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HQ 895
Knight Commander Pask with LR Vanquisher w/Lascannon x3 505
Tank Commander with LR Eradicator x3 390

Troops 540
Veterans with Grenadiers, Plasma x3, Chimera 185
Veterans with Grenadiers, Plasma x3, Chimera 185
Veterans with Grenadiers, Melta x3, Chimera 170

Heavy Support 565
Hydra x3 210
Wyvern x3 195
Deathstrike 160

Not sure how effective this list will be, but it looks like fun to play with!

The only thing that doesn't look super crazy fun is the Deathstrike, what about some Scout Sentinels?

It looks pretty fun!

I would drop the Chimeras to Taurox and drop grenadiers. Possibly drop the 3rd special weapon only take it if you have spare points. Though consider Demos on the Melta squad.

I'd drop the Hydras for Wyverns. Wyverns are brilliant they kill a unit a turn, Hydras just can't do their job. Compare with the Space Marine one for the same points. The Marine one is Bs4 AV12 on the side, not opened topped and can split its fire to shoot 2 different targets with 4 shots each all for the same points!

This all frees up 145 points. You want Relic plating on your command tanks 3 points to give 500 points 5+ DtW protection is a no brainer. Then up the 2nd command to same config as first that leaves 24 points. Up Pasks buddies to Executioners so you can take advantage of PE to reroll their gets hot rolls.

Now you have hugely more firepower and no change in survivability. You'll lack AA but that is a weakness of this codex. Perhaps swap some Vanquishers to Punishers to pay for this or get some Primaris Psykers (or both). Also probably use spare points to chuck boltguns on the Vet Sergeants. Well worth it for 1 point.