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This is just a silly story. I am tired of the blood angels being the only ones to have the Baal Predator. so here is a silly fast chopped up story. i am sure they may be grammer errors

For a very long time, the Blood Angels have kept the Baal Class Predator STC (Standard Template Construct) file away from the hands of the Adeptus Mechanicus. So the Blood Angels proudly held the file only for them and their successor chapters. They boldly sent the vehicle into battle and with the fire of the vehicles weapons said “This is our machine, and it shall be your death.”, and so it was for over 10 thousand years. But no one has ever had the thought the steal the file, until now.

The planet Felis, homeworld of the White Panthers Space Marine Chapter, Tech-marine Argus and his retinue are trying to convince Captain Perfernicus to plan a secret operation on the planet Baal. The plan is a start of a risky infiltration to one of manufacturing plants to steal a copy of the STC template of the Baal Predator. Captain Perfernicus approves of the plan and informs his Company of Space Marines. So then they warp-drive a small part of their fleet outside the orbit of planet Baal, then they activated all the ship’s cloaking abilities to hide any radar sighting. They sent imposters posing as Adeptus Mechanicus to the planet by a small/fast unmarked ship to the planet’s spaceport.

Once they met up with the Governers. The imposters claim they are on the planet in response to a distress call from one of the Tech-priests requests for help, that there is a shortage of Tech-adepts to help with the work on the planet’s hive manufacturing plants. When then, the Blood Angels intervene and deny that any messages were sent and tell the fake Mechanicus to leave the planet. The fake Mechanicus said they will obey and then at that moment the planet was be bombarded by orbital lasers from one of the White Panthers Strike Cruisers and start destroying the defense platforms. People in the streets went screaming and running all over the city.

The Blood Angels quickly went to their battle stations and tried to find a way to attack back. The Mechanicus pretend to run scared and run to the closest manufacturing plant. Once they got inside they kidnapped a tech-priest and stole and copy of the Baal Predator STC template. Then 5 White Panther space marine drop pods deployed into the manufacturing plant and fought their way out of the planet and caused as much destruction and chaos as possible. In the mist of all the chaos the Imposters and the White Panthers marines managed to escape to the fleet orbiting the planet.

Escaped and were back with the fleet and all Warp-drove back to the homeworld of Felis. Once back on planet Felis with a copy of the STC template safe and intact, They started making copies of the Baal Predator templates and started producing the Baal Predator for the White Panthers Chapter. Later the Blood Angels and the Inquisition discovered that one copy of the Baal Predator STC template was stolen by the White Panthers Chapter. The Blood Angels became furious with rage and then a Civil War began.

Warboss Narznok wrote:Once they met up with the Governers. The imposters claim they are on the planet in response to a distress call from one of the Tech-priests requests for help, that there is a shortage of Tech-adepts to help with the work on the planet’s hive manufacturing plants. When then, the Blood Angels intervene and deny that any messages were sent and tell the fake Mechanicus to leave the planet. The fake Mechanicus said they will obey and then at that moment the planet was be bombarded by orbital lasers from one of the White Panthers Strike Cruisers and start destroying the defense platforms. People in the streets went screaming and running all over the city.

The Blood Angels quickly went to their battle stations and tried to find a way to attack back. The Mechanicus pretend to run scared and run to the closest manufacturing plant. Once they got inside they kidnapped a tech-priest and stole and copy of the Baal Predator STC template. Then 5 White Panther space marine drop pods deployed into the manufacturing plant and fought their way out of the planet and caused as much destruction and chaos as possible. In the mist of all the chaos the Imposters and the White Panthers marines managed to escape to the fleet orbiting the planet.

Or they could've just teleported into and out of the manufacturing plant. /RedDwarfed

No seriously, I like this story! It features unneccessary violence and ends in a war, where amiable discussion might have otherwise resolved the problem!

This should be in fiction

Moving this thread to Dakka Fiction where it belongs.

I like it to, it's more then a bit anti-fluff but I think that was the point. Let's see you write it.

An orky constructed story it should have land raide which transformes into a razorback.

yeah. That is just an overview of what the story will kinda be like