

As a veteran gladiator Kraagon knows how to make a show out of combat, ending the lives of his foes in a violent display of viscera and gore few can stomach.

In the combat resolution phase of an assault phase in which Kraagon slew his opponent in a challenge, all unengaged enemy units within 12" of Kraagon must make a morale check or fall back.

[I'll put some background fluff here once I think it out a little better]

Point Break Down:

Chaos Lord: 65

Wargear:

Mark of Khorne: 10

Power Axe: 15

Plasma Pistol: 15

Sigil of Corruption: 25

Slaughter Crown: 10

Subtotal: 65

Stats & SRs:

Adamantium Will: 10

Furious Charge: 5

Hammer of Wrath: 5

Blood-Soaked Champion: 15

Warlord Trait: Tenacity

Subtotal: 40



Tell me what you think about him. Does he seem balanced and fun to play with/against?

Captain Gergori Zesh
-Leader of 10th Company, of the Nikkaren Armored Scout regiment.

Company Command Squad
-May replace Company Commander with Zesh for 80pts
-May be take any upgrades a normal Company Commander may.

CCS statline, and wargear standard

Special Rules:

Chimera Vox Net - While inside a Chimera, Zesh may make orders from any Chimera in his detachment, even if he isn’t in it. However, if he issues an order from a Chimera that he isn’t in, it only has a 6” command bubble. This ability isn’t affected by other Warlord Trait.

Special Order: The Need for Speed - This order is made on a chimera from Zesh's detatchment, and is resolved with his leadership. If the order is successful, target chimera is counted as a fast vehicle until the start of the next turn.

So, I'm not entirely back yet, still easing myself back into the game, learning 7th and my Dark Eldar again, but I was struck by inspiration and made this one:

Some opinions would be great, as I'm somewhat rusty.

Ash'ca, Archon of the Kabal of One

Crindae Cornix, Raven-Lord of the Eastern Fringe and "Chapter Master" of the Renegade Dusk Talons Chapter.

Marshal Arthos of the Black Templars

Edit: Forgot to mention, this one's for C:SM.

Pre-Induction to the Templars:


Life as a Templar:


Base Cost: [175 pts]
Marshal Arthos:

Ws 6
Bs 2
S 4
T 4
W 4
I 5
A 4
Ld 10
Sv 2+

Rules: ATSKNF, Chapter Tactics (Black Templars), Independent Character, Orbital Bombardment, Leader of the Charge
Wargear: Artificer Armour, Iron Halo, Frag + Krak Grenades, Ragnarok

Leader of the Charge
Arthos no longer charges into everything like a lunatic, but he cannot pass up the chance of a good duel
If Arthos and his unit find themselves to be within 12" of (and have LOS to) an enemy Warlord's unit, they must attempt to charge the unit in that turn.

Ragnarok
Ragnarok is the sword retrieved from the nameless world, the blade is 6 feet long and made of a strange kind of red metal. Lighter at the tip of the blade, and almost black at the hilt. The handle of the sword indicates it was intended for use by something of Space Marine size, as a two-handed weapon. It is said by those who witness Arthos in battle, that each kill of an unworthy opponent lightens the colour the blade, and that each kill of a supposedly worthy opponent renders it a darker shade of red. In-game, Ragnarok is treated as a Relic Blade.

Options:
Arthos must take one of the following, but not both:

-Bulletmaster [+5 pts]
Arthos has the aiming skills of an Ork, luckily Armageddon taught him that quantity can often make up for quality. "Bulletmaster" is a storm bolter that has been modified to produce a much greater rate of fire.
When wielding this weapon, Arthos is considered to have a Bs of 5 for all purposes.

-Defender of Terra [+50 pts]
When burning witches, purging xenos and crucifying a heretic's testes on an enormous sword, Arthos sometimes likes to keep his 10,000 year-old armour clean. Thus, on promotion to Marshal, the chapter's armoury gifted him this shield.
For all intents and purposes, this is counted as the Chapter Relic: The Shield Eternal.


Costing:

Galenius, the Savage of the Dark 6th Claw.

Backstory


Stats

Grot Kommander "Pesky"


If you've read all this, what do you reckon, 40 or 45 points? I think it'd be quite funny to see a little guy running around the tabletop, hopping into vehicles until they, too, are eventually destroyed.


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 Co'tor Shas wrote:
This is one I made a while ago. It's made for 6th edition though.

Codex: Tau Empire

Unit: Kal'rian the Hawk and three X-39 experimental sniper drones

Kal’rian the Hawk


Z-71 Rail Sniper 48" S:6 AP:1 Heavy 1, sniper.

Weapons with the Sniper special rule are automatically Strength X and wound on 4+, regardless of the target's toughness value, by the way. This would make the weapon kinda ineffective against vehicles.

 KommissarKiln wrote:

 Co'tor Shas wrote:
This is one I made a while ago. It's made for 6th edition though.

Codex: Tau Empire

Unit: Kal'rian the Hawk and three X-39 experimental sniper drones

Kal’rian the Hawk


Z-71 Rail Sniper 48" S:6 AP:1 Heavy 1, sniper.

Weapons with the Sniper special rule are automatically Strength X and wound on 4+, regardless of the target's toughness value, by the way. This would make the weapon kinda ineffective against vehicles.

Yeah, but this one works a bit different. I didn't feel like writing a special rule, so I just wrote how it works in the explanation. It just uses whatever is best. It has rending + pinning, and auto wounds on a 4+, but it can also wound on a 3+ and 2+ if the toughness is low enough. And it gives it the ability to go after vehicles, especially with rending.

Ah, I understand now. Yeah, maybe a special rule would help clear that up.

Any thoughts on the character I cobbled together?

It's pretty cool. I don't play orks, so I have no idea on the pricing, but it sounds about right.

Auramagma, the Ever-Burning - 200 points

Backstory


Rules

Sounds really cool. Would probably have an awesome model as well.

Kloytekh, Phaeron of the Burning Dynasty - 230 pts

Background


Rules

 RaptorusRex wrote:
Kloytekh, Phaeron of the Burning Dynasty - 230 pts

Background

Spoiler:

Once devoted servants of the C'tan Nyadra'zatha, the Burning Dynasty still retains traces of that ancient servitude. In battle, their legions strike out of nowhere and walk across the field shrouded in sheets of flame.

This army is led by Kloytekh, whose preference for close combat leads him into the thick of battle. Wreathed in lambent fire, he strikes down all who dare oppose him and his dynasty.

Rules

Spoiler:

Unit Type
Infantry (Character)

Wargear
-Hyperphase Sword

Artefact of the Aeons

-Gauntlet of Nyadraen Glory

This ornate close combat weapon takes the form of a armored glove, it's length crackling with fire and smoke. It incorporates a weapon that, while barely understood, appears to resemble a Imperial Flamer in basic function- launching a stream of coruscating flames at the foe.

--Primary Weapon: Gauntlet--
Range -
S User
AP 4
Melee

--Secondary Weapon : Nyadraen Petard--
Range Template
AP 3
Pistol, Blind

Special Rules
-Reanimation Protocols
-Independent Character

Warlord Trait
-Eternal Madness


Stats
WS 4
BS 4
S 5
T 4
W 2
I 3
LD 10
SV +3

Seems far overpriced for what he brings. He's a Phaeron, yet his stats are worse than a standard Overlord. Fewer wounds, lower toughness, and you've missed out the attacks stat.

 RaptorusRex wrote:
Auramagma, the Ever-Burning - 200 points

Backstory

Spoiler:

"I burn- as you will. As we all will, for the glory of Tzeentch!"
- Auramagma, before purportedly consuming the Wolf Lord Sven Ruddyhanded in a torrent of Warp-borne flames during the Battle of Lionshead.

Once the Captain of the 8th Fellowship of the Thousand Sons, Malagor Auramagma's overconfidence got the best of him as he dared to challenge Leman Russ in battle- sending a blast of psychic flame towards the Primarch, only for Russ's armor to reflect the blast as if it was a mirror. Auramagma was seemingly consumed in his own flames, burning inwards and outwards as he fled the battlefield in agony.

But in the millennia since, rumors of a ever-burning Champion of Tzeentch become louder and louder among the Thousand Sons- with some wondering whether Auramagma died at all.

