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All right, Wolfhead, let's go. Off to the firing range with you.

<psst, gimme one of those 'special' lho sticks and I'll make sure I use blanks>

Okay. Pvt maa, i have 2 targets for you. 600 meters with a 3 inch target above their heads. good luck.

I am almost finished with the next chapter

Post it!

Here it is!









Nate grabbed the railings in front of him and held on tight. As the ship shuddered violently Nate heard a clink and a cry of dismay. Turning his head he saw Jenkins chasing after an amasec bottle that had fallen out of his pocket.

“H-h-hold on too th-th-that r-r-ailing!” hollered Maa
As soon as the words left his mouth, the ship gave an almighty lurch and flung the occupants of the firing ranges across the room.
The world slowed down as Nate was flung through the air and saw the upside-down ghili-suited form of a sniper turning to look at him and recoil in surprise

“!”

SLAM!
Nate was laying on some sort of course material with leaves stuck to it, opening his eyes he noted the dog-tag three inches from his nose it read ‘JayneKateBob.’
Nate was puzzled ‘what kind of parents would name their son, ‘JayneKateBob?’

“Ahem” came higher than normal voice.

“Huh?” said Nate.

“Get off of me.”

Turning his head Nat beheld a glaring visage.
“Sorry sir, lost my footing” he said as Russki helped him up. “what was that lurch anyway?”

JKB regarded him coldly. “I have no idea” he said and walked off.

“Well he was friendly” muttered Russki.

“Yeah, I guess that’s what comes with big muscled guys.”
“What?” asked Russki.
Nate gestured in JKB’s direction. “Either he’s got huge muscle’s under that shirt or he's got huge man-boobs.”
Behind them there was a shout of triumph, as Jenkins found his amasec bottle, and hurried over.

“Hey what-” said Russki before Jenkins shoved an extra beer bottle at him.

“huh?” was all Nate could say before Jenkins handed him one as well.

“What’s all this?” asked Russki.

“contraband.” Hiccupped Jenkins happily while taking a swig.
Nate looked over at Russki, who shook his head furiously.

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“And then I said to him...I…I…I forgot?” mumbled Jenkins as Nate and Russki guided him unsteadily towards the hab deck.

“Boy, muttered Russki, as he got a better grip on Jenkins’ left arm, “what did he have for lunch, bricks?”

“Maybe a space marine.” Grunted Nate as he dragged the all too heavy drunk back to the platoon hab.

Russki adjusted his grip on Jenkins’ shoulder again. “You know, I- what was that?”

“What was what?” asked Nate

“It sounded like… gunfire.”
Nate strained his hearing as they turned the corner “I don’t-AHHH!”

A small squad consisting of five ork ‘boyz’ was rooting through the platoon’s hab deck. Jenkins was dropped on the floor, as the other two troopers went for their las-rifles.
Nate sprayed a trio of las-bolts at the ork coming at him which was wielding a massive ‘choppa.’ the ork flew back howling as the bolts connected with it’s arm and blew bloody holes in it.
Russki managed to blast one’s chest plate off but the ork got up again, snarling.
Before it could do anything though, there was a loud rumbling, and the orks disappeared in spurts of blood and viscera.
Whipping his head around Nate saw Pfc. Bex rush in and chamber another autogun mag.

At this point Jenkins sat up. “What I miss?”


It hath been posted!

love it! still think you should have a seperate thread...

Separate thread but with a link on the report & background.

is purple still not updating?

is purple still not updating?

is purple still not updating?

sorry triple post:(

I have exams soon so i am revising for them.
After the 22nd i'll start writing more of the backgorund story.

SOrry purple, i should have told people this i do apologise

No worries.

Oh exams Yeah those are a pain

i did have a whole one. MCQ.

i do love doing a degree

hlaine.larkin wrote:i did have a whole one. MCQ.

i do love doing a degree

I'm on A levels right now...
God i hate them...

yeah a levels sucked. i did a biology paper that asked about seals...

I have biology on the 22nd...
Though i think i did a different exam board than you so different questions methinks...

this was a january question anyway, good luck!!

Thanks.

I like the story, haha. I'm only sad I'm not in it :(

Which story?

The...good...one?

I wanna shoot something.

I never thought of what JKB's dog tags would say. That's gold.

<snickers childishly - tee-hee man-boobs>

Goddard wrote:I like the story, haha. I'm only sad I'm not in it :(

all you have to do is request an appearance for your character and I'll add him in (provided his appearance doesn't conflict with purple's story)

can i appear please? preferably single handedly killing everything...


it's sad actually ,i never get to fight.

Our commander doesn't fight?! *faints*