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somewhere over the atlantic

Is this any good so far?
http://jaggedjaw.blogspot.com/

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
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What?

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somewhere over the atlantic

the stuff on the link. is it any good so far?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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jaggedjaw wrote:Shinobians
government type:democratic dictatorship
tecno vampire


If Hitler, Osama bin Laden, and you were in a room together, and I only had 2 bullets, I would shoot you twice.

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somewhere over the atlantic

...WHAT?
i dont get it?


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also why?

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Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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jaggedjaw wrote:Is this any good so far?
http://jaggedjaw.blogspot.com/


No

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somewhere over the atlantic

why?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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I could count off all the ways this is in the wrong section, the wrong forum, and just awful in general, but...
Ostrakon wrote:
jaggedjaw wrote:Shinobians
government type:democratic dictatorship
tecno vampire


If Hitler, Osama bin Laden, and you were in a room together, and I only had 2 bullets, I would shoot you twice.


This just works so well. Also, inbeforelock and all that good stuff.

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somewhere over the atlantic

how is it awful?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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Porto

That's quoting material right there.

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somewhere over the atlantic

HOW IS IT AWFUL?


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and yes that is good quoting material.


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ok. can you please explain how it is bad so i can fix it? also Stalin would have fit in better.

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Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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Boston, MA

Since nobody else will, I'll bite.

Your blog is awful for a number of reasons. The half-baked fluff for your own army is lousy. Redundancies like "The Empire is one of the oldest reaming Empires" are ridiculous. Your writing quality is abysmal and fraught with spelling errors. The graphic design of your site is ugly and eye-searing. You've got colors and this bad MSPaint tri-sword emblem in the background, and none of it looks good or cohesive in any way. The formatting is also really hard to read and I don't know what I'm looking at.

Also, everyone and their mother has a wargaming related blog these days. If yours has nothing to contribute, it's just more wasted webspace.

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Shadow War? What is this Babylon 5?

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It's so bad that it honestly defies explanation. Rampant typos, horrible names, blatant ripoffs of other intellectual properties... you should feel a profound sense of shame. You have raped Fiction, and forced her little brother Setting to watch as you manhandle her. You taped this debauchery and sent it to her cousin, Game Mechanics.

You should take the site down and delete all of its content, if only to prevent yourself from committing suicide upon rediscovering your forgotten works. Your hands have wrought an atrocity.

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Boston, MA

Amaya wrote:Shadow War? What is this Babylon 5?

Nah, but it reads like bad fanfic.

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somewhere over the atlantic

...well how else would you phrase that?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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The man who created "Time Cube" thinks your site makes no sense.

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somewhere over the atlantic

ok I changed the back ground.
How should I rewrite my fluff then?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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My god, its full of stars.

And not the good kind.

The abuse of greatness is when it disjoins remorse from power

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Oh wow, now I wish I hadn't clicked on that link. Tecno vampire? Democratic Dictatorship?

What the hell?....

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somewhere over the atlantic

What do you mean Zygh?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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jaggedjaw wrote:...well how else would you phrase that?


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somewhere over the atlantic

ok I'll explain some things
1.The Empire has an Emperor who has the last word in all decisions, however, the people elect councilors to represent them and I couldn't remember what you called that type of government so i just put down Democratic Dictatorship.
2.Twilight already ruined vampires. Im just trying to sci-fi them. Also Vampires were a playable race in the first edition of Rouge Trader so please stop bringing it up.

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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Boston, MA

jaggedjaw wrote:ok I changed the back ground.
How should I rewrite my fluff then?

Now it's an ugly green. Lovely. The three swords logo is also really poorly done. It's literally the brush in MSPaint, which is the lowest common denominator. Draw it on paper and take a picture or rip a similar graphic from somewhere, just don't make it look like three red sticks intersecting.

As for rewriting the fluff, try something not quite so... cliched I guess? It's all very familiar, and not in a good way.

Really, this isn't news or rumors. It's more like skeet shooting.

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jaggedjaw wrote:ok I'll explain some things
1.The Empire has an Emperor who has the last word in all decisions, however, the people elect councilors to represent them and I couldn't remember what you called that type of government so i just put down Democratic Dictatorship.
2.Twilight already ruined vampires. Im just trying to sci-fi them. Also Vampires were a playable race in the first edition of Rogue Trader so please stop bringing it up.


Rogue, please. Major pet peeve.

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The abuse of greatness is when it disjoins remorse from power

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somewhere over the atlantic

I get it. it was bad grammar.
actually dominion sounds cooler than Empire.
Which should I use?


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...What are you saying Zygh?
opps. sorry im not good at spelling.

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Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
Made in us
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jaggedjaw wrote:ok I'll explain some things
1.The Empire has an Emperor who has the last word in all decisions, however, the people elect councilors to represent them and I couldn't remember what you called that type of government so i just put down Democratic Dictatorship.
2.Twilight already ruined vampires. Im just trying to sci-fi them. Also Vampires were a playable race in the first edition of Rouge Trader so please stop bringing it up.


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somewhere over the atlantic

what?

Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
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It doesn't matter what you use. Your work is going to be extremely generic unless you rebuild it from scratch.

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somewhere over the atlantic

wait what? I've been thinking about this stuff for over 5-years! I'm just now putting it down since i dont want to forget any of it.


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ok.
the Cyber Wolves Gopper, Underground, Jaharens, and Tecno Vampires are newer but all the other stuff has been thought about for along time.

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Fields of War is a fantasy turn based strategy game that uses the innovative command system in place of more traditional turn structures.
http://fieldsofwar.blogspot.com/ 
   
 
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