Rules

Spoiler:

Unit Type
Infantry (Character)

Warlord Trait
-Flames of Spite

Special Rules
-Champion of Chaos
-Mark of Tzeentch
-Psyker (Mastery Level 2)

Psyker- Auramagma generates his powers from the Pyromancy discipline.

Wargear
-Power Armour
-Bolt Pistol
-Inferno Bolts

Chaos Artefact
The Burning Conduit

Crafted from the teeth of several Screamers and wrapped in the flesh of innumerable Psykers, this powerful Force Staff burns with the psychic flames of it's bearer- sending them to a utter fever pitch as Auramagma focuses his vast psychic powers through it.

S+2
AP 3
Force, Melee

Stats
WS 4
BS 4
S 4
T 4
W 2
I 4
LD 9
SV +3

Cool. Now, I almost never say this about homebrew characters, but I'm saying it here: this guy needs to be way more over the top. To live up to his awesome fluff, let him be eternally on fire and do damage every turn to non-Tzeentch models in base contact, or something. Give all his attacks Soul Blaze. Make his breath equivalent to a Heavy Flamer.

 SisterSydney wrote:

 RaptorusRex wrote:
Auramagma, the Ever-Burning - 200 points

Backstory

Spoiler:

"I burn- as you will. As we all will, for the glory of Tzeentch!"
- Auramagma, before purportedly consuming the Wolf Lord Sven Ruddyhanded in a torrent of Warp-borne flames during the Battle of Lionshead.

Once the Captain of the 8th Fellowship of the Thousand Sons, Malagor Auramagma's overconfidence got the best of him as he dared to challenge Leman Russ in battle- sending a blast of psychic flame towards the Primarch, only for Russ's armor to reflect the blast as if it was a mirror. Auramagma was seemingly consumed in his own flames, burning inwards and outwards as he fled the battlefield in agony.

But in the millennia since, rumors of a ever-burning Champion of Tzeentch become louder and louder among the Thousand Sons- with some wondering whether Auramagma died at all.

Rules

Spoiler:

Unit Type
Infantry (Character)

Warlord Trait
-Flames of Spite

Special Rules
-Champion of Chaos
-Mark of Tzeentch
-Psyker (Mastery Level 2)

Psyker- Auramagma generates his powers from the Pyromancy discipline.

Wargear
-Power Armour
-Bolt Pistol
-Inferno Bolts

Chaos Artefact
The Burning Conduit

Crafted from the teeth of several Screamers and wrapped in the flesh of innumerable Psykers, this powerful Force Staff burns with the psychic flames of it's bearer- sending them to a utter fever pitch as Auramagma focuses his vast psychic powers through it.

S+2
AP 3
Force, Melee

Stats
WS 4
BS 4
S 4
T 4
W 2
I 4
LD 9
SV +3

Cool. Now, I almost never say this about homebrew characters, but I'm saying it here: this guy needs to be way more over the top. To live up to his awesome fluff, let him be eternally on fire and do damage every turn to non-Tzeentch models in base contact, or something. Give all his attacks Soul Blaze. Make his breath equivalent to a Heavy Flamer.

Perhaps give him the option to use arcane methodologies on his Bolt Pistol that makes unlucky sods who die from it turn into S 5 AP 4 blast templates with Soul Blaze and Ignores Cover? Or a blessing that makes all enemies within 8'' inches treat it as Dangerous Terrain? A psyber-familiar that he can unleash as a 10'' S 4 AP 3 Assault 1 Soul Blaze shooting attack?

The possibilities here are numerous!

As a small note, I should make a custom wargear thread.

Steven the Parasite Engine
Functions as a Cronos Parasite Engine, in addition to the following rules:
Tender Embrace: Steven's St increases by 2 everytime that his unit wins a round of close combat. At the end of the close combat, these bonus St are removed.
"I Wuv Swaghter!": Whenever a close combat Steven is in finishes, Steven may immediatley move 6" in any direction, in search of new prey.
(Btw, Steven is painted like a bumblebee)

Shasfowd wrote:
Steven the Parasite Engine
Functions as a Cronos Parasite Engine, in addition to the following rules:
Tender Embrace: Steven's St increases by 2 everytime that his unit wins a round of close combat. At the end of the close combat, these bonus St are removed.
"I Wuv Swaghter!": Whenever a close combat Steven is in finishes, Steven may immediatley move 6" in any direction, in search of new prey.
(Btw, Steven is painted like a bumblebee)

Would probably want to be +20pts.

Also, something easier to do, and clearer would be 'At the end of each turn, for each wound caused that turn, Steven gains 1 Strength, until the end of the next turn'
So it'd be rolling bonus turn to turn.

i.e. - causes 3 wounds, +3S. Next turn causes 2 wounds, so in now +2S, then causes 4 wounds and is +4S, then following turn isn't in combat and so reverts to +0S.

Darjeeling-Sama -------------------------------- 150PTS

Imperial Guard Tank Commander

Churchill MK VII

BS F S R HP SV
5 14 13 11 4 6++

Tank, Heavy

Warlord Trait: Senshado Veteran - All tanks in Darjeelings detachment count as scoring units

Weapons:

Coaxial Heavy Stubber - Mounted along side the main 75mm cannon. If a target is hit by a coaxial weapon then any weapons mounted in the same mounting gain the Twin Linked special rule when shooting at that target for the rest of the turn

Hull mounted Heavy Stubber

75mm OQF cannon - HE Shells: R 72" S 8 AP 3 Heavy1, Large Blast OR AP Shells: R 72" S 8 AP 2 Heavy1

Wargear:

Tea - The girls of Saint Gloriana's Academy revere tea, and are known to drink it even in the heat of battle. This unit has a 6+ Invulnerable save (included in profile)

Armoured Tracks - This tank may ignore any Immobilised results on a role of 4+

Special Rules:

Churchill - Renown for its capability to cross difficult terrain the Churchill was nicknamed 'The Climbing Tank' by the Germans when they first encountered it in Tunisia. The Churchill may re-roll all failed Difficult and Dangerous Terrain checks.

Senshado Team - Darjeelings detachment counts all non dedicated transport tank units as troop choices as well as well as their usual type.

Orders - Darjeeling may use any any Tank Commander order.

Options:

May take a Pintle Mounted Heavy Stubber - 10PTS

Any other tank in the same detachment may be upgraded to Veteran status giving them +1 BS - 12PTS per model

Any other tank in the same detachment may be upgraded to a Saint Gloriana's tank giving them the 'Tea' special rule - 10PTS per model

I would allow it to dispense tea to nearby units, giving them Fearless, +1S and Ld.

Eyes-of-Smoke, the Winged Jaguar-190 pts, HQ

Background


Rules

Ignavus the High Born 100 points

Unit Composition: Ignavus, 4 Royal Guards, 1 Royal Guard Champion

Options: May purchase up to 5 additional Royal Guards for his unit. 6ppm

Stats:

Ignavus: WS 3, BS 3, S 3, T 3, W 1, I 4, A 1, Ld 4, Sv 3

High Born Royal Gaurds: WS 4, BS 3, S 3, T 3, W 1, I 5, A 3, Ld 4, Sv 4

High Born Royal Gaurd Champion: WS 4, BS 3, S 3, T 3, W 1, I 5, A 4, Ld 4, Sv 4

Equipment: Power armor (I only), Power sword (I and Champ only), Plasma Gun (I only), Master Crafted Chain Swords, Carapace armor (Guards and Champ only)

Special Rules: MOS, Cowardly (I only), High Born Wealth (I only), Loyalty to One (Champ and Guards), FNP 4+

Loyalty to One- While Ignavus is part of the unit Champ and Guards are fearless and if he leaves they must take a leadership test, if failed they fall back to Ignavus and rejoin him, also look out sirs on Ignavus must be taken when applicable

Cowardly- This character CANNOT accept challenges, and must use his own leadership when determining LD tests

High Born Wealth- One unit may be given master crafted on all of their CC weapons

Description: He is a Chaos Cultist Hero with a Reunite of Guards

Notes: Low leadership on guards is meant to represent that they don't actually care at all about the battle and their only objective is to protect Ignavus, so don't get the idea that they are cowardly. This unit is meant to be an incredibly strong unit for points cost until a few men drop dead (albeit that will be tough to accomplish) then it begins to break apart.

