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Mutated Chosen Chaos Marine







I'm kind of an amateur painter/modeller. Here's a Chaos Space Marine Aspiring Champion I painted for my Renegade Chapter the Ecstasy Lords. So yeah. C&C appreciated.







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Terrifying Doombull





Hefnaheim

Damn, that is one nice looking model, And if your a "amature" painter I would like to see your painting when you become a profesional painter. Keep it up
   
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Mutated Chosen Chaos Marine







Trondheim wrote: Damn, that is one nice looking model, And if your a "amature" painter I would like to see your painting when you become a profesional painter. Keep it up


Thanks for the comment, that guy took awhile to paint.
   
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Combat Jumping Tiger Soldier






Great Falls, MT

He looks awesome.

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Hardened Veteran Guardsman





Medford, MA

Yep, good My piece of advice though: try to be a bit lighter on the amount of paint you apply, to avoid the "blob" effect

And consider getting some dark wash, or making it yourself (not that difficult), it will bring some magic to your painting :p


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Perfect Shot Black Templar Predator Pilot






Newport News, VA

Hes pretty good. But a lot can be done here with just a few simple things, try to add some washes to the bone and armor to bring more depth to the model. Also I would consider to thin down the paint you use, some of it seems kinda chunky. I noticed you have more of a drybrush style you are going for, I would try to use less paint on the brush. Over all I think with just a few tweeks he can look even better. Happy painting!

 
   
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Screaming Banshee






Cardiff, United Kingdom

You need more effective layering methinks, you kind of get away with it on the main body but the trim just looks out of place... you should put a darker blue down and then layer and highlight above that with progressively lighter tones.

You may want to thin your paints a tad too, looks like they were performing a little clunkily.

On the bright side, your power weapon looks better than anything I have ever produced

   
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Monstrous Master Moulder





Essex,, England

Also, I would reccomend painting the armour joints black, looks awesome.


 
   
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Automated Rubric Marine of Tzeentch





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Mutated Chosen Chaos Marine







Thanks for the comments, I'll try to slightly dilute my paints with water form now on. Also, I'll post in your conversion thread Sam.
   
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Fresh-Faced New User




Thin your paints, use a color wheel, shade your models to give them depth. Keep painting.
   
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Judgemental Grey Knight Justicar






All I can say is use a smaller brush and try to keep your hand still when painting.

Its very messy. You got green on his gun and the base coat (black) is still showing under the green.

sorry to be harsh but you do need alot of practice. i personally is not a proffessional paint nor had lots of experince but the only 2 models I painted had attracted alot of attension in my local Games workshop for no apparent reason what so ever. I think they looked rubbish but people thought they were amazing for one simple reason. They were very clean and tidy and sharp. basicly detailed, I did not try to do fancy high lighting just the basic colour and a wash but I spent 4-5 hours on a model just to get all the paints nice and tidy.

If you can spend more time and make it tidy it should look good no matter what.
   
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Daemonic Dreadnought





Derby, UK.

Looks good. Try chucking some washes on the armour (green wash on green armour, blue on blue armour etc etc).

it will add a lot of depth and definistion to the model.

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