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Anyone?

Are you actually looking for helpful advice, or do you just want someone to tell you that your plagiarised ideas are cool?

You're in the right place for the former - but you're not going to find the latter.

If you geniunely want help making it better, re-read the posts from the people who've taken their time to give you geniune, constructive advice and pick out specific examples from the 40K fluff which you could use...