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njal stormcaller (245)

4 wolf guard w/ 4 combi meltas, 4 powerfists (172)
5 wolf scouts w/melta gun (85)
5 wolf scouts w/melta gun (85)

7 grey hunters w/melta, standard, rhino (155)
7 grey hunters w/melta, standard, rhino (155)
7 grey hunters w/melta, standard, rhino (155)
7 grey hunters w/melta, standard, rhino (155)

5 long fangs w/ 4 missile launchers (115)
5 long fangs w/ 4 missile launchers (115)

which leaves 67pts left

Personally, I'd drop one of the scout packs and kick the GH packs up to 8 men each, maybe even 9.

Njal's nice, but he's a tad too expensive for this bracket, IMHO. Unless you're really set on him, drop him and use the savings to buy two vanilla Rune Priests. Give both of the Priests Choosers of the Slain, and one of them melta bombs to satisfy the wargear requirements.

Is there any particular reason why your Long Fang packs have only 5 men in them? Even if you don't make any of the other changes I've suggested, you've got enough points left over to make each of them 6 men strong with 5 missile launchers in each pack.

Fairly standard SW list to be honest, nothing really original, but it's a strong list.

With your remaining points I'd give the scouts a plasma pistol, meltabombs or their own WGPL so they aren't relying on a single BS4 melta shot, whilst I'd drop at least one of your Grey Hunters meltas to flamers or plasma; you really don't need that many melta guns at 1500pts in most environments.
Finally, make 2 rhinos dedicated transports for the Long Fangs; aiding you in DoW games.

As I said, it's competitive, if nothing new IMHO...