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Looking for critiques on a list I wrote for my friend. Standard GG death star.

I think the Cairn Wraiths may serve better as characters but Army Builder hasn't updated their rules, and I'm not sure if they would remain the same points as characters.

Vamp Lord hides in Skeletons while giving his WS to the Regen, +1 to hit Grave Guard with Great Weapons. So hitting on 2's and wounding on 2 or 3 in most cases.

Critique the hell out of it.

Vampire Lord w/ lv3, Flayed Hauberk, Talisman of Pres., Helm of Command, Summon Ghouls,
Ghoulkin, Lord of the Dead, Dark Acolyte
440

Necromancer, Corpse Cart, Dispel Scroll, Invoc, Raise Dead, Danse
185

Wight King, BSB, Great Weapon, Shield, Drakenhof Banner
235

25 Ghouls w/ champ
208

25 Ghouls
200

20 Skeleton Warriors w/ Command
180

25 Grave Guard w/ Great Weapons, Command, Banner of the Barrows
400

5 Black Knights
120

1 Black Coach
200

1 Varghulf
175

3 Cairn Wraiths
150

Army Total
2493

Get 2 Wraith heroes instead of a unit of 3. Saves you points, works better.

No block larger than 25 means you'll be spending time in combat before you can break steadfast.

I'd drop the knights for 15 more ghouls. Run a block of 30 and a block of 40. Go 5 wide, and you can threaten to break steadfast from round 1. Deploy wraith heroes in with ghouls, on the inside. That way if you combine charge with the grave guard, when you split frontage, the wraiths help block RnF attacks.

-Matt