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Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

I have recently started a webcomic about the 40k universe, centered on the TTau race (yup, ttau, not tau)

i´d like to receive some reviews, maybe some ideas, jokes, oppinions (please, dont be mean) to improve it. For now there is only a "characters" section besides the webcomic itself, but i hope i will be filling it as soon as i finish the introduction of the main characters ^^

(also, i hope this fits in this thread)


http://eatatau.thewebcomic.com/




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Nasty Nob on Warbike with Klaw





Buzzard's Knob

I don't get it. Sort of like a Xenos Archie.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! 
   
Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

Awww! Is my english so deficient?

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Diseased Daemon Prince of Nurgle






Inside your mind, corrupting the pathways

The images are pretty good, but the text is quite hard to follow :(

   
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Pauper with Promise




Los Angeles

Xenos Archie is actually pretty funny.

Like the art.. maybe the humor is not ready for us americans!

but i do see where you are trying to go with it.

-1500pts


 
   
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Elite Tyranid Warrior





La Coruna, Spain

What is Xenos Archive please?



 
   
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Guarding Guardian






In mah workshop, paintin' mah Eldar

Nice job! Actually made me laugh as well!

   
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Stalwart Veteran Guard Sergeant





Ravenswoud

I just love it!! keep the work up

Everyone has a choice. Me, I choos not to make a choice  
   
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Storm Trooper with Maglight




60 km south of Stockholm, Sweden

I love it! Keep up the good work!

Cadet_Commissar_Ludd wrote:I'm gonna do the insane... and agree with Ediin


Oberkommandant of the DOOMFART Luftwaffe, which currently includes 5 paper planes and a remote controlled helicopter.

 
   
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Fully-charged Electropriest





Jupiter, The Eye of.

It's good dood, but the colours are reeeeeeally dark, made it quite hard to follow what was going on. Liked the JJ comic thouigh, made me titter!

www.qotpa.com - better than a kick in the nads!

The Official QOTPA Tale of Four Gamers

I also have a Facebook strangely enough...
 
   
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Lone Wolf Sentinel Pilot





Sitting on the roof of my house with a shotgun, and a six pack of beers

I liked it alot.

Sorry don't know a lot about the Tau so can't really help on the idea's front.

"Archie" is an american comic, i'd take it as a compliment.

PM me and ask me about Warpath Wargames Norwich or send me an email

"If we hit that bullseye, the rest of the dominoes should fall like a house of cards. Checkmate!" Zapp Brannigan

33rd Jalvene Outlanders & 112th Task Force 6600 Points (last count)

 
   
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[DCM]
The Dude abides





Runnin up on ya.

IronChaos wrote:What is Xenos Archive please?


Xenos = Alien

He actually said "Archie" not "Archive". Archie was/is an old American comic about high-school kids in the 1950s.
   
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Hardened Veteran Guardsman





i dont get it...

1500pt-first completed 40k army
2000pts- main army, my own army with its own colour scheme and fluff, heavily converted

pelvic thrusting to glory!!!!!!

'On the subject of Cato Dharker and the 12th army group' (my try at fiction)
http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/349101.page 
   
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Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

which one?

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Akron, Ohio

BENESTEALERS!

DR:90S+G++MB+I+Pw40k07++D++A++/eWD-R+++T(Ot)DM+
 
   
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Frightening Flamer of Tzeentch



in Canada

pretty funny dude
   
Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

ey thanks ^^

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Cunning Dark Elf Sorceress






Grim Forgotten Nihilist Forest.

The Kroot makes me laugh.

Successful Trades.

Twoshoeevans: Kmilliete89.




3000 points Druchii
3000+ Deathguard  
   
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Monstrously Massive Big Mutant





An unknown location in the Warp

I loled



No pity.
No remorse.
No bacon.

 
   
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Grovelin' Grot Rigger





Das ist gut! but seriously nice job.

http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/266551.page<My IG regiment story WIP
"Boanabardlement is the mindkiller. Boanabardlement is the little death that brings total oblivion. I will face my Boanabardlement. I will permit it to wash over me and through me and when it is gone I will turn the little eye to see it's path.When the Boanabardlement is gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain." > 
   
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Eternally-Stimulated Slaanesh Dreadnought






Hiding in the RP forum...hiding, and waiting...