Elfric, Lord of Lightning

Rules:

Background:

Colonel Bradtford, the Terror of Lionshead- 85 pts

Among the ranks of the Cadian Shock Troopers, the 124th Company is renowned for their high amount of well-trained marksmen and experience in guerilla warfare. But none of these men are more storied than their commander, Colonel Bradtford- whose reputation derives primarily from the Battle of Lionshead. When the Chaos Champion Auramagma attempted to invade the Forge World of Lionshead, it was a Great Company of the Space Wolves who responded- along with the 124th.

Bradtford lead from the front, leading the 124th's men in destroying enemy supply lines, taking out high-value targets and preventing the traitors from resting easy. The 124th seemed to strike from each and every direction, with Bradtford's unerring Long-Las fire covering them the entire way. By the time the battle was over, the traitors knew to fear the dark...

One Company Command Squad in your army may replace it's Company Commander with Colonel Bradtford.

Unit Type
Infantry (Character)

Unit Composition
1 (Unique)

Warlord Trait
-Aura of Discipline

Special Rules
-Independent Character
-Senior Officer
-Infiltrate

Wargear
-Flak Armor
-Camo Gear
-Frag Grenades
-Demolition Charge

Heirlooms of Conquest

-Purging Light

Built upon a Mars-pattern Long Las, Purging Light is Bradtford's personal weapon- sending beams of deadly laser light towards his target with almost unerring precision.

Range 25''
S 5
AP 4
Heavy 1, Sniper, Master-crafted

Stats
WS 4
BS 5
S 3
T 3
W 3
I 3
A 2
LD 9
SV 5+

I like the concept of a "cold sniper" Guard hero. 95 points is way too much for him as an upgrade to the standard CCS, though. And he needs more range on that custom long-las! Also Stealth, Split Fire, and maybe Move Through cover to reflect his fluff.

I would either give his custom long-las sniper, or make it S:5. Should be taking out charactors with it. Also the suggestions Sydney made would be good. Maybe:

-Purging Light

Built upon a Mars-pattern Long Las, Purging Light is Bradtford's personal weapon- sending beams of deadly laser light towards his target with almost unerring precision.

Range 30''
S 5
AP 4
Heavy 1, Precision Shots, Master-crafted

or

Range 30"
S X
AP 2
Heavy 1, Precision Shots, Master Crafted, Sniper

Or

Range 30"
S 3
AP 3
Heavy 2, Precision Shots, Master Crafted

It just seems to need a good boost for the points.

I second Lord Blackscale's of making it a custom long-las; though in my opinion, I'd make it a Hot-shot long-las; thereby giving it the stats below:

Range: 30", S: X, AP: 3, Type: Heavy 1, Sniper, Master-crafted


Also, I would like to suggest considering making it an upgrade to a PCS instead of CCS. This would make them more expendable and allow the player to be more aggressive in its deployment.

Chapter Master Jhon Lang of the Warriors Of Krieg


(Let me know if i forgot one)





Automatically Appended Next Post:
Librarian Martin

Backround

Librarian Martin is the the head Librarian of the Warriors Of Krieg chapter. When fighting against Ahriman He was severely wounded in the right hand, in the end Ahriman was defeated and retreated to a unknown location, to this day Martin has had his hand made into a Augmetic as a reminder of his vow to kill the Heretic once and for all.[/spoiler]

Stats (Let me know if hes to OP)

WS-6
BS-5
S-7
Mastery Level- 4
I-8
L-11
T-6
2++

Wargear

Force Axe - AP 5

Storm Shield

Hurricane Bolter AP 6

Melta Bombs

Terminator Armour

Special Rules

Fearless

Mass Assault - All models within 12 inches of Martin gain 2+ attack when charging

Slow and Purposeful

(Let me know for anything else

Well it looks like I finally found the right place to post the Dirty Dozen, Gongaga, and the Entropic Eleven. I'll start with the Dozen.

You see, my brothers got the idea for these guys after we saw some special rules for Colonel Shaeffer and his Last Chancers. The idea of an elite team of soldiers operating on their own and destroying entire armies was rather appealing to us, and thus, back around 2001, my brothers started making our own teams of super-elite soldiers meant to take on entire armies and win. Thus, these guys were made back in the days of 3rd and 4th edition, so their rules are heavily out-dated, but still, I felt like I should post them.

The Dirty Dozen were imperials that had committed some rather bizarre crimes, but, like the Last Chancers, their skill was such that they were much too valuable to execute. The result is that they are frequently sent on potential suicide missions. We have such things here as a psychic vindicaire assassin, a commissar that gives even Kharn the Betrayer the heebie-jeebies, a fireproof space marine, and a weapons team that fires a tactical nuke and summons swarms of giant rabbits to maul people. Shall I post these guys then? I will provide a short explanation of each, and then give a complete rundown of their stats, weapons, gear, and special abilities. The key thing to remember about these guys is that if you use them, it's just these dozen against an entire army.

The Entropic Eleven, meanwhile, are the chaos counterpart, and feature such gems as a Khorne berzerker that follows Khorne's martial facet instead of bloodlust, a noise marine that turns units into mosh pits, and a Tzeenchian Word Bearer that imbued his lascannon. That should give you a good idea of just what sort of shenanigans this group is involved with.

And finally, there's Gongaga, the Broiler of Planets, who is not so much a who as he's more of a what. Namely, he is wildfire incarnate, a literal force of nature that burns everything in front, around, or behind him with his flamethrower, the Roaster of Worlds. His most dreaded ability however, is the ability to kill a model with a stare that could freeze beer. Don't ask me how the spirit of wildfire has an icy stare, I'm not the one that made it. XD

Anywho, shall I post these guys? If I do, it will be three or four at a time, behind spoiler tags so as to not clog up the board. If/when they are posted, feel free to comment on them.

EDIT- the reason for asking whether I should post the lot of them or not is because of just how many posts I'll be pumping out. Anywhere from six to eight, depending on how many characters I put in per post, and each one has a full profile and rules.

Post away! Spoiler tags are your friend. I've gotten 33 units and a bunch of wargear items in one post that way.

Also, @ Veteran Veteran: Mastery Level four, on a human? Yes, you're right, that is a bit much.

Hmm, now that you mention it, I might be able to get the entire Dozen in that way, plus Gongaga. So without further ado, here is the Dirty Dozen. One thing to remember about these guys as you read them is that if they are on the tabletop, then it is just the twelve of them and their transport vs an entire army. It could potentially play out like one of those action movies from the 80's. The other thing to remember is that these guys were written back in 3rd and 4th edition, and their rules reflect that.


First up, we have Zambesi Jack. He was relegated to the Dirty Dozen after he took part thwarting a chaos infiltration. He was put there in case he fell to chaos. His stats are as follows.
Next up, we have HBC, or Hot-Bread-Cut, a heavy bolter-toting space marine that joined the Dirty Dozen to come along for the ride. He wears black artificer armor with his initials on one of the shoulder pads.
Next, we have Clint Eastwood, yes that Clint Eastwood. Like HBC, he's just along for the ride.
Next up, is Techmarine Metallus Lucullus Cicero Funkhauser IV, or MLCF. He was assigned to the Dirty Dozen after he upgraded a crusader-pattern land raider with alien technology and a nitro booster. In this case, the alien tech was a wave serpent energy field.And now the land raider cruader he tinkered with...
Now, next up, we have one of the two people there to keep the rest of the Dozen in line, namely Commissar Adler. My elder brother got the idea for one of his particular rules after running the normal commissar against a squad of Khorne Berzerkers and killed about 8 with no wounds in return.
And now, Chaplain Vesuvius, the other guy that keeps the Dozen in line. His faith in the Emperor is so strong that it manifests in ways that probably make the Sisters of Battle blush. I mean, how often can you bring people back from the dead? So without further ado, here's the Chaplain.
This next guy is Azathoth, the Master Assassin. He is feared by many, and was placed with the Dirty Dozen due to hiding his psychic nature when he was in the assassin temple. He combines the skills of a vindicaire assassin with a highly-capable psycher, and is a truly frightening foe to face.
Next up, we have Arthur O'Bower, an aspiring inquisitor that was placed in the Dozen due to his powerful battle rages that happen, referred to as him breaking his band. He is meant to be a melee bruiser who can turn into a total juggernaut if you roll a 6 at the exact right time, as you shall see below in his profile.
Alrighty, we're two-thirds of the way through, so here's Lieutenant Breckenridge, an Imperial Guard Lieutenant that was assigned to the Dirty Dozen for suspicions of alien taint that arose after he replaced his right hand with an eldar one to enable him to use an ancient Eldar sword. His fighting style was also characteristically un-Imperial, emphasizing a great investment in speed.
Now, we progress to probably the strangest pair of the Dirty Dozen, Scott and John. Their crimes are preaching about how Gongaga, a being of wildfire incarnate, would come to roast everybody. Plus, their strange abilities made people think they were unsanctioned psychers. The two of them act as a weapons team, with scott carrying the bazooka, and john carrying his ammunition.
Now, here comes John, and his unusual connection to rabbits.
And finally, we have the most powerful, and easily the most dangerous, member of the Dirty Dozen: C.S. Lewis. His crimes include refusal to worship the God-Emperor of Man, and the unsanctioned use of artifacts. We got the idea for his armor save after noting how some weapons and abilities had an armor piercing value of 1, but nobody had a 1+ armor save. We decided to have some fun and change that... So without further ado, here he is...And there you have it: the most powerful penal squad ever assembled.

