ima just throw something else into the mix here to make things really interesting

twas going to happen later but this is as good a time as any

(bringer) Gaz's body writhes slightly and from him comes a sickenting tearing sound

ima just throw something else into the mix here to make things really interesting

twas going to happen later but this is as good a time as any

(bringer) Gaz's body writhes slightly and from him comes a sicken
ing tearing sound

I let out a roar and try to scare away the "threat" as i still try to stand up

(EEEEEEEEEUUUUUUUUUWWWWWWW an alien XD thats copyright claim XD)

its not an alien

the small spider droids begin to tear their way out of Gaz's body, they are different however, they seem to have used his organic components to create a sort of muscle fibre bundle set up rather than actuators and motors for movement

Ohcrap. (So Log is still fine?)

Nicholas swears as only a sailor could match, and he fired his shotgun into the Bringer.

yeah but only just

the spiders begin to crawl over Log who is trying to swat them off, the shotgun blast knocks the bringer backwards, hundreds of tiny holes peppering his body.

I felt the pain as little pinpricks thanks to the drugs and i throw one of my knives at the "thing" that shot me. I blind rage i stand up and rush to them

the knife flys forwards but is innacurate due to the por vision you have at the moment, it richochets of the wall and imbeds itself int he ground. Nic dodges your blind charge and fires anougther shot into your gut point blank. This floors you.

Nick looks down upon the Bringer. He doesn't know what to think of the turn of events. This man who had employed him not hours was now a brainless monster... but Nick pitied him.

"I'm sorry Death Bringer..." Nick says as he fires two shots into his legs (and a third into the steroids if I see them). Nick then turned and ran off down the Vent system, leaving the Bringer to fight the droids...

nic and log sprint back to the vent system and help each other in, after a short desperate run they reach the outside.

The bringer lays in a pool of his own blood, most would have bled out by now, but not him, his body heals him and replaces the lost blood.

His body gets used to the drugs, slowly, and he forces the brute down, internally until his body is back to normal. but his mind was scarred, normal but scarred

I stand up. "OH so they just left me? Now i want ....... REVENGE"
I growl. I take out the knife and start to slice with them sharpening them even more. Then i begin ti follow the trail which leads to nic

You follow the trail as only an assassin can but you soon realise that they took the hover bikes and fled

Nic and log quickly grab the hover bikes out of the rinks and start the engines, putting the helmets on they zoom off

Hey, uhhh, sorry for being gone so long...

... can somebody give me a lowdown of what has been happening please? As I woduld be very grateful...

Hey, uh guys?

Sorry for being so long gone, as I have been revising etc at home, and would really like to get back into this RP?

So can I just ask what is basically happening?

I need to kill them. I slice with my knives in some rocks letting a little of the anger out. After that i start to follow the trail with almost superhuman speed thanks to the supernatural muscles

sorry

erm shas.... right, nothing that applies to you has happened, for you the timeline is still just after the massive millbot explodes

one of your knifes snaps

(cmon you had to see that coming)

I roar out in pure friggin anger and start running

your anger takes you after the heat trail of the hoverbikes, which in their speed has created a heat ripple over the hovermac

Keep on running but i keep my eyes open for an possible weapon for me

There are none that you can see, '

behind you you can hear a faint hissing sound, which you recognise as a hoverbike going at top speed

Turn and brace myself as i want to destroy the thing

the biker whisses past you before you can react and a loop goes round your ankle and you get yanked of your feet and dragged along the hovermac at high speed

Grab the rope with both hands. Then i set my one foot ready. And then i pull as hard as i can

you grab the rope but when you try to get your foot beneath you the hovermac pulses against the impact and flicks your legs behind you

i scream out of anger. and try to get a hold to the hover thingie. which i then will push to the ground destroying it

Nicholas leads Log back to his place using back-roads and alleyways to avoid as much conflict as possible.

(noccy) You sharply wrench your arm to one side which makes the bike veer into traffic coming the other way, The bike explodes and your momentum is reversed as you are thrown in the opposite direction

(Nic) The pair of you halt outside Nic's house

"Okay, Cruor, we need to search the Millbot and the area around here for anything of interest, or good use."

