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So no matter what I say you will take it exactly the same?
I'll be honest I am tempted to write exactly what I think but it's probably best I don't.

Because I do have opinions to give, I'm just worried that you'll immediately designate them 'flaming' and it'll be wasted effort to type them.

And better not to get a 3 day ban or so purplefood.

 Gryamauch wrote:
If you can't handle constructive feedback, pack up your pad and pen mate, writing fanfic for the public eye is not for you. You've got to remember that you're writing in someone else's universe. It's like the Matrix before Neo came back to life: rules can be bent, but not broken.

He won't pack up his pad and pen... he'll just go post it on Heresy Online like he did this story (which is a great thing, don't just sit there post to 1 spot). But the tastes of Dakka and the tastes of HO are different and he has gotten plenty of 'atta boys', whereas here he gets critiqued in such a fashion that if he took some of the concerns into consideration he'd get atta boys from us too...

He's on Heresy Online as well is he? Well...now I'm tempted to post some of the legitimate criticism from this thread over to his...I had an account there before I migrated over to Dakka we shall see...