We probably have room another one of the loony creations of my brothers. This time it's Gongaga, the Broiler of Planets. Gongaga, to put it simply, is a literal force of nature personified. In this case, it's wildfire. He is represented on the tabletop by a catachan jungle fighter toting a flamethrower, wearing a bandanna, and throwing a stare that could probably freeze beer. Yes, the spirit of wildfire has an icy stare. Don't ask me how, but he does. Anyways, here are his stats.
And there you have it. A penal squad, a souped-up land raider, and a force of nature. The next time I post, I will have their chaos space marine counterparts, the Entropic Eleven. Feel free to comment on these guys. I always enjoy a good chat.

Well, I thought I'd wait to see if anybody had any comments for the Dirty Dozen and Gongaga before popping out the Entropic Eleven. Quite a spot of time has passed without comment, so I'll pop the Eleven down now. And sorry in advance if I'm committing a faux pas by doing this.

Well it's time to post the Dirty Dozen's Chaos Space Marine counterpart, the Entropic Eleven.

Originally, they were simply the Terrible Ten, before I added a slaaneshi member, a noise marine to be exact, to their number. The group is comprised of eleven unique soldiers and a heavily souped-up land raider. At present, the makeup includes five Khornate marines, one Nurglite, two undivided, two Tzeenchian, and one Slaaneshi.

Okay, so first up, we have Hermann DiBergi, the noise marine that cranked things up to eleven in more ways than one. One of his special rules reflects that aspect of him, as you'll soon see. He's primarily a ranged combatant, but if people get close to him? Well, things are gonna get messy...
Next up is one of the less complicated folks, a Khornate Word Bearers Chaos Lord named Widow Maker. He is best described as a walking blender in close combat. Here's his stats.And next up, we have The Gunman, an obliterator. He maintains the role of heavy ranged support, but with a bit more mobility than usual, courtesy of Boltgun Bob, the team's mechanic.Next up to bat is Boltgun Bob, the mechanic of the bunch and de-facto leader. Not because he's the strongest, but because he's the most level-headed. It would seem that sanity, relatively speaking anyways, has its advantages. It also doesn't hurt when you're the one that keeps everyone's equipment up and running. Anyways, his model is a Night Lords chaos marine sporting a double-rig of bolters. This guy's rules were difficult to write up, and his repairs rule was altered after I learned that editions had moved on to include structure points, so his ruleset reads a bit... odd.Okay, so that takes care of those three, but wait, there's more! One final thing before we move on to the next entry, and that is the Entropic Eleven's Land Raider. As befits a mechanic, Boltgun Bob has more or less gone nuts with outfitting it, incorporating an all manner of nasty toys onto it. So without further ado, here's their ride. Of special note is what DiBergi is able to do in conjunction with this thing thanks to the warp amp...Whew. That guy and the Lord of the Arcane have to be the two most complicated guys on this group. This next guy we got the idea for after my brother posed a Khorne Berzerker in such a manner that he was diving sideways through the air with a double rig of bolt pistols. Thus was born Matrix Man, the Eccentric Purple Khorne Berzerker. He's a bit like Lt Breckenridge on the Dirty Dozen, in that he's the annoying avoidance melee tank.So this next guy is supposed to be, close-combat-wise, the big cheese of the bunch. A Khorne terminator with some nasty artifacts that carry the Blood God's blessing, and a souped-up suit of terminator armor and combi-melta. So without further ado, here's Jothax.Okay, so that takes care of this lovely gent. Next up is Moses, a chaos marine that is super-sneaky and surprisingly agile with his power fist. Jothax got a free pass on the initiative thing due to his chainfist being a relic of Khorne, but Moses? His is all reflex.Alrighty, next we come to another chaos lord, this one being a Nurgle-worshipper named Zeus. As befits a servant of Nurgle, Zeus is one tough goon to put down, and has a nasty tendency to give things far worse than a run-of-the-mill VD to the enemy around him. He's so repulsive, in fact, that Boltgun Bob had to install a special negative pressure system into his armor so that he kept all the plagues and diseases inside to himself! Charming character, ain't he?Okay, so this next guy is a replacement I cooked up a while back. Originally, his place was taken up by a dreadnought that did not fire frenzy or blood rage, and ignored shaken and stunned results on the vehicle damage table. Well, I realized it was a bit silly to have a dreadnought like that along, especially considering the Land Raider they were riding around in. So I came up with a chaos raptor instead. Normally, they can't have the Mark of Khorne, but since when have I let normality get in the way of making these nuts? So without further ado, here's Bloodwing.Next up is Anubis Blacksun, the sniper of the group. Originally known as Lascannon Man when I couldn't think of a better name for him. He was originally a Nurgle marine before I got my mitts on the 4th edition Chaos codex. We then changed him to a Tzeenchian and had some fun with it, deciding that he had imbued his lascannon with some special warp trickery. What resulted is, well... terrifying, and possibly utterly gamebreaking if used right.And now, we have the last guy, a sorcerer by the name of the Lord of the Arcane, and hoo boy does he have some tricks up his sleeve. If he and Ahriman were to get in a scuffle, I dare say I'd put my money on this guy.Now, the rules for the aformentioned dragon.
And so at long last, I'm done with these loonies. Read, enjoy, discuss, have a good laugh while examining these guys, and remember: if these guys are on the table, they are all the guys you have, while the other one has an entire army at their call. All in all, it makes for an entertaining fight.

Isomelean Vhalerian, Chief Librarian of the Flesh Eaters

The Flesh Eaters are not only a dying chapter, but one nearly devoid of Librarians to guide their forces through the ever-shifting tides of the Warp. The training of new Librarians and the protection of the chapter from the soul-rending forces of the Immaterium falls to their Chief Librarian- one Isomelean Vhalerian. Luckily for the chapter, Vhalerian can reliably counted upon- being not one of the most powerful psykers, but of the ones who has mastered the power given to him.

On the battlefield, Vhalerian channels forth the spirits of the long-past IX Legion to augment his own psychic power. Constructs of blood splash into the foe with devastating force and pressure, launched from his hands. Blasts of golden light descend upon the enemy, slicing them to ribbons.

Unit Type
Infantry (Character)

Unit Composition
1 (Unique)

Special Rules
-And They Shall Know No Fear
-Furious Charge
-Independent Character
-Psyker (Mastery Level 2)


Psyker: Vhalerian always know the Blood Dragon psychic power. In addition, he may generate a additional power from the Sanguinary and Biomancy disciplines.

Blood Dragon...Warp Charge 2

Summoning forth a massive dragon-shaped construct of boiling blood, Vhalerian sends it flying into the enemy's ranks with a single unspoken word of power. The mere presence of this construct sends a wave of chilling terror into the heart of the foe, breaking any resolve they may have.

Blood Dragon is a focused witchfire power with a range of 36'''. The Target must take a Fear test with a -2 modifier to leadership; if said test is failed, the target loses a single Wound with no saves of any kind allowed.

