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Made in it
Guard Heavy Weapon Crewman




Italy

Shaman wrote:

"Inflict damnation then offer salvation." (this one is my favourite.. because it has them causingthe problem (blackmail))

The best i could do if you don't like any of them you just have to explain it some more.




It's very good
You've helped me to understand that English is not a synthetic language , in Italian I can use few words, they sound well, like a poem

I think I can edit the draws

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/05/23 20:48:04


   
Made in au
Lethal Lhamean






Hey cool.

Glad I could be of service.

EDIT

Just read though the comic start to finish..

1 problem I found was page 26,

"Our fury surprises the xenos. We manage to push back them... It should be "we manage to push them back".

Also thank you for the end credit. But it is wrong, it should be "Kilian J made it possible."

Anyway thanks for that, Happy to help.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/05/24 16:29:30


 
   
Made in it
Guard Heavy Weapon Crewman




Italy

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA xP

I've read this link
http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=293373
and.. it's not righttt


I'll correct them quickly...

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/05/24 18:13:57


   
Made in au
Lethal Lhamean






No worries.
   
Made in it
Guard Heavy Weapon Crewman




Italy

Shaman wrote:No worries.


I've also correct pages 14 and 21, small things, in the first I've written fuking without c , in the second I've forgotten a sentence

also..pag 31 has to be corrected.. but is too long to do.. I 've written "a incurable" .. an ... And I miss to write "Note: ", once.. maybe I'll correct another time

I'm in debt with you!! If you need help for your draws (but you are better than me ) ask me!!

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/05/24 19:46:55


   
Made in au
Lethal Lhamean






No worries I'll definitely enlist your help when the time arises.
   
 
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