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This is my first list so please give as many suggestions as you can. Thanks.

HQ

Big Mek - KFF, Burna, 'eavy armour, cybork body, boss pole

Big Mek - SAG, cybork body

Elites

11 Burnas

10 Lootas

Troops

25 Shoota Boyz, 3x Big Shootas, Nob w/ PK, Boss Pole and 'eavy armour

25 Shoota Boyz, 3x Big Shootas, Nob w/ PK, Boss Pole and 'eavy armour

12 'Ard Boys, Nob w/ PK, Boss Pole and 'eavy armour, Trukk

16 Gretchin w/ 1 Runtherd

Fast Attack

4 x Deff Koptas w/ TL Rokkit Lanchas

15 x Storm Boyz, Nob w/ PK, Boss Pole and 'eavy armour

Heavy Support

Battle Wagon, Deff Rolla, 3 x Big Shootas and stick bomb chukka

So the plan is two have a fast flank with the 'ard truck boyz, battle wagon with burnas and KFF Mek and stormboyz running up while the shootas grab mid points and the rest stay back for support fire from distance. I know it splits the force up more then I would like but the games I've played so far point to that happening (point capture and all seeming to happen often).

So give me thoughts, I'll let you know I alrwady have the wagon, coptas, a bunch of boyz and the KFF Mek.

*shakes his head sadly*

There is so much wrong with this list I can't even settle down to critique it properly aside from telling you this:

Your plan to have a fast flank with two vehicles while your foot-slogging troops run up the middle and your deffkoptas....stay in reserve? Stay back as fire support?

You have only two vehicles; they're going to absorb 100% of the enemy anti-tank and be ended. Worse, you're splitting your army into three parts. Any of those three pieces can be eaten by itself without having to worry about retribution from the other two parts since you haven't discovered combined forces.

All I can really tell you at this point is to decide what kind of army you want to play. If you want a fast army, stormboyz will do it for you, but there's no point taking 15 when you can take 20. Maximize your units; take 15 Lootas or leave them at home.

And a lot more. =p

ok lets see lol
1. good all lootas or burnas. if you go with burnas you to give them a ride

2. you can only take 1 big shoota for every 10 boyz. so at 25 boyz you can only take 2.

3. 'eavy armor is a waste of points on a nob in a unit of boyz. the boyz will be taking all the wounds and not the nob.

4. i have never tried ard boyz but i dont see the 4+ save being worth the points.

5. orks work best at max numbers!

as Dashofpepper said you need to find one single theme for your army and run with it.

I should have noted:

There are several Ork army lists at the top of the page or near the top of the page here that you should read and read the comments on; I've written pages in some of them, and its infuriating to no end to write 3 chapters about how to improve an army list, then someone else asks the same question and you answer it again, and then the same issues arise again, and again, and again...

Please man....don't blindly post a list asking for a critique; read some of the other lists around here and the other comments that have been made; if you're going to ask for help, at least be courteous enough to read the help that's already been given.