Wargear
-Terminator Armour
-Force Sword
-Storm Shield
-Psychic Hood

Stats
WS 5
BS 4
S 4
T 4
W 2
I 4
A 2
LD 10
SV 3+

Major Grauler ----------------------- 85 points

Growing up as a ward of the lord of the Reichsberg fortress, overlooking the plain of bones the young Elise Grauler grew hardened to the horrors of war at an early age. Shrieking spectres, mobs of undead and worse things where frequently fought off by the army of the keep. Elise joined up at the age of 12, old enough to begin training with the militia and to learn the basics of combat. It was here she would have stayed if it where not for her exceptional talents and her knack for finding secrets which eventually drew the attention of the Secret Service to her.
Elise was recruited at the age of 15 in to the training of the Secret Service and by the age of 16 was a fully trained junior in the organisation. After a series of brutal missions and impressive results Elise began her rise in the ranks, going from Private to Corporal, Sargent and eventually reaching Lieutenant within the next two years of service. Eventually she was assigned to off world missions, taking small units and leading them on deadly raids before reporting back to her base. Elise, now Lieutenant Grauler, had gained the reputation for getting the job done no matter what and along with this a reputation amongst the armies of Khantonia as a brutal and ruthless leader whom was quite happy to sacrifice men and women to get her job done.
On her 18 birthday Elise was promoted to Captain and a year later she reached the rank of Major. As a gift to celebrate her old lord sent Elise a powerful pistol, created by the finest weapon smiths. The number of missions she has been sent on has grown, as has her reputation amongst the army and Secret Service. Now, aged 20 Major Elise Grauler leads constant and continuous raids against vital objectives controlled by the enemies of Khantonia.

Unlike most officers of her rank Elise has no command. Instead she has free reign to select the forces she chooses and pull them from wherever she likes in order to complete her mission. Whilst this does seem odd it allows Elise the flexibility she requires to complete her missions in the most efficient ways possible.

WS BS S T W I A LD S
5 5 3 3 3 4 3 10 4+/5++

Wargear:

Archeotech pistol - R 12" S 6 AP 3 Pistol1

CCW

Carapace Armour

Augmitter and Null gear - Enemy units may not arrive from Deepstrike within 12" of this model by any means including Droppod Assault. If an enemy unit Deepstrikes and scatters to within 12" of this model then they are automatically placed back in reserves and may come in in a subsequent turn. Droppod Assault units that scatter within 12" of this model are placed back in reserve and may arrive next turn. They still count against the Droppod count.
Major Grauler and any unit she joins Deny The Witch on a 5+

Frag and Krak Grenades

Camo Gear


Special Rules:

Secret Mission - Before the game begins secretly select one enemy unit, vehicle, character or monstrous creature and write it down. If you manage to kill this target then you gain an additional victory point. If it is still alive/not destroyed/not wiped out by the end of the game then your opponent gains the victory point.

Stand Fast! - friendly units within 12" of Major Grauler are stubborn.

Stubborn

Summary Execution

Disciplined Volleys - a unit joined by Major Elise Grauler hit on a 5+ when overwatching.

Captain Vladimir Tyrin- HQ, 135 points

Having led the beleaguered Flesh Tearers chapter since the death of their previous Captain, Nicholas Diocletian at the hands of the Tau, Tyrin ascended from the rank of Sergeant of the 1st Company's infamous "Jaws of Death" Tactical Squad Mortis. This storied squad broke through the Host of Engels's final redoubt during the Battle of Golgothix, tearing into the cultists within with a hail of chainsword strikes- turning the walls of the redoubt red.

In battle, Tyrin is a singularly powerful force- ripping through enemy lines with a single swing of his mighty Eviscerator, Jaws of Baal.

Unit Type
Infantry (Character)

Unit Composition
1 (Unique)

Wargear
-Power Armor
-Hand Flamer
-Frag Grenades

Relic of Baal

Jaws of Baal

A ridiculously large Eviscerator, the Jaws of Baal are rumored to have been wielded by the first High Warden of the Blood Angels, a rather large man by Space Marine standards. A blow from the Jaws sends the foe flying, making up for it's lack of a Power Field. In Tyrin's hands, it becomes a tornado of blows that impact with such force as to make the ground shake.

Range -
S 5
AP 3
Melee, Two-Handed, Concussive, Shred

Special Rules
-Fearless
-Furious Charge
-Rage
-Independent Character

-Jaws of Death: An army which includes Vladimir Tyrin may take a single Vanguard Veteran squad armed entirely with Bolt Pistols and Chainswords as a Fast Attack choice.

Warlord Trait
Red Rampage

Stats
WS 5
BS 4
S 4
T 4
W 2
I 4
A 2
LD 10
SV 3+

Don't know if this is necro-posting or not, but here is my submission. I don't know if the points are right, this is my first home-brew, and my first character for my WIP home-brew Codex: Steel Legion

Colonel Gunther Raddick
The 119th Mechanized of the Armaggeddon Steel Legion is under the command of the aggressive Colonel Gunther Raddick. Raddick was conscripted for the defense of Armaggeddon in the second war, and has risen from the ranks, reaching the rank of colonel and commanding the 119th in the third war. Raddick has an affinity for armored warfare, and has used his regiment time and time again to break up larger Ork formations, either distracting them with fast-probing raids or with hammer blows applied precisely where they’re needed to break up the chaotic Orks into much smaller and easier to fight groups. His finest hour came when his regiment with the support of several other units including three companies of super heavies engaged an Ork force numbering in the tens of thousands in men and with close to sixty Stompas in the ash wastes of Armageddon Secundus. Raddick used his force to his best advantage, drawing groups of Orks out of position and massacring them. Finally the Orks sent their entire group at Raddick in a massive attack, and the two forces fought each other into a standstill, with Raddick leading repeated mass charges of armor into the rk lines, during which he engaged with the Ork Warboos. The Warboss almost killed him, but concentrated fire from half a dozen chimeras distracted him long enough for Raddick to shove his Power Sword through the Warbosses eye and kill him. That combined with the arrival of four regiments that had arrived in the Orks rear as part of the Imperium force, crushed the Orks.
Colonel Gunther Raddick
Colonel Raddick is a 70 pt upgrade for your CCS. The CCS still has the normal options that it would normally have

Stats and Rules
WS 4 BS 4 S 3 T 3 I 4 A 2 W 3 Ld 9 Sv 5+/5++
Wargear 
Refractor Field
Flak Armor
Power Sword
Refractor Field


Heirlooms of Conquest
Deathmark: Before his conscription into the Steel Legion Colonel Raddick was a dabbler in chemistry, and in the field applied his expertise using the toxic environment of Armaggeddon to modify an Autogun. Unfortunately the ammo is extremely hard to make and requires hand craftsmanship which is extremely hazardous, so Deathmark remains the only one of it’s kind. It’s nickname was given to it from members of the 119th because if Raddick hits someone with it, that person is not going to live.

R 30” S 2 AP 2 Assault 3, Fleshbane, Precision Shot, Master-Crafted

Warlord Trait
Mechanized Assault
The 119th has been fighting mechanized warfare throughout both of the wars of Armaggeddon and campaigns on other world to the point that they have become experts of firing out of moving vehicles.
Once per Game drink your turn all non-heavy vehicles you control can move at cruising speed and can fire all weapons at full BS. Any passengers embarked in them can fire at full BS


Special Rules
Voice of Command
Senior Officer
Armored Commander: Colonel Raddick is an expert in fighting with a mechanized regiment, and he precisely arranges units under his direct control.

Any vehicle in Colonel Raddick’s Army can take a vox for 5pts. Any vehicle with a vox can receive orders from Colonel Raddick as if they were an infantry unit, and also get all the benefits of having a vox.

Full-Mechanized Army: The 119th is designed to be a fully mobile force, and it’s often said that the 119th spends more time on duty sitting down than walking.

