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Cool. This is shaping up nicely

It is, and we are of the same kind of mindset, of course I can't write any fluff resembling of good without demons and Dark Eldars. They are now the enemies of my premier chars. You have actually changed my fluff, and that's a good thing, as the crazy aspects are kept out.

I comment and give advise at once if I like the fluff, and I would welcome the same as well.

Nice

That's what this thingy is for in my mind, to warp our ideas. Now I'm trying to unite Carrus' anguish, the Freudakian 81st., the Harrikian Penal-Legion, a paedo-priest, a 7yo girl which Carrus find innocence soothing and secondary char-development into words. Ionza will play a key-part in the part with the priest, and I'm playing with a Navigator might getting demon-possessed as well, or Dark Eldars trying to get slaves. It doesn't end well for the priest or the girl, who is the captain's daughter.

Sounds like an intersting and detailed plot.

If you want me to weave any of your plot into mine, just say how and its done.

Thanks.

Well I mentioned my desire to have Carrus spar against Havelok. Carrus can be totally dominated in the fight with the human bomb, after telling everyone to get lost as he has his wife and kid to protect (Ionza is preggy by then with his firstborn kids), and he he can get your assassin to expend his ammo while he is out of ammo for his melta and can only hope the vox, will carry the code-word which would deactivate the Eversor. It's okay if you demurr and dismiss it.

I like. How should the chars meet because at the moment my Evesor is prowling the rooftops.

Oh they would meet somehow, it basically is Carrus leading his men through the rubble of Tanibus Alpha. Carrus think he is destined to rule it, the Eversor is of a slightly different mind, and is berzerk of course. He slaughters some of Carrus' commandos. Carrus tells his men to get lost and engages the crazed killer, fending him off with his flawless defensive fencing, while hoping he can get the word to get the killer to rest in time as he know he is a walking nuke. That's basically how I think it would happen. Of course Carrus would have to use creativity to get the killer right, and dodges more often than not.

Good, good. I like. It could have Carrus on the vox with Castuas who gives him the codeword. Oh and how should the fight be written? Will it be entirely within my story or partialy in yours?

Sounds great, I'm all for it, just make sure he kick ass and ain't too subservient to the berzerker. And also I sort of want him to decline Scout-Captain Thomas Smith's request to do it for him, due to Carrus having too much to loose, and he knows he is dealing with a walking nuke thanks to Harken.

Cool. I should have it done sometime tommorow.

Sounds cool, I look forward to reading it.

(Writing it now) Can you please give me a breif description of Carrus so I can accuratly describe him in the fight.

Yo yo i'm writing it, description please! And weapons of choice.

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Read the first piece of the First Action, there is him and his weapons of choice. But lets say the melta is empty, so he doesn't just evaporate the assassin, he has fought heretics and Dark Eldar all day so his insane amount of rounds for his holy meltagun (400 rounds, contained in 20 containers of melta-ammo, and he for some reason think is a 16 kilo pistol) a fact he often makes fun of himself. For weapons, well I can see him using one of his many monofilament knives hidden under his commissar greatcloak, in conjunction with his powered sword, in order to fight defensively utilizing blocking, dodges and sidestepping to avoid the assassin from ripping him to shreds. As for the guy, he and his wife's creed is plumbum ex umbra (lead from the shadows), so he shouldn't really be easy to find at any battle due to his nifty cloak often turning him invisible.

As for the late answer, sorry I went to sleep.

Thank you. Look over at my story if you have a spare moment, it has begun.

I agree, this group looks like a very promesing one indeed. I will make a point of mentioning your dear eversor, and the sergant at one point. Ihope you will return the favour, and that we can agree upon not killing the characthers of the others. Without having agreed upon it in advanvce

Seems fine therobotlol, would maybe exchange the plasma guns with meltas due to Carrus' affinity with meltas.

Also he would likely pull the troopers back and not sacrifice them due to his belief that the assassin is a walking nuke, and would likely yap some orders about that over the vox (in a crude way, involving frakking of course), plus ordering the vox-operator to contact the vessel on his code-words

Yeah you are right Trondheim, we must not kill each other's chars if they meet. I could see Carrus and Ionza meeting Loki and Augustus. The difference in faith would be very apparent as the couple only worships the Emperor much in the same way as Conan the Barbarian worships Crom.

Good to hear you agree with me, And Beaviz81. I demand your feedback!

I like your fluff Trondheim, though I usually like best to read how the regiment is out of battle as much as in battle. I love to go deep and see the traditions a regiment have out of battle, how the discipline is, what vices and virtues the troopers possess. That's make the fluff for me, but I'm a follower of the rule of having like three chapters of peace for every of war.

Beaviz81 wrote:I like your fluff Trondheim, though I usually like best to read how the regiment is out of battle as much as in battle. I love to go deep and see the traditions a regiment have out of battle, how the discipline is, what vices and virtues the troopers possess. That's make the fluff for me, but I'm a follower of the rule of having like three chapters of peace for every of war.

Hmm good point there, and thank for liking my fluff. I will try to do that after the hive is taken