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So I have recently started painting my chapter and am having a hard time naming them now that I am playing them. So my theme I would like to have is a chapter that is themed around being founded to root out corruption and Xeon threats. They were secretly founded for the inquisition and trained by the Ultramarines and befriended th Salamanders when some went on a crusade during training. I'll add more to the fluff after you critique the name and bases. So I like the word phrase righteousfury and want them to see the throne as the almighty. Also would it be possible to be granted a forge world which produces plasma weapons and has hive cities. They would have a mountain base on the nearby moon.

Possibly in future I want to ally an IG unit. They would be pulled from the planet to help serve their "gods" in war. Please help me out on if the name is ok/taken and how it sounds. Can help me fluff the background or tear it down

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I see people looking. At least comment on if name is cool or taken or better names please.
   
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Inside your mind, corrupting the pathways

You posted at 2am UK time and on Friday night US time... Give people a chance

As it is your background is a bit special snowflake - quite a lot of powerful people and groups involved in forming a super secret special chapter with its own forge world who are worshiped as gods by the locals.

I would suggest that they are a instead a chapter founded by the Salamanders (which is rare as they are a small chapter), who operate around a forgeworld in the path of an work waagh or tyranid hive fleet. The forge would therefore supply them with weapons and probably a place to base their fleet. They would possibly also work with the local guard and PDF forces.

As tyranids employ stealer cults to infiltrate populations the chapter may work with the inquisition.

I would certainly tone down the whole chapter as gods thing... The only god allowed is the emp and the chapter would be purged if they went around getting worshiped

   
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 SilverMK2 wrote:
You posted at 2am UK time and on Friday night US time... Give people a chance

As it is your background is a bit special snowflake - quite a lot of powerful people and groups involved in forming a super secret special chapter with its own forge world who are worshiped as gods by the locals.

I would suggest that they are a instead a chapter founded by the Salamanders (which is rare as they are a small chapter), who operate around a forgeworld in the path of an work waagh or tyranid hive fleet. The forge would therefore supply them with weapons and probably a place to base their fleet. They would possibly also work with the local guard and PDF forces.

As tyranids employ stealer cults to infiltrate populations the chapter may work with the inquisition.

I would certainly tone down the whole chapter as gods thing... The only god allowed is the emp and the chapter would be purged if they went around getting worshiped


Oh I like it. The only thing I was trying to go for was the fury or wrath out into the name? I like the story with the warmongers being very black and white and would like the chapter to be judging of others/do as what needs done. Kind of like inquisition. I do like how you say base fleet in path of something. How's the name?
   
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Inside your mind, corrupting the pathways

Emp's Wrath sounds better to me of the two options.

   
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 SilverMK2 wrote:
Emp's Wrath sounds better to me of the two options.


I'd go with that too.

Oh What a Lovely War. 
   
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Emperor's Wrath just finished off a small warband of Nurgles sickest. Typhus included.
   
Made in gb
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You can't just kill Typhus, as he is needed by Abbadon for the 13th Black Friday, so you might want to just say that Emperor's Wrath destroyed a small Nurgle Warband and took their ancient technology back for the Imperium.

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