Any troops choice in Colonel Raddick’s Army must take a Chimera as a Dedeicated Transport, and are allowed to even if they normally are not. So must Colonel Raddick’s squad

A very cool character, and not over the top at all. I would have to say that his points seems a little low. Comparing him to Pask, another armour commander, his benefits out-weigh the others. Pask is a 70 point character, so I think 80 points, and maybe even 90 would still be worth using this guy. Being able to give tanks infantry orders, and the increase speed to nearly all vehicles are both huge. And giving Vendettas and Valkyries orders is a huge plus. Thre twin linked lascanons with ignores cover would destroy most transports and light hover tanks. Goodbye Dark Eldar. lol

 Lord Blackscale wrote:
A very cool character, and not over the top at all. I would have to say that his points seems a little low. Comparing him to Pask, another armour commander, his benefits out-weigh the others. Pask is a 70 point character, so I think 80 points, and maybe even 90 would still be worth using this guy. Being able to give tanks infantry orders, and the increase speed to nearly all vehicles are both huge. And giving Vendettas and Valkyries orders is a huge plus. Thre twin linked lascanons with ignores cover would destroy most transports and light hover tanks. Goodbye Dark Eldar. lol

Pask is also utterly crap outside of a Punisher, and even then he is debatable

Which is why I would price the above character above Prask. But there are some others, you pehaps being one, that are better at comparing points cost than I.

Sorcerer Lord Valathrex, Master of the Void Walkers Legion. 250 Points

Ws. Bs. S. T. W. I. A. Ld. Sv
6. 6. 4. 4. 4. 5. 3. 10. 3+

Head Quaters Unit

Unit type: Infintry (Character), Unique
Special Rules: Indepentdent Character, Psyker, Mastery Level 4, Void Walking, Eternal Warrior, Champion of Chaos, It Will Not Die, Fearless
Wargear: Aura of Dark Glory, Mark of Tzeentch, Power Armour, Frag & Krak Grenades, Darkfire Projector, Claw of the Void

Darkfire Projector: This ancient bolt pistol from the time before the Heresy has been the personal side arm of the Master of the Void Cult, a small group of the Alpha Legion. This bolt pistol has been blessed by Tzeentch for the bearer is one of his most favored mortal servants.
Range. Str. Ap. type
Template. 4. 5. Pistol, Specialist

Claw of the Void: The Masters of the Void Walkers legion had discovered in their time roaming Warp Space, an unsauly growth of Obsidion-like crystals growing along their ships. These cystals were harvested from the ships and used for the consteuction of weapons for the legion. Then they dicovered that these crystal synchronized well with those of psychic power, the more powerfull the weilder, the more efficient the weapon was. When Valathrex aquired such a weapon, the Obsidian cyrstals turned color to that of the deepest purple, thus cementing his place as Master of the Void Walkers.
Range. Str. Ap. type
Melee. User. 3. Specialist, Shred, Force

Voidwalking: Valathrex made decide to Voidwalk instead of normally casting psychic powers during each of your psychic phases. If you decide to use Voidwalking, Valathrex does not count his psychic mastery level for the purposes of determing how many warp charge dice you have. Instead keep his four dice to the side for his own personal use. You may spend Valathrex's warp charge dice to activate any number of the following abilities as long as the total amount the cost of the abilities in warp charges does not exceed how many warp charges Valathrex generates.

Name. Cost. Ability
Void Speed. 1-2 warp charges. If one warp charged is used for this power, Valathrex gains the jump infintry unit type, and +2 to his attacks and initiative values until the beginning of your next psychic phase. If two warp charges were use for this power, in addition gaining the benifit of spending one warp charge, any unit that Valatrex joins or is with, gains the jump infintry unit type and does not incur the -2 inch penalty to charging through difficult terrain until the beginning of your next psychic phase.

Void Armour. 2-3 warp charges. If two warp charges were spent on this power, until the begining of your next psychic phase, Valathrex rerolls all faild saving throws. If three warp charges were spent on this power, in addition to gaining the benifit of spending two warp charges for this power, any unit that Valathrex joins has Feel No Pain (5+) and Relentless until the beggining of your next psychic phase.

Void Sorcery. 4 Warp charges. At the begining of your next psychic phase, count Valathrex's psychic mastery level as 6 instead of 4, for the purposes of Voidwalking, replace "instead keep his four dice to the side for his personal use" to "instead keep his six dice to the side for his personal use". At the end of any psychic phase in which Valathrex uses Void Sorcery, roll a D6. If the result is a 3 or higher, there is no adverse effects of the powers of the void. On the result of a 1 or 2, Valathrex suffers one wound without any saving throws, Feel No Pain, or Lokk Out Sir! Rolls.

Void Empowered. 6 Warp charges. Unti your next psychic phase, Valathrex gains the maximum benifits of Void Speed and Void Armour. In addition, Valathrex and his unit gain the Fleet special rule, +2 to their Strength and Toughness or thei armour save improves by 1 ( so if you have a 3+ armour save, it becomes a 2+ armour save). At the end of all player turns that Void Empowered is active, each model in any unit that includes Valathrex must take a Power Within Test. A Power Within Test is a test a test that requires each model to roll three dice. If the result of the three dice is equal to or lower than that model's combined Leadership and Strength values, the model has been able to keep their power in check. If the result is higher than the modle's combined Leadership and Strength values, the model is removed from play (treat it as if a Destroyer Weapon rolled a 6 on the Destroyer Weapon Table.) Valathrex may choose to reroll any number of the dice for a Power Within Test because he is more accustomed to the powers of the void.

Warlord Trait
The Void Cometh and Can Taketh Away
Valathrex and his unit is never deployed on the table during normal deployment. After Infiltrators have been setup, and after Scouts have redeployed, you may choose to have Valathrex and his unit deploy anywhere on the board that is more than 12 inches away from an enemy unit. This ability applies to any vehicle that Valathrex is embarked on. Also, at the beginning of any phase, Valathrex and his unit, in addition to any vehicle he is embarked upon, can choose to be removed from the board and set into Ongoing Reserves, this can not be done if Valathrex and or his unit are engaged in close combat. When Valathrex and his unit arrive form ongoing Reserves from this warlorad trait, they can be set up anywhere on the board outside of 12 inches away from an enemy unit. Valathrex and his unit may charge the turn that they arrive from Ongoing Reserves. At the end of the game, roll a die for each of the following: Valathrex, any units
So this is my ideal 40k character for my Void Walkers Legion of Chaos Space Marines.


So this is my ideal 40k character for my Void Walkers Legion of chaos space marines.

 Lord Blackscale wrote:
A very cool character, and not over the top at all. I would have to say that his points seems a little low. Comparing him to Pask, another armour commander, his benefits out-weigh the others. Pask is a 70 point character, so I think 80 points, and maybe even 90 would still be worth using this guy. Being able to give tanks infantry orders, and the increase speed to nearly all vehicles are both huge. And giving Vendettas and Valkyries orders is a huge plus. Thre twin linked lascanons with ignores cover would destroy most transports and light hover tanks. Goodbye Dark Eldar. lol

Thanks, I'll adjust the points cost a little, and get some of his friends on this thread as well. I may make the Armoured Commander ground vehicles only as it matches with the fluff more, but at 80 pts he would be worth it, especially considering you need 5pt voxes anc chimeras for all of your troops madatory. But thanks for the feedback

Gorlek, the Axe of Khorne- 145 pts

Having been born on a Feral World lorded over by a World Eaters Warband, Gorlek's meteoric rise to the position of space-faring Champion is surprising to say the least. The World Eaters were in no way good stewards - occasionally going on orgiastic hunts for the world's various creatures, using his homeworld's inhabitants as bait. Gorlek was a mere smith of better-than average build, tasked with forging On the day that Gorlek was to lure in a Cold One, he snapped- charging towards the massive lizard-beast in a fit of blind fury. The result- a blood-splattered Gorlek escaping into the forest and a wounded Cold One.

After that day, Gorlek and the inhabitants of his world rose against the World Eaters, storming their fortress- drowning them in bodies, as Gorlek and the Chaos Lord fought on the battlements- with the Chaos Lord haughtily doffing his armor to fight what he perceived as a inferior. This would be his first and last mistake, with Gorlek relieving him of his Power Axe and putting to better use.

Now leading a Crusade against the outer fringes of the Imperium, he rides atop his mighty Steed of Brass, Torgham. The entirety of the Flesh Eaters 1st Company's has been deployed to deal with him and his forces, but the fate of a number of worlds still hangs in the balance.

And Gorlek's time is coming, for the world of Turisas contains a large hidden cache of Dark Age-era weaponry beneath it's surface. Weapons harnessing and weaving space-time themselves, all for the taking. If he can capture it and hold it from the Imperium, the sector is his...

