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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/12 17:43:23
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Waaagh! Warbiker
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/12 19:27:03
Subject: Re:Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Perfect Shot Dark Angels Predator Pilot
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I think that's the first black templar I've ever seen with OSL, I love it man. Great job on the brighter areas that are closest to the blade.
Also I hate to bring this up but...there's a giant mold line on the legs...
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Attention all space marine bashing neckbeards: Nobody cares what you have to say, so stop trying and go cry yourself to sleep. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/13 04:05:27
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Dakka Veteran
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The helmet needs some more highlights by the light sorce
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/13 05:16:00
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Blood Angel Chapter Master with Wings
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In order for OSL to be convincing, the source of the light must be MUCH stronger than the glow it casts. Right now, they are the same color, in fact the blade may be slightly darker... You are almost there, but the blade needs to be much brighter to create a truly convincing effect.
Great start though!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/13 05:52:50
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Sneaky Striking Scorpion
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MajorTom11 wrote:In order for OSL to be convincing, the source of the light must be MUCH stronger than the glow it casts. Right now, they are the same color, in fact the blade may be slightly darker... You are almost there, but the blade needs to be much brighter to create a truly convincing effect.
Great start though!
This. Down to the punctuation lol.
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3,500pts 4,000pts 150pts lol
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/13 11:59:20
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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You also need to rework the white on the shoulder pad. You've used a dark blue to blend the lighting into the black, but this effectively shades the white, which spoils the effect. Light behaves additively - a light blue on white / grey will tint it toward blue, but it will still remain 'white'.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/15 01:29:25
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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You are on the fast track to what I hope to one day achieve.
Excellence in the making.
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Why is it that only those who have never fought in a battle are so eager to be in one? |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/15 12:31:10
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Widowmaker
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Looks pretty good, except I'd rework that shoulder pad to try to make it more subtle.
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2012- stopped caring
Nova Open 2011- Orks 8th Seed---(I see a trend)
Adepticon 2011- Mike H. Orks 8th Seed (This was the WTF list of the Final 16)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/15 13:36:42
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Decrepit Dakkanaut
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MajorTom11 wrote:In order for OSL to be convincing, the source of the light must be MUCH stronger than the glow it casts. Right now, they are the same color, in fact the blade may be slightly darker... You are almost there, but the blade needs to be much brighter to create a truly convincing effect.
Great start though!
I was going to say that, so Ill just agree with it. Your attempt is far better then when I tried it  so your definitely on the right track. If you look at the reflection around the chest piece compared to the weapons glow, it seems fake, because its almost brighter then the weapon. So brighten up the glow, and dull down the reflection more and youll be rocking.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/15 20:32:34
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Gargantuan Gargant
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I agree with both MajorTom and winterdyne. They explain perfectly why the effect really works from some angles, but doesn't make much sense from others, as well as why the shoulderpad is, I think, the weakest of the affected areas.
As a test, it serves its purpose, though - there's room for improvement, but you have some promising groundwork and a distinct area or two on which to focus as you refine your technique.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/08/15 21:44:14
Subject: Re:Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Hellish Haemonculus
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I think it looks great, since I thought your OSL effect was an actual effect from actual lighting.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2012/02/27 10:36:41
Subject: Marine with OSL-(PIC HEAVY)
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Stabbin' Skarboy
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Dude, I love this, tutorial? Automatically Appended Next Post: Sorry for the threadromancy btw
I just realised :(
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2012/02/27 10:42:46
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