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Made in gb
Irked Necron Immortal




gravesend kent

As Ruprekh the Undefeatable, Phearon of the Mavelance dynasty stepped foot on Tretradis, he new that the tomb world of the sharvosk dynasty had met an untimely end before they awoke from the great sleep. Surrounded by his royal guard he waved his hand to signal his forces to stop in their tracks, Kralevv the destroyer lord slowly moved along side Ruprekh along with his triarch praetorians. A growl, unnatural and other worldly suddenly sounded out from the other side of the collapsed tomb structure and in the distance 3 huge creatures where flying towards them at great speed Ruprekh launched orders for the annihilation barges to bring them down and even though crackling bolts of tesla shots hit the creatures, they maintained there composure and carried on. As a great bloodthirster landed in front of Ruprekh and Kralevv and launched a vicious whip strike straight at the Phearon, laughter erupted from Ruprekh as the strike left no more than a scratch, then both Ruprekh with his guards and Kralevv with his preatorians charged the greater daemon of khorne just for the creature to crush the lychguard and knock the Phearon on his back, as Kralevv and the preatorians struck the creature with minor blows, they where just swatted to the side like flies. Ruprekh got back to his feet and dug his feet into the ground as the bloodthirster charge lifting his great axe, though before anything could be done, Ruprekh swung the scythe of the old ones lopping of the daemons head as it burst in flames and returned to the warp. Mean while the daemon prince wielding a sword, dripping with blood jumped into the annihilation barge as it reigned tesla fire on the former mortal champion of khorne, it tore apart the quantum shielding and living metal and let out an almighty roar, it was greeted with gauss fire from the phalanxe of immortals it was sucked back into the warp with a rage blacker than night. Though from that portal that sucked the daemon prince back in chucked out a horde of plague bearers. Not wasting time, the immortals charged into the daemons swinging there huge gauss blasters as the plague bearers, just as slow as the necrons lunged there rusted blades into the immortals reducing them to scrap piles just for them to reanimate back. The soul grinder, that burst through a tomb structure charge into the combat as it crushed few remaining plague bearers it swung it's huge claw wiping out immortals here and there. Soon night scythes flew above the battle teleporting immortals out, and they began blasting apart the plague bearers that trundled towards them, the soul grinder carried on crushing immortals just as suddenly he blew up in cloud of fire and daemonic faces, Kralevv opened up the daemon engine using his warscythe and let out a battle cry for the remaining immortal to rally and charge the over run tomb structure, though as the battle carried on the was only one thing keeping the daemons int the mortal world, scarrage spineripper, the bloodthirster that led the daemonic assault land right on top of Ruprekh crushing him to pieces and just as the daemon was about let out a cry of success the overlord stood back up good as knew. "just dieee!!!!" cried the bloodthirster as he charged Ruprekh who paced forward and swinging his scythe, caught the greater daemon of khorne who just got angrier and as the daemon swung his axe destroying Ruprekh, he cried in frustration again as the Phearon stood up again and as scarrage raised his huge axe, Ruprekh dives into the chest of the bloodthirster using his scythe to banish the huge daemon from Tretradis. The daemons fled back into the warp and with a silent weapon raise from the nobles of the Mavelance dynasty Tretradis was re taken to be a core world for Ruprekh.

6th ed w/l/d
=3000pts 39/19/2
The Mavelance Dynasty=4000pts 28/42/6

short stories:
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/558468.page
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/558967.page#6170866
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/559971.page 
   
Made in au
Terminator with Assault Cannon






brisbane, australia

awesome
never seen any necron fic
2 things
1/ I have a problem with this. at the moment it is a brick of words, you should use pargraphs, or sentence then new line.
2/ also, can we expect any more?

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Made in gb
Irked Necron Immortal




gravesend kent

thanks for the advice i will be using paragraphs and better structure and well if you enjoyed reading this then yes i will do more hoping others will enjoy it like you have

6th ed w/l/d
=3000pts 39/19/2
The Mavelance Dynasty=4000pts 28/42/6

short stories:
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/558468.page
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/558967.page#6170866
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/559971.page 
   
Made in au
Terminator with Assault Cannon






brisbane, australia

 necronspurs2012 wrote:
thanks for the advice i will be using paragraphs and better structure and well if you enjoyed reading this then yes i will do more hoping others will enjoy it like you have

Nice!

*Insert witty and/or interesting statement here* 
   
Made in gb
Irked Necron Immortal




gravesend kent

http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/558967.page#6170866 my latest story

6th ed w/l/d
=3000pts 39/19/2
The Mavelance Dynasty=4000pts 28/42/6

short stories:
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/558468.page
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/558967.page#6170866
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/559971.page 
   
 
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