Unit Type
Cavalry (Character)

Unit Composition
1 (Unique)

Wargear

-Hell-plate

Thousands of interlinked plates of cursed thermoplas laden with runes of Khorne, Hell-Plate provides sufficient protection against small arms. However, it's real attribute comes forth in the form of a field that effectively denies sorcery.

Hell-Plate grants a +3 armor save. In addition, a model with Hell-Plate has a +1 to all Deny the Witch rolls.

-Bolt Pistol

-Power Axe

Artefacts of Chaos

-Torgham

The Brass Steed is a construct supposedly formed in the very depths of Khorne's realm- a growling monstrosity of brass fangs and claws that heeds every command Gorlek puts out. It's brass hide leaks the ruddy fires of the Brass Lord's great bone-forges, scorching the earth it walks upon.

A model with Torgham gains the Cavalry unit type and the Crusader special rule.

Stats
BS 2
WS 4
S 4
T 3
W 2
I 4
A 2
LD 8
SV 3+


Special Rules
-Mark of Khorne


-Fear

-Aura of the Sorcer-Breaker

Gorlek's foremost mutation is the presence of an aura that bends and snaps sorcerous weaves with ease, and it's presence is not merely limited to him. Those around him will find themselves bestowed with a similar aura. This miasma extends across his entire army, preventing those with psychic gifts from doing much in the grand scheme of things.

Units with the Mark of Khorne special rule within 12'' inches of a model with this rule gain a +2 to any Deny the Witch rolls. In addition, units within 5'' with a model with an Icon of Wrath gain this special rule.

My attempt at an Ork Weirdboy character, trying to fill the void that Old Zogwort left.

Wortface "Da Unkillable (205 Points)"

The exact origins of the Weirdboy Wortface are unknown. The Orks under his command claim that he descended from deep space in the form of a shooting star sent by Gork and Mork themselves, eventually crashing on a Snakebite infested planet. Most Imperial scholars believe he was first encountered during Zagdakka's Weirdwaaagh! on Columnus, where a Commisar claimed he tore apart a Imperial Knight through sheer psychic might. Since then Wortface and his retinue have been traveling in their psychic-propelled space hulk Psyko Star, assaulting various Imperial outposts with psychic barrages and energy.
Wortface is unpredictable in combat. It is not uncommon for him to spew a psychic power never before seen by the Orks and enemy alike, and for him to forget how he did it after the battle. He also (somewhat) keeps his wits intact in a fight, whereas other Weirdboys are merely gibbering messes.
As his nickname "Da Unkillable" might suggest, he usually turns up again after supposedly deadly encounters. He has been reported to "die" on multiple occasions. The first was after taking a Salamander Captain's power sword to the chest, next was after getting blown apart by a Helbrute's multi-melta, and then after getting stomped on by one of his own gargants. After every death, he would simply reappear months later at the helm of another Waaagh! Most believe he somehow transfers his psychic essence shortly after death, extending his life. Other Orks apparently believe this too, saying Gork and Mork don't want one of their favored champions to go just yet and they keeping stuffing his soul in another Ork's body.
Wortface often publicly discredits Ghazghkull Thraka, once infamously saying "Unless he's firin' bolts out his eyes, he ain't to prophet ta me! Only un' of us Weirdboyz can be da Prophet of Gork an' Mork!" This has obviously led to some bad blood, to the point where Ghazghkull sent several Kommando squads after him. Any survivors Ghazghkull would find were mumbling incoherently, speaking of green fire and lighting, and an ugly wart-covered face staring right at them.
It is also believed that Wortface was a Squig beer drinking buddy with Old Zogwort. These two have a friendly rivalry with each other, though when they encounter each other this can often lead to spectacular battles. They often leave the surface of a planet scared, sometimes in the pattern of an Ork skull.

WS4 BS2 S4 T5 W3 I3 A4 Ld8 Sv3+/4++
Mob Rule, Furious Charge, Independant Character, Psyker (ML3), Waaagh! Energy, Spazzoid, Da Unkillable, Psyko Powah!

-Wargear: Blinky Staff
-Can only roll your Psychic powers from the Power of the Waaagh! discipline (see Psyko Powah!)

Spazzoid: Whenever Wortface generates more than 2 Warp Charges due to Waaagh! Energy, every model within 3" of him must take a Strength 2 hit with no armor or cover saves allowed.
Da Unkillable: If Wortface is removed as a casualty, you may pick one friendly Ork character within 18" of where he died at the end of the current phase. This character immediately becomes a Psyker (ML1) and only knows the Power of the Waaagh! Primaris. If Wortface is your Warlord and uses this rule, your opponent does not get Slay the Warlord and the character you nominate becomes your Warlord along with whatever Warlord Trait Wortface previously had. If Wortface's unit dies but he survives through this method, the opponent does not get any Victory Points for killing that unit, including First Blood. Once this character dies, he cannot possess another character. If there is no friendly Ork characters when Wortface dies, then remove him as a casualty and proceed as normal. Wortface cannot possess a friendly Independent Character.
Psyko Powah!:At the beginning of every friendly Psychic Phase, the player can choose to temporarily exchange one of Wortface's powers for another. If you choose to do this, pick a one of the listed Psychic Disciplines and roll for a power as normal, but you cannot choose to exchange it for the Primaris on the table. Wortface switches this power out for his old one at the end of the phase and the process begins anew next Psychic Phase. Wortface cannot gain Psychic Focus however, so he only knows 3 powers from the Power of the Waaagh! Discipline.
1. Biomancy
2. Divination
3. Piromancy
4. Telekinesis
5. Telepathy
6. * Santic Deamonolgy
*Wortface still Perils on any doubles when he selects a power from Deamonolgy as normal.

Blinky Staff
This staff emits a raw psychic energy so potent that it'll melt the flesh off of anyone who cannot handle it's power. On the tip of the staff is the skull of a White Scars Librarian who Wortface decapitated when he sped towards him at full speed, thinking Wortface was down and unknowingly went in for the kill. The skull of the unlucky Librarian lights up in a green flash whenever Wortface gets riled up.
As a side note, the staff always reappears in Wortface's hands whenever he reappears after supposedly dying. How he finds it again, no one is certain
Range -" S+2 AP3 Melee, Two-Handed, Blind, Force


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 RaptorusRex wrote:
Gorlek, the Axe of Khorne- 145 pts

Having been born on a Feral World lorded over by a World Eaters Warband, Gorlek's meteoric rise to the position of space-faring Champion is surprising to say the least. Now leading a Crusade against the outer fringes of the Imperium, he rides atop his mighty Steed of Brass, Torgham. The entirety of the Flesh Eaters 1st Company has been deployed to deal with him and his forces, but the fate of a number of worlds still hangs in the balance.

And Gorlek's time is coming, for the world of Turisas contains a large hidden cache of Dark Age-era weaponry beneath it's surface. Weapons harnessing and weaving space-time themselves, all for the taking. If he can capture it and hold it from the Imperium, the sector is his...

Unit Type
Cavalry (Character)

Unit Composition
1 (Unique)

Wargear

-Hell-plate

Thousands of interlinked plates of cursed thermoplas laden with runes of Khorne, Hell-Plate provides sufficient protection against small arms. However, it's real attribute comes forth in the form of a field that effectively denies sorcery.

Hell-Plate grants a +3 armor save. In addition, a model with Hell-Plate has a +1 to all Deny the Witch rolls.

-Bolt Pistol

-Power Axe

Artefacts of Chaos

-Torgham

The Brass Steed is a construct supposedly formed in the very depths of Khorne's realm- a growling monstrosity of brass fangs and claws that heeds every command Gorlek puts out.

A model with Torgham gains the Cavalry unit type and the Crusader special rule.

Stats
BS 2
WS 4
S 4
T 3
W 2
I 4
A 2
LD 8
SV 3+


Special Rules
-Mark of Khorne


-Fear

-Aura of the Sorcer-Breaker

Gorlek's foremost mutation is the presence of an aura that bends and snaps sorcerous weaves with ease, and it's presence is not merely limited to him. Those around him will find themselves bestowed with a similar aura. This miasma extends across his entire army, preventing those with psychic gifts from doing much in the grand scheme of things.

Units with the Mark of Khorne special rule within 12'' inches of a model with this rule gain a +2 to any Deny the Witch rolls. In addition, units within 5'' with a model with an Icon of Wrath gain this special rule.

