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The Sanctioning lore annoys me because of its vagueness, but I understand why it's meant to be vague. I drew upon what I knew from the various fluff sources, and tried to create the best composite image I could.

Regardless of any negative comments I think you're doing an amazing job of capturing the "40k feel" and writting an excellent story. And I'm only part-way through! Keep up the good work.

I'm thinking of putting this story on hiatus and starting a new one until I get more inspiration. I think I probably should have ended it at around where I put the Inquisitor's note at chatper four 's beginning, but be that as it may, I'm not dropping it entirely yet.