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It's certainly interesting. I'm getting sick of reading about Space Marine Chapters and Legions who are arrogant and aloof towards the humans they are supposed to be protecting -- 40K has drifted very far towards being Astartes-only ever since the Heresy series started, and the ordinary humans who make up the Imperium are almost irrelevant now.
Your fluff kind of turns that around and shows a Chapter who are "corrupted" by the ideals of the humans they recruit from. Bear in mind this Chapter would certainly be declared renegade, and would have significant forces sent against them once the Imperium got its act together. A renegade Chapter is far more of a threat than a few rebellious worlds and the Imperium would act as quickly as it could once the truth was out.
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