I roar in victory and rush to look for the scent of nic

"Welcome to my house Log. Make yourself at home... If you don't have any other place to stay at, feel free to stay here."

Nick walks over to his computer and looks at the news to see what's been happening on a larger scale.

(Noccy) The biker has taken you wayof course and the heattrail and scent have both been lost.

(Nic) The computer boots up and the news feed is opened, the city has been overrun by sleepers and strange droid soldiers that seem to be working in concert with them

I try to follow my own scent back to the point where i can find the one of nic

Any news on the Oracle? - Or what the government (however it works) wills the citizens to do?

(noccy) not enough of it remains

(nic) the oracle has gone into hiding and he tells his people that they must fight for their freedom, these sleepers mean to enslave us... those who survive the droids.

I think its still enough for an direction ?
I follow the direction searching for hints.
(Btw the bringer has no command but the one who can bring him in crio stasis has a powerful mercinary. But the ones who he holds a grudge against are so hugely feth

"Log, I think its time we left the city... it is by far the most dangerous place we could be in right now. Let's grab any survivors that want to come with us, and let's go. Go into the basement and grab my canned food," Nick says pointing to a door. - "I have a call to make."

Nick picks up his phone and dials Mike's cell...

Tyranic Marta wrote:(noccy) not enough of it remains

that would usually mean that not enough of the scent remains?????

Mike picks up on the first ring, "Where the hell have you been?"

(Uhhh, post please...)

Ok then i start for the direction it last went because i can remember to XD so i run back to the last know place of their trail

"Long story, I'm not completely sure what happened. Anyways Mike, I'm leaving the city and I need you over here now. Bring anything you might find useful, and gather any survivors willing to come."

(Marta, I think we could use a 2nd wave of people like you got in Stone.)

it would help.... alot

hmmm, i would like to ask you all kindly if you could attept to recruit some more people

this thread is losing its focus and im beginning to loose faith in it..

Its been wrenched of course from where i wanted it and im unsure of how to bring it back which is worrying me as a DM

Would like some feedback as I have enjoyed writing the RP but its ended up as one of the ones that im not all that into...

m considering bringing this one to a close but opening a more modern RP, one based on events that could happen in the next few years (2011+) and using more modern concepts

will let this feedback session run its course before continueing the thread

and shas im sorry but like i said in previous post (providing this thing doesnt frigging auto amend) im losing track of where to take this thread... thinking about starting the different one and bringing this to a close, everything is feeling overpowerered from where i wanted to take it and ive had to make new maps etc that i want origionally going to use

Railroading is the answer to getting us back to the story (or just going with it and use improv)
If you can railroad correctly, your players won't even know what's going on.

I think you should open a new thread saying that we need players, that way you can get the attention you need from the RP-community.

You could also post something in all your other RPGs saying you need players for this one.

railroading?

*shock*

Railroading is where you lay one path for your players to take... plan so matter what they do, they end up where you want them.

... the problem is that stuff has happened that i wanted to save for a while, like the arrival of the new weapon types for example. Its kind of ruined things for the thread. -.-

Then these ones are broken because of manyfactory mistakes XD

-.- yes because humanity is still making the same maufaction mistakes they made 70 years ago

Sure why not XD

because after the incident there was a huge demand for efficient cheap manufacturing that would eliminate wastage of materials.

so mistakes are normal and thats why everything is unusable now XD (dude i already needed to sleep 2 hours ago bu i want to know what happens in stone XD

ok right, sos

typing up the new RP which i hope you will all join, ive streamlined it so that OPness is practically impossible, the RP will be called "Bloodshed in Utopia" so stay tuned and you may very well see it

So this thread dies?!????

... I dont want it too... i really dont, but it has lost its appeal to me as a DM, all i see is a couple of people being chased by an overpowered monster and a player character in his own timeline who seems to be doing well but hasnt advanced far in like a month