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Made in ca
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Guelph Ontario

happy to help

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Made in us
Mutated Chosen Chaos Marine







Mynameisalie, does your race have any flaws?

Here, I'll give an example of other races' flaws.

Imperium of Man---Backwards, bigoted, and dying.
Craftworld Eldar---Arrogant, rare, and dying.
Dark Eldar---Psychopathic, arrogant, rare, and dying even faster than Craftworld Eldar.
Chaos Space Marines---Impulsive, psychopathic and daemonically manipulated.
Daemons---Intangible, impulsive and often insane
Tyranids---Mindless, unfeeling and sociopathic.
Necrons---Soul-less, unfeeling and sociopathic.
Orks---Psychopathic and idiotic.
Tau---Oppressive and naive.

   
Made in us
Deadly Dark Eldar Warrior





Flaws are good. All races need flaws.

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Made in us
Confessor Of Sins




WA, USA

Little writing tip for you on the subject of flaws.

They are just as important, perhaps even more so, than the strengths. Put as much time, thought, effort and care into them as everything else.

 Ouze wrote:

Afterward, Curran killed a guy in the parking lot with a trident.
 
   
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Lynx--- Reckless, impulsive, ten not to think things through very carefully, and often kill themselves by forgetting their shields aren't that powerful.

Just a quick overview.

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Made in ae
Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit





They have a really stupid dogged belief in their own invulnerability sometimes.

Currently attempting to put together a homebrew non-canon Space Marine chapter. If I can be bothered to getting around to painting the models and putting the things together of course... 
   
Made in nl
Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings






North of your position

 Mynameisalie wrote:
They have a really stupid dogged belief in their own invulnerability sometimes.

both versions?

   
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Civils.
Ferals are more wary. And they don't like strangers.

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Made in us
Confessor Of Sins




WA, USA

Those weaknesses are pretty lightweight.

Recklessness is pretty meh, I don't see how that defines their entire race, especially since you want them buddying up with the Imperium and the Tau. Recklessness and also really good friends? Yeah that's not working.

Impulsive is pretty much the same thing.

And same with the shield thing.

All you've done is say the same basic thing three times. And not once do they really match up to the serious flaws at the heart of other big races.

 Ouze wrote:

Afterward, Curran killed a guy in the parking lot with a trident.
 
   
Made in ca
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Guelph Ontario

The thing about each race's flaws is that they are on a cultural level, not just on a battlefield level.

Lynx over relying on their shields in combat doesn't automatically equal "everything in this culture is over relied on."

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Junior Officer with Laspistol





Desperado Corp.

And they're not exactly consistent with what you've said about the Lynx. Reckless, for example. They're taking the diplomatic approach and trying to be everyone's friend. Fine. But a reckless race would just go balls to the walls "we'll fight you and if we win we win. If we lose we're dead, so meh." Reckless is Orks, and the Black Templars/ sisters when there are heretics/ xenos/ psykers about, and even then it isn't merely "reckless", it's "Crazed zeal".

In short, reckless, the Lynx are not.

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Made in gb
Barpharanges







Yes, and reckless is commonly more of an advantage in 40K and already applies to the following;

The Imperium
Chaos
Orks

These are three major groups, and the three are incredibly reckless.

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Ok, I'll give it a think. But there is one that they are very prone to.
Over-confidence. They are far too confident in their own abilities. They believe everything they do is perfect, and cannot be improved upon any further. Thus, the Lynx's society and battlefield tactics will never improve.

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Made in us
Confessor Of Sins




WA, USA

If they believe they are perfect then why the heck are they allying with anyone? Much less worshipping the Emperor?

If you want this route, then allies are not going to be allies, you are going to have them sneering down at other races and essentially manipulating them. Which, kinda like you've gone before, is very very Eldar.

 Ouze wrote:

Afterward, Curran killed a guy in the parking lot with a trident.
 
   
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Worshipping the Emperor?
That was discarded ages ago.
Many ages ago.

