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2009/11/04 19:09:02
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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I have recently started a webcomic about the 40k universe, centered on the TTau race (yup, ttau, not tau) 
i´d like to receive some reviews, maybe some ideas, jokes, oppinions (please, dont be mean) to improve it. For now there is only a "characters" section besides the webcomic itself, but i hope i will be filling it as soon as i finish the introduction of the main characters ^^
(also, i hope this fits in this thread) 
http://eatatau.thewebcomic.com/
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2009/11/04 19:31:35
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Grim Rune Priest in the Eye of the Storm
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I don't get it. Sort of like a Xenos Archie.
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"gluttons for punishment" units with the gluttons for punishment special rule will never retreat however, they will take additional beatings after combat represented by taking wounds equal to the number they lost the combat by.
Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.
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2009/11/04 19:51:27
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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Awww! Is my english so deficient? 
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2009/11/04 19:59:36
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Warp Dragon
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The images are pretty good, but the text is quite hard to follow :(
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2009/11/04 20:00:46
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Pauper with Promise
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Xenos Archie is actually pretty funny.
Like the art.. maybe the humor is not ready for us americans!
but i do see where you are trying to go with it.
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2009/11/04 20:17:06
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Lesser Daemon of Chaos
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What is Xenos Archive please?
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2009/11/04 20:53:03
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Guarding Guardian
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Nice job! Actually made me laugh as well!
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2009/11/05 14:41:51
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Stalwart Veteran Guard Sergeant
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I just love it!! keep the work up
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2009/11/05 15:32:50
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Fighter Ace
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I love it! Keep up the good work!
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Cadet_Commissar_Ludd wrote:I'm gonna do the insane... and agree with Ediin 
Oberkommandant of the DOOMFART Luftwaffe, which currently includes 5 paper planes and a remote controlled helicopter.
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2009/11/05 15:44:52
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Fully-charged Electropriest
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It's good dood, but the colours are reeeeeeally dark, made it quite hard to follow what was going on. Liked the JJ comic thouigh, made me titter!
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2009/11/05 16:05:05
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Lone Wolf Sentinel Pilot
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I liked it alot.
Sorry don't know a lot about the Tau so can't really help on the idea's front.
"Archie" is an american comic, i'd take it as a compliment.
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PM me and ask me about Warpath Wargames Norwich or send me an email
"If we hit that bullseye, the rest of the dominoes should fall like a house of cards. Checkmate!" Zapp Brannigan
 33rd Jalvene Outlanders & 112th Task Force 5335 Points (last count)
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2009/11/05 16:06:57
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Fireknife Shas'el
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IronChaos wrote:What is Xenos Archive please?
Xenos = Alien
He actually said "Archie" not "Archive". Archie was/is an old American comic about high-school kids in the 1950s.
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WH40K
 2500 pts.  2500 pts.
WHFB
Ogres 3000 pts. Chaos Dwarfs 2000pts. |
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2009/11/06 19:38:02
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Hardened Veteran Guardsman
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i dont get it...
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2009/11/06 23:47:13
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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which one? 
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2009/11/11 01:34:42
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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[DCM]
Hortator
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BENESTEALERS!
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DR:90S+G++MB+I+Pw40k07++D++A++/eWD-R+++T(Ot)DM+
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2009/11/11 04:49:31
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Frightening Flamer of Tzeentch
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pretty funny dude
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2009/11/11 13:39:03
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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ey thanks ^^
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2009/11/11 19:18:04
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Dour Wolf Priest with Iron Wolf Amulet
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The Kroot makes me laugh.
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Want a honest opinion? I play both Games Workshop and Privateer press games. Yes GW has done goofed. But until I -stop- enjoying building, painting and playing their product. I will shamelessly buy from them. Privateer Press has created a wonderful steampunk setting. Has just as enjoyable models, is cheaper and is as fun to play with! |
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2009/11/14 00:28:39
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Crushing Black Templar Crusader Pilot
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I loled
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No pity.
No remorse.
No bacon. |
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2009/11/22 04:45:37
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Grovelin' Grot Rigger
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Das ist gut! but seriously nice job.
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http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/266551.page<My IG regiment story WIP
"Boanabardlement is the mindkiller. Boanabardlement is the little death that brings total oblivion. I will face my Boanabardlement. I will permit it to wash over me and through me and when it is gone I will turn the little eye to see it's path.When the Boanabardlement is gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain." > |
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2009/11/22 11:44:38
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Eternally-Stimulated Slaanesh Dreadnought
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RustyKnight wrote:BENESTEALERS!