RustyKnight wrote:BENESTEALERS!


ALMIGHTY EMPEROR PROTECT US!

Dude, that's some funny stuff IMHO .

"So you see child, the Haunter was not killed for his part in the Heresy. He was not killed to halt excesses or unsanctioned behaviour. No... no, he was killed by a father who thought nothing of using him. Of twisting him into a hated monstrosity. Of demanding atrocities and horrors from him to scare his enemies into submission. Of taking from him everything that was pure, everything that was human, and, then repaying the sacrifice with betrayal.

So tell me this. Do you still believe you aren't being used? Do you still think you'll find some acceptance, some reward in death for your loyal service? Do you still think the hatred of the masses is irrelevant? Do you still think your Emperor loves you?"
 
   
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Krazed Killa Kan






Minnesota, land of 10,000 Lakes and 10,000,000,000 Mosquitos

Ha! Love Kor'la already. Do you want to meet the Greater Wood? Love how quick he's able to jump back up, look really suave, and say that stupid line again.

Keep up the good work! I don't look too hard, but I've only ever seen two other 40k comics out there (Gone to Ground and Turn Signals on a Land Raider) and neither of them are about my personal favorite race, the Tau. (Sorry...the TTau)

Oh, and how often do you update it? Are you on a set schedule yet, or is it more of a "when I have time, when I feel like it" type of thing?

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2009/11/24 08:26:47


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Kal'reia Sept Tau - Farsight Sympathizers
Da Great Looted Waaagh!
The Court of the Wolf Lords

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Gore-Soaked Lunatic Witchhunter






Australia (Recently ravaged by the Hive Fleet Ginger Overlord)

I thought they were good. Keep it up.

Smacks wrote:
After the game, pack up all your miniatures, then slap the guy next to you on the ass and say.

"Good game guys, now lets hit the showers"
 
   
Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

thank, Faithfull, i will ^^

Locclo, its uploaded on wednesdays. im glad you liked it. I do read too GtG and TSOALR, sadly this last one finished because of GW copyright polithics.

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Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

this is a present for the dakka dakka comunity ^^


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[MOD]
Poster boy for the pointless reality TV star generation.






Somewhere in southern England.

I liked it and I've added it to my regular watch list.

Your English isn't perfect but it's good enough. As a not Spanish speaker I am lucky to be able to read the comic in English.


Criticisms
The artwork does seem quite dark. also the layout panels are very regular. In combination, it does not help my eye to flow easily down the page. You should try the use of irregular panels and SFX to help lead the eye through the correct sequence of the story.

Maybe you should put some small difference in the armour of each characters.

"We are social animals, but by ill-timed austerities, that lead to moroseness, we may be led to forget our social duties, and so loosen the bonds of society."

Forum posting guidelines, please learn them! You will be tested. 
   
Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

thats the kind of comments i like

how would you do the differences in the armours? maybe some tokens or symbols? trophies?

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Poster boy for the pointless reality TV star generation.






Somewhere in southern England.

How about different colour tabs on the shoulder plates?

"We are social animals, but by ill-timed austerities, that lead to moroseness, we may be led to forget our social duties, and so loosen the bonds of society."

Forum posting guidelines, please learn them! You will be tested. 
   
Made in es
Regular Dakkanaut





Bilbao, Spain

those change by the military rank, i was thinking in some kind of personal stuff...

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Gore-Soaked Lunatic Witchhunter






Australia (Recently ravaged by the Hive Fleet Ginger Overlord)

Just read your latest comic, and found it very funny!
(Though I was a bit worried about the language, the others didn't say as much)

Anyway...*slaute*

"For the Greater Wood!"

Smacks wrote:
After the game, pack up all your miniatures, then slap the guy next to you on the ass and say.

"Good game guys, now lets hit the showers"
 
   
 
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