3rd batch of word bearers!!!

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**Hugs-for-the-Hug-God**

Hey guys! I finally finished my dreadnought and lord for my word bearers, i`m not gonna use the dread in game though, here are my 2nd batch:http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/389972.page

Hope you like!:

C&C please! Thank you for your time.

-ben

**Element206**

I really like the smoldered appearance. Nice work

**Hugs-for-the-Hug-God**

Thanks!

**Rogue Wolves**

Not bad black wash seems to have taken a few of the colors away though

**lunarghost**

Yeah you might have over-washed a bit, But i really like the flames, the yellow may need another coat here and there, but it's definitively improving.

**J'santai Khan**

Let's start with mold lines. Nothing KILLS a great paint job faster than big, fat mold lines. Take a minute, grab the hobby knife/file and get rid of them.

Color scheme is Great, but it looks like you need to slow down a bit and work on brush control (black/yellow stripes, for example). Lay off the black wash a bit to preserve your colors. Try a brown wash on the red, then do the flames, after you re-highlight the dark red areas. Use the black wash for the metallic areas.

You're on the right track, so keep at it!

**Gunhead**

The purity seals are a neat touch. Was real wax used? The flames are pretty rad too.

**kain3883**

HOLY CRAP YOUR DREAD IS ON FIRE!