I like it! Flesh out the backstory a little more and you've got a pretty good character!

I honestly never made my own rule for my characters (as that may want me to play them as such...and possibly they be broken in a rules sense).

But here are my characters thus far:

Master Cavalier Grandius Aegiscoat
- Escorted by the Honour Guard: The Golden Rondel

Seer Jotun

Venerable Ancient Onmar (contemptor)

Dominion (my lucky pred)

The Cradle of Haven (my new spartan tank named after the capital world of the sector in my fluff)

Honoured Sister Aelia <--- One I made up during one of my make fluff sessions in my head

I feel you misunderstand the premise of this thread.

Kuroko1985 wrote:
I honestly never made my own rule for my characters (as that may want me to play them as such...and possibly they be broken in a rules sense).

But here are my characters thus far:

Master Cavalier Grandius Aegiscoat
- Escorted by the Honour Guard: The Golden Rondel

Seer Jotun

Venerable Ancient Onmar (contemptor)

Dominion (my lucky pred)

The Cradle of Haven (my new spartan tank named after the capital world of the sector in my fluff)

Honoured Sister Aelia <--- One I made up during one of my make fluff sessions in my head

Have you written any rules for them?

Captain Vicente Borrero - Crimson Fists 3rd Company Captain - 160 pts
WS6 BS5 S4 T4 W3 I5 A3 Sv2+

Unit Type: Infantry(Character)

Unit Composition: 1(Unique)

Wargear:
Bolt Pistol
Master-crafted power fist
Frag grenades
Frak grenades
Iron halo

Warlord Trait: Die-hard Defenders (Counter Attack and Stubborn)

Special Rules:
And They Shall Know No Fear
Chapter Tactics (Imperial Fists)
Independent Character

Hammer Blow: At the start of any Assault phase, Borrero's controlling player may opt to lower his Attack characteristic to 1, but in doing so then ignores the Unwieldy special rule for his power fist for that phase. Note that this still means he receives two attacks on the Charge and +1 attack from the Counter Attack special rule if he is selected as the Warlord.

[I]A member of Captain Drakken's command squad, Sergeant Borrero was not deployed during the Battle of Badlanding, and was one of the few marines of the Company to remain following the disastrous campaign. As the command squad was not deployed to protect Drakken, Borrero feels personally responsible for the late captain's death as he could have covered Drakken's exit. The surviving marines of the 3rd Company were attached to the 2nd Company to aid in the defense of New Rynn City. Following Pedro Kantor's eventual break of the siege, Sergeant Borrero was elevated to the rank of Captain, as he was the highest ranking member of the 3rd Company. Tasked with returning the 3rd Company back to strength, progress has been very slow. Though at less than half strength, the 3rd Company still fights on as fierce as can be. Able to channel his anger and guilt over his previous superior's death into a crushing blow, Captain Borrero charges into battle at the 3rd Company's point.

My proposed character: necron HQ on tomb blade. I see ancient Egyptains as being strong on the rapid attack from chariot theme and don't know why we don't have a necron tomb blade HQ choice.

Ffyllotek the Swift(HQ choice) 135.
WS 5 BS 5 S5 T5 W3 I4 A3 LD10 Sv3+/4++
Jetbike, Independant Character, Unique
Wargear: Twin Linked Gauss Blasters, Warscythe,
Special Rules: Phaeron of the Chariots, Fearless, Hit and Run.
Warlord Trait: Eternal Madness.

Optional Wargear:

May take either a nebuscope +2 pts or a Shadowloom +1 pt.
May take shield vanes +5 pts.
May take items from the Melee Weapons, Ranged Weapons, Technoarcana and/or Artifacts of the Aeons lists.

Phaeron of the Chariots: Whilst attached to a unit of tomb blades that deployed with at least five tomblade models, each model in the unit gains the following special rules: fearless, scout, fleet, hit and run.

I will get the lore for him when I get home. In the meantime, can anyone advise a cost for him?

Ramsus Kahran, Chapter Master of the Dark Hounds

WS 5
BS 5
S 4
T 4
W 3
I 5
A 3
Ld 10
Sv 2+

Wargear:
Artificer Armour;
Storm Shield;
Plasma Pistol;
Frag Grenades;
Krak Grenades;

Chapter Relics:

The Huntsman's Blade:
The Huntsman's Blade is a Blade of Caliban (+1S AP3) with the Instant Death Special Rule.

Special Rules:
Deathwing;
Grim Resolve;
Adamantium Will;
Independent Character;
Rites of Battle.

Warlord Traits: The Hunt

Ultramarines 3rd Company Captain Fabian 155 pts
WS 6
BS 5
S 4
T 4
W 3
A 4
I 5
Ld 10
Sv 2+/4++

MAY TAKE: Space Marine Bike for 20pts giving him T5 and TL Bolters.

Warlord Trait:
Skorcha Scars: When Captain Fabian or any unit within 12" of him is hit with any type of Flamer template weapon or weapon with the Melta USR, Fabian and affected units are T6 for that sub-phase.

Special Rules
ATSKNF
Independent Character
Eternal Warrior
Furious Charge
Stubborn
PE: Chaos Space Marines

Wargear
Master Crafted Bolt Pistol with Assault 2
Hand of Dominion
Panoply of the Crusader
Iron Halo

HAND OF DOMINION
Range -
Str 8
AP 2
Type: Unwieldy Strikedown Concussive


Fabian is a veteran of Black Reach where he had his Panoply relic melted into his very flesh by over 60 Skorchas, so far, nobody has seen Fabian's face since. To commemorate his survival and Victory, he was presented the Hand Of Dominion, a weapon crafted by Guilliman himself.

Ok, here is an attempt on Szarekh (based on http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/598806.page#6910124)

Szarekh, The Last of Silent Kings


With this, i was aiming for something different and game-breaking

Based on a Chapter Master I've been building.

Champion Master Agamemnon.

WS6 BS5 S4 T4 W3 I5 A4 Ld10 Sv3+

Weapons
Aurora Armour
Emeralite Blade
Bolt Pistol
Storm Shield
Iron Halo
Frag and Krak Grenades

Aurora Armour: Counts as Power Armour that grants the user Fear. In addition once per game the bearer may make a shooting attack with the following profile.
Range: 12", S4 Ap5, Assault D6, Blind
Every enemy unit within range is affected by this attack, but roll for number of hits per unit.

Emeralite Blade: Fashioned from a colossal gemstone found within the heart of an extinct Tomb World, Agamemnon's blade retains the razor sharp edge despite all geological analysis of such material deducing it should shatter in an instant.
S: User, Ap2, Melee, Wither

Wither: An enemy model wounded but not killed by this weapon suffers a -1 WS penalty lasting for the remainder of the game. This is cumulative across multiple assault phases.

Special Rules
In Progress

So what would you rate this guy at the moment? I'm thinking somewhere around the 200 point mark, as while he could hold his own in a challenge, he lacks a 2+ save any any decent ranged attack besides the one-shot Aurora Armour.

I feel as though he needs some force multiplier rules to buff him up abit then ajust the points accordingly. Right now I'm unsure what role he fulfils. His weapon suggests he's a challenge character but with that stat line power armour and no EW he isn't going to last long vs many of the cc big boys. His one shot armour is kinda cool but not really that effective. I can see why you'd use it for fluff reasons but it doesn't really fit with the rest of his rules or the things he should be taking on with his ap 2 sword.

 Valkyrie wrote:
Champion Master Agamemnon.

Does he not have an Orbital Bombardment?

Seems solid otherwise.

Markadous 250pts
Ws4 bs5 s3 t3 w4 i4 a2 ld11 sv3+
Plasma claw r12 s7 ap2
Plasma claw sx2 ap2 unwieldy
Warp blade user ap5 mastercrafted
Psyker lv3 false marks of khorne,nurgle,slannesh and tzeentch
Move through cover small takes half a space in vehicles
False prayer roll a die for each chaos god on a 5+ you gain a stat buff but on a roll of one you suffer d3 strength 3 hits for each 1 rolled false marks mean you can reroll false prayers but the hits are s4
Markadous was a ratman spell famillier for a chaos lord of slannesh one day while summoning demons markadous escaped into the warp where he met drago and he trained him to be a psyker and demon slayer. Now he fools chaos into thinking he is a follower and uses their power for good.