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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 13:32:12
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Sniping Gŭiláng
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Guys,
Looking for feedback on my recent nid paint jobs, recently built and painted up a Zoan, Venom and a Broodlord n' i'm pretty happy with the zoan and broodlord, though not finished the venomthrope just yet.
Built up my own scheme, theming it towards a poison army with the majority of gaunts and stealers using poisoned weapons.
gallery at: http://www.dakkadakka.com/core/gallery-search.jsp?u=26818
Zoan
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This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2010/04/18 13:38:51
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 13:33:58
Subject: Re:Looking for feedback
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Regular Dakkanaut
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pictures would help..
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 13:40:41
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Sniping Gŭiláng
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Put in link for the gallary, and put up the zoan... no point linking everything imo.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 13:59:21
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Revving Ravenwing Biker
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It's different, but I like it - especially the brain bit
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 14:15:44
Subject: Re:Looking for feedback
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Bounding Black Templar Assault Marine
Crusading deep in the Eastern Fringe.
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Did you use gloss varnish? If you did, then I like it. It makes the zoan look all slimy and disgusting.... just the way it should be.
Good job. I envy you.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 14:24:44
Subject: Looking for feedback
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[MOD]
Anti-piracy Officer
Somewhere in south-central England.
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Painting technique is very good.
I'm not convinced by the combination of green carapace and bright orange-red-yellow tail. The red introduces too much variation into your overall colour palette.
I would get rid of the orange-red and make the yellow a duller colour, and move through a yellowy-green down into the tail instead of the orange red. The red mouth works fine though.
Just my opinion, I am colour-blind so treat it with caution.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 14:50:53
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Decrepit Dakkanaut
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Concurred on technique, you gots skills as they say.
The colour choice I am not fond of, it reminds me of a fruit salad or a tropical fish, less 'venomous' and more 'decorative'.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 16:11:04
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Fleshound of Khorne
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Kilkrazy wrote:
I would get rid of the orange-red and make the yellow a duller colour, and move through a yellowy-green down into the tail instead of the orange red. The red mouth works fine though.
i agreee with this, i REALLY like the blue on the brain with the green body / head.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/18 23:20:06
Subject: Re:Looking for feedback
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Slippery Ultramarine Scout Biker
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This is just amazing piece of work...I really love the slimy effect. Nice job
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they fear discovery
defeat, despair and death!
Yet there is one thing they fear above all others.
They fear the wrath
of the
Space Marines...!!!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/19 00:09:09
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Morphing Obliterator
The Frigid North of Minneapolis
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i love the brain, and your techniques in general (though not a huge fan of glossy, but i can see why some people like it)
but... i don't think the orange-ish and green go well together. this is jsut basic color theory - i think they clash. i don't really like orange for any purpose, and i think the green is working with the blue, so i'd change the orange if i were you
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/19 00:51:27
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Sniping Gŭiláng
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I've removed the orange from it and put it to a green and blended it back into the tail, yet to remove the orange from the back the feathering is a pain to repaint...
The carapace on the head is not actually high gloss, the flash has made it look like it, but its basically flat black paint.
Will put up a new picture tonight.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/19 01:06:33
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker
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Looooove the green affect. I'm not sure about the orange - doesn't look bad, but it really pulls your eye away from the head region (Which personally I think should be the focus, especially given how good it looks).
Good work though!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/04/19 01:54:53
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Auspicious Skink Shaman
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Good job on the model....really like the shine to it from the gloss....makes it more alien....bug like.
I do agree about the tail....try using the combination of rotten flesh and a very subtle brown...maybe even desert yellow
Hope to see more
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/05/19 07:46:46
Subject: Looking for feedback
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Sniping Gŭiláng
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Necroing this...
took me a little bit to take another photo...
Decided to give basing a bit of a go, first time.
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