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HQ
Commander
+powerfist

Epistolary
+ Fury of the Anciants

Troop
10 Tactical Marines
+plasma cannon

10 Tactical Marines
+plasma cannon

10 Tactical Marines
+missle launcher

10 Tactical Marines
+missle launcher

10 Tactical Marines
+missle launcher

Fast Attack
5 assault marines
+2 flamers

5 assault marines
+2 flamers

Heavy
Vindicator

10 Devistator Marines
+2 missle launchers
+2 plasma cannons

10 Devistator marines
+2 missle launchers
+2 plasma cannons

Any help or sugestions would be much appreciated and valued. i am sitting at 1832 total points and thinking of giving my devistators tank hunters or something, but not sure yet. Overall I am going for a shooting army but yet isnt as vunerable in melee thats why the assault squads are there to stop incomming units or at least hold them for a turn or two. this list is unplaytested but will be in the next day or two. I am planing on a tornament this weekend and hoping for a decent attempt this time. I need critisism well just anything to make this list better.

I like that you focused on template weapons but Im thinking you may need one dedicated unit of infantry to handle CC - or a few dreadnaughts

The lone vehicle will get blasted quickly. Without the POMS, it will have little chance of firing, ever. A Land Raider is the wiser choice if you will only have one vehicle in the list.

Get jump packs on those characters ASAP.

One of those 10-man ML tac squads can be geared for close combat. Get a vet w/ pf and a meltagun or flamer in there.

Yea thanks for almost instant feed back guys. thats almost identical to what another post I put up on Bolter and chain said. I would like a bit more insight on your thought process about the changes to help me understand the changes more.