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The cage of Stain

Recently,the 2nd company has found a space hulk,designated Stain,when the marines boarded the hulk they founded several suits of artificer armor in good shape,suits which had Fire Wraiths insignia and liveries,seeing this as a sign of the Emperor the marines proudly arranged the transport of the armor to their Strike Cruiser Delius.During the transport,enhanced hearing of the Captain Adelais sensed the filthy advance of orks to their position.Adelais quickly alerted his men and had prepared them for the coming battle,he called Delius for reinforcement and the cruiser informed them that they too were under attack by the orks,steeling himself and his men for the incoming battle he said inspiring speech that fortified the hearts of his men and which assured him that they were not going to fall without fight.When the orks finally reached the marines,they were a shadow of the foe that Fire Wraiths expected and in a short battle orks perished under the might of the marines.

After the battle Adelais counted his men and founded that none of the twenty marines was harmed.Meanwhile on the Delius,2nd company chaplain Rave aided men in both ways,spiritually and physically.Although the marines had many advantages,the orks had number to counter anything.As the twenty marines advanced to the Strike Cruisers they had founded no resistance,except for some hapless gretchins which stumbled on their way.While the orks pounded on the marines on Delius,Adelais and his marines attacked from back,outflanking the orks.Warboss Zhazkul charged at "da shiniest hummie" which was unfortunately the captain.When those two beigns met they fought with great ferocity and strength.As the power sword and power klaw clashed,both marines and orks watched the duel as they fought each other,Adelais would always get close to the warboss head hoping for some miracle to gave him a blow to the xeno head,while the Zhazkul charged mindlessly on Adelais.As the duel wore on,Adelais was struggling with Zhazkul who grabbed and lifted him into air,Adelais quickly waved his sword on Zhazdak thus cutting his wrist of his left hand,thus dropping him from air.Zhazdak was angry that he got defeated by a "hummie" so he went bezerk and charged at the captain hoping for the opponent's death,instead Adelais grabbed his power sword and with one swing brought the giant ork on the floor.Adelais now held the warboss at his mercy,not wasting time he pulled his bolt pistol and fired many shots into the xeno's head and his body and after so many bolter shells taken the warboss looked like a collection of green mass and pieces of metal.

Orks were heavily demoralized and fled the marine's wrath.Suit of the artificer armor were recovered undamaged and sent to Tertacia,while the Stain and crafts that attempted to fled the Delius were annihilated by it's guns.
The artificer suit was founded to belong to former chapter master of the Fire Wraiths and for his part in recovering the suit,Adelais was rewarded with a ornate chest piece which was a work of art.

IvanTih wrote:What's the point with the red color?It's not chaos and he's not Huron Blackheart.

Er...dude...I never said that he was Huron Blackheart and I don't recall mentioning that he was from Chaos... All I'm saying is that he looks to bright red.

Imperator Ira
The ancient power sword is a symbol of office to any chapter master of the Fire Wraiths and only the chapter master can wield the sword.Imperator Ira was forged somewhere in M38 by the Ultramarines and given to the Lacias,the first chapter master of the FIre Wraiths and because of it is even more revered by the marines.The sword is highly ornate,inscribed with holy runes to weaken anything chaos,hilt of the sword is encrusted with several gems and painted in silver.The blade itself is of such quality that is very difficult to replicate through most of the Imperium.
Imperator Ira is seen as a relict of the chapter and as a link to their past and any marine would charge at any enemy to reclaim it and that led to the Ira's hunt,the hunt for the chaos lord Vaerd who managed to slew the chapter master and get away with it,the quest led entire chapter with it who were filled with unspeakable rage and hate.Fortunately for the chapter the chaos lord wasn't far form the planet on which he committed the heinous act and they reclaimed it in a costly battle.

Sorry for necromancy,please don't lock it.
New scheme for Captain Adelais of the 2nd company since others complained that it was too red.

I wish C&C for the fluff I've written.I think that certain parts suck while others are better so let me hear.
The Darkness aproaches
In the closing years of 41st millenium the event know as a Firestorm crusade happened.Seeing increasing numbers of enemies of the Emperor ravaging the Dalix Sector Artemis,the Master of the Fire Wraiths said that the sector won't fall to the heretics and xeno and shortly after the Fire Wraiths embarked out of the Tertius system and proclaimed that they would set the enemies of the Emperor to their graves.Only the battle-brothers of the 9th and 25 veterans of the 1st company remained to guard their holdings.
Artemis ordered that the chapter would be split into 4 battle groups each consisting of 2 companies,only the 4th company would be given the task of pacifing rebel world of Ecdia Tertis which was suited to the size of the company.
Defending the entire sector would be hard task,but the Fire Wraiths would not yield so easly.Their Strike Cruisers and Battlebarges flew to every place that was in the grasp of heresy and invasion.


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Anybody?

Does anyone want to review my chapter?

Moved to Dakka Fiction at user's request.

Opened a poll.

I like your fluff about your chapter, but I didnt read it all, but what I did read seems good.
intersting stuff, but lots of spelling mistakes but i cant be bothered to point out besides I am bad at spelling and writing myself so yeah i will stop going on about that.

where did you get the picture for working out what colour scheme you would use.
I think your captain would look better with a darker red IMHO.

Commissar Agro wrote:I like your fluff about your chapter, but I didnt read it all, but what I did read seems good.
intersting stuff, but lots of spelling mistakes but i cant be bothered to point out besides I am bad at spelling and writing myself so yeah i will stop going on about that.

where did you get the picture for working out what colour scheme you would use.
I think your captain would look better with a darker red IMHO.

Spelling always ruins me I'll try to correct it in future and the color scheme came out of my head.

im not sure you understood, i mean the picture/diagram so you could design your colour scheme.

i think there are too many colours on the colour scheme but i would quite like to see an actual model to see how it looks.

Commissar Agro wrote:im not sure you understood, i mean the picture/diagram so you could design your colour scheme.

Bolter & Chainsword space marine painter.
http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/index.php?s=b92f81357160977787e904489ba8bd56&autocom=pages

thank you, much apreciated.

I'm not much of artist,I can draw good,but when it comes to painting I suck.

If I make an army out of them,Chapter master would have the same characteristics like a normal codex one,but the power sword would be master crafted and it would strike at S 7.
Sergeant Huron chainsword would count as a power weapon.
First company captain Fist of Wrath weapon would also be master crafted and melta weapon in it would have a range of 6".
Everything else would be normal.

What parts of the fluff do you dislike or love?

Veeeery messy, i think you should use edit post instead of writing a whole new one, nice do

You should paint these schemes!