ALMIGHTY EMPEROR PROTECT US!
Dude, that's some funny stuff IMHO  .
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"So you see child, the Haunter was not killed for his part in the Heresy. He was not killed to halt excesses or unsanctioned behaviour. No... no, he was killed by a father who thought nothing of using him. Of twisting him into a hated monstrosity. Of demanding atrocities and horrors from him to scare his enemies into submission. Of taking from him everything that was pure, everything that was human, and, then repaying the sacrifice with betrayal.
So tell me this. Do you still believe you aren't being used? Do you still think you'll find some acceptance, some reward in death for your loyal service? Do you still think the hatred of the masses is irrelevant? Do you still think your Emperor loves you?"
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2009/11/24 08:25:52
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Mekboy Hammerin' Somethin'
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Ha! Love Kor'la already. Do you want to meet the Greater Wood? Love how quick he's able to jump back up, look really suave, and say that stupid line again.
Keep up the good work! I don't look too hard, but I've only ever seen two other 40k comics out there (Gone to Ground and Turn Signals on a Land Raider) and neither of them are about my personal favorite race, the Tau. (Sorry...the TTau)
Oh, and how often do you update it? Are you on a set schedule yet, or is it more of a "when I have time, when I feel like it" type of thing?
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2009/11/24 08:26:47
Court of the Wolf Lords - 4000-ish
 Da Great Looted Waaagh! - 3000-ish
DS:90-S++G+++MB+I+Pw40k09#+D++A++/fWD-R++T(Ot)DM+
Chronicles of Light: Tension - A novel, in progress, written by me (a sci-fi/fantasy blend that takes place in the not-so-distant future). Latest update - Chapter 1: Life of a Thief. (And yes, it is still being updated. I lack an editor at the moment - PM me if you're interested in helping out a struggling writer!) |
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2009/11/24 09:34:34
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Gore-Soaked Lunatic Witchhunter
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I thought they were good. Keep it up.
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Smacks wrote:
After the game, pack up all your miniatures, then slap the guy next to you on the ass and say.
"Good game guys, now lets hit the showers" 
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2009/11/24 13:58:24
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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thank, Faithfull, i will ^^
Locclo, its uploaded on wednesdays. im glad you liked it. I do read too GtG and TSOALR, sadly this last one finished because of GW copyright polithics.
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2009/11/26 12:27:37
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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this is a present for the dakka dakka comunity ^^
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2009/11/26 12:53:24
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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[MOD]
Head of Southern Hemisphere Distribution
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I liked it and I've added it to my regular watch list.
Your English isn't perfect but it's good enough. As a not Spanish speaker I am lucky to be able to read the comic in English.
Criticisms
The artwork does seem quite dark. also the layout panels are very regular. In combination, it does not help my eye to flow easily down the page. You should try the use of irregular panels and SFX to help lead the eye through the correct sequence of the story.
Maybe you should put some small difference in the armour of each characters.
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Well! This is a most unexpected turn of events! For, is it the fifth time, now?
"In case you ever read this, here is how the whole thing works: before civilisation, the weak and old and disabled were left out at night to feed the wolves. Civilisation basically means giving natural selection a kick in the nuts. Work out the details for yourself."
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2009/11/26 12:57:01
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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thats the kind of comments i like
how would you do the differences in the armours? maybe some tokens or symbols? trophies?
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2009/11/26 16:25:39
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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[MOD]
Head of Southern Hemisphere Distribution
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How about different colour tabs on the shoulder plates?
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Well! This is a most unexpected turn of events! For, is it the fifth time, now?
"In case you ever read this, here is how the whole thing works: before civilisation, the weak and old and disabled were left out at night to feed the wolves. Civilisation basically means giving natural selection a kick in the nuts. Work out the details for yourself."
Forum posting guidelines, please learn them! You will be tested. |
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2009/11/27 00:04:42
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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those change by the military rank, i was thinking in some kind of personal stuff...
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2009/11/27 06:12:23
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Gore-Soaked Lunatic Witchhunter
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Just read your latest comic, and found it very funny!
(Though I was a bit worried about the language, the others didn't say as much)
Anyway...*slaute*
"For the Greater Wood!"
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Smacks wrote:
After the game, pack up all your miniatures, then slap the guy next to you on the ass and say.
"Good game guys, now lets hit the showers"
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-1500pts
