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I approve. I am kitbashing a blood apostle army. (Cultists/zerkers/ Apostles) all khorne with custom vehicles.

I'd read over it again/get someone else to go over it. Some odd problems with tenses.
Also I prefer to post 2nd/3rd draft stuff, even if all I've changed is spelling or the wording of something. It helps get rid of mistakes or bits that don't work all that well.

I can see the influence - The Word Bearer novels really got me to take another look at them.....

Look forward to more