Currently attempting to put together a homebrew non-canon Space Marine chapter. If I can be bothered to getting around to painting the models and putting the things together of course... 
   
Made in us
Confessor Of Sins




WA, USA

My bad then, apologies.

But my point remains. If they believe themselves perfect, then alliances have no value. After all, if you thought you were capable of anything and perfect, why bother with alliances with weaker nations? Especially the Tau, who deal in assimilation into the greater good over alliances.

 Ouze wrote:

Afterward, Curran killed a guy in the parking lot with a trident.
 
   
Made in gb
Barpharanges







 Mynameisalie wrote:
Ok, I'll give it a think. But there is one that they are very prone to.
Over-confidence. They are far too confident in their own abilities. They believe everything they do is perfect, and cannot be improved upon any further. Thus, the Lynx's society and battlefield tactics will never improve.


You mean like;

Slannesh and other forms of Chaos, Dark Eldar, Eldar Pirates, some Eldar Craftworlds, the Imperium, the Orks.....

Yeah, it's already far too common and makes them a bit more like the Eldar.

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Deadly Dark Eldar Warrior





I'd say most non-Craftworld Eldar do innovate, if only in the tactics department. Nevertheless, the comparison still stands. This race is like the Eldar.

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Barpharanges







 Azariah Kyras wrote:
I'd say most non-Craftworld Eldar do innovate, if only in the tactics department. Nevertheless, the comparison still stands. This race is like the Eldar.


I probably should have said some Dark Eldar and Pirates, but the state of being pious and superior is very Eldar.

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Deadly Dark Eldar Warrior





Yeah, I'd love to debate Dark Eldar with you, but your point still stands.

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Barpharanges







 Azariah Kyras wrote:
Yeah, I'd love to debate Dark Eldar with you, but your point still stands.


OK, a minority of Dark Eldar (parts of the Haemonculi covens) consider themselves above other beings in every way, it's a minority, but the pious nature still is Eldar like.

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Mutated Chosen Chaos Marine







How are the Lynx morally flawed?

This is the most important flaw. The Lynx can't be pure 100% good guys. The other flaw, the arrogance one, we can work on later.
   
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Yes.
They kill their own race mercilessly. They condemn those who are corrupted and offer no salvation. They will cheat and lie their way to success. The goal that they fight for was made for unity. The Lynx have turned it into a bloodbath.
Those are the moral flaws I can give you at this time. Enjoy.

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Barpharanges







 Mynameisalie wrote:
Yes.
They kill their own race mercilessly. They condemn those who are corrupted and offer no salvation. They will cheat and lie their way to success. The goal that they fight for was made for unity. The Lynx have turned it into a bloodbath.
Those are the moral flaws I can give you at this time. Enjoy.


Imperium, the Dark Eldar, Chaos, Orks....

Possibly everyone?

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Deadly Dark Eldar Warrior





Everybody kills their own race except the Craftworld Eldar.

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Made in ca
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Guelph Ontario

Craftworld Eldar don't kill their own Craftworld brethren. But Biel-Tan and Saimhann could easily fight each other.

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Made in gb
Decrepit Dakkanaut






UK

Saim-Hann do kill each other sometimes, but not on anywhere near the scale of other races.

Mandorallen turned back toward the insolently sneering baron. 'My Lord,' The great knight said distantly, 'I find thy face apelike and thy form misshapen. Thy beard, moreover, is an offence against decency, resembling more closely the scabrous fur which doth decorate the hinder portion of a mongrel dog than a proper adornment for a human face. Is it possibly that thy mother, seized by some wild lechery, did dally at some time past with a randy goat?' - Mimbrate Knight Protector Mandorallen.

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Made in ca
Rough Rider with Boomstick




Guelph Ontario

I'm just pointing out that even though the Eldar have a mutual goal of self preservation, when put at odds, craftworlds will fight each other.

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It's another no Alie.

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*Shrugs*
Can I just say; let's face it. Pretty much all the moral/social flaws you can think of are taken.
And damn near every single idea as well.

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