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Ok so I've been working on these armies right an ig and spacemarine but im not using them like that they are more of a mercenary group from this planitary system marines being the heavier versions and I use them in apoc as allies and such. But I wanted some help on the fluff because im not great with it but its esential to doing my army is for me knowing where and who they are. I need help with names of planets, systems, and just the fluff. So this system they live in has 7 planets 1 large space station and a sun. The first is named _______ its a lava planet home to a large mining facility and prison. The second is the desert planet named ______ it is mainly used by criminals to hide out on its a poor planet in minerals and such but is home to some milita. The third is a more mountain-es planet similar to Rohan with wide open plains, its name is _____ they have a large weapons facility on it and some security companies. the fourth is a swampy planet called _____ they have some munitions factories but for the most part its just small villages. The fith which is where my army hails from is a forrested planet called ______. Its home to the primary government to this system plus it has some tank factories and other vehicle plants, its where the primary of the airforce is located but each planet has their own. the sixth is a more mountan-es snowy planet called _____ its similar to alaska as in it has oils and other usfull minerals plus its home to some religious societys who like the isolation. the final planet is a very barren ice planet called ______ which has no usfull materials but houses a large military training facility. The space station is the main port from this system to its neighboring systems and it houses many of the mercenaries main command points.

Rogue Wolves wrote:Ok so I've been working on these armies right an ig and spacemarine but im not using them like that they are more of a mercenary group from this planitary system marines being the heavier versions and I use them in apoc as allies and such. But I wanted some help on the fluff because im not great with it but its esential to doing my army is for me knowing where and who they are. I need help with names of planets, systems, and just the fluff. So this system they live in has 7 planets 1 large space station and a sun. The first is named carcere its a lava planet home to a large mining facility and prison. The second is the desert planet named Scelaratis it is mainly used by criminals to hide out on its a poor planet in minerals and such but is home to some milita. The third is a more mountain-es planet similar to Rohan with wide open plains, its name is collis-camposque they have a large weapons facility on it and some security companies. the fourth is a swampy planet called lustrum they have some munitions factories but for the most part its just small villages. The fith which is where my army hails from is a forrested planet called Taelion. Its home to the primary government to this system plus it has some tank factories and other vehicle plants, its where the primary of the airforce is located but each planet has their own. the sixth is a more mountan-es snowy planet called Nix-Fridgida its similar to alaska as in it has oils and other usfull minerals plus its home to some religious societys who like the isolation. the final planet is a very barren ice planet called Sterillis which has no usfull materials but houses a large military training facility. The space station is the main port from this system to its neighboring systems and it houses many of the mercenaries main command points.

Hope you like the names, just transalate the main features of the planet into latin and see the results.

YOU ARE THE BEST!! thanks so much this is perfect!

I'm curious as to how SM fit into this...
You mentioned them and i can't figure it out.

they arnt actually space marines i just wanted a sm army so they are just going to be heavily armored ig you'll understand when im done the prototype and post it

Dang, I was going to go with:

1. Mustafar
2. Tattooine
3. Naboo
4. Dagobah
5. Endor
6. Ruusan
7. Hoth

ha well Musrafar and Tattooine are what those 2 planets are based off of rather obviously though