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Don't get all defensive with your build, it's a discussion for **** sake!

Dreads behind the LR could work.

Your troops need more maxing out. And possibly your Terminators.

Redeemers aren't great. Couldn't you run your Assault Terminators behind a Land Raider. Up the wounds a bit in the squad by dropping the Redeemer. Lash could be a problem, but being behind the LR means you won't really move anywhere you dont want to (which is closer to the enemy)

Also can't you attach attack bikes to normal bike squads? I.e. 1 bike + 2 attack bike w/Multi-Melta, it'll help you spread some wounds around. Yup i'm a bit newb to SM codex lol.