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its supposed to be a grot conntrole hover vehicle

Im afraid your pics are too blurry for me to make out much detail, or get a sense of scale. There are a few threads floating around though with advice on how to take clearer photos. Give them a look, then update this thread, and you will get some better constructive criticism.

Needs more dakka

An interesting attempt.
The problem for me is that the vehicle lacks any real method of propulsion or levitation. With Orks, that should be a turbine, or helicopter blade of some sort. Also, Ork vehicles tend to have large rickity exhausts, now whilst this is not an essential requirement, it does help the 'look' of the vehicle.

I also believe the design is off; you've shown a pic of (what I believe) is an Ork being carried by this vehicle, which suggests a jump pack of sorts. If this is the case, then I believe it should be mounted directly on an Ork, rather than a separate vehicle. You also describe it as 'grot controlled'- but I don't see the grot! The ariel suggests remote controlled, and thats fine, but Orks are not generally that sophisticated- it would be far better to have a grot seated on the vehicle with a joystick of sorts. Furthermore, Ork vehicles tend to be somewhat ramshackle- yours is quite sleek, and reminds me of Dark Eldar Helions. This would be fantastic for them, but it doesn't feel Orky enough for me.

Finally, I find the scale to be wrong. If it is intended to be a stand alone vehicle, then it should be larger IMO, if it is a jumppack, then more suited to the sixe of an Orks back.

Please take this as intended- constructive criticism to help you improve your modeling! For a first attempt, its not bad, but I don't think you have the right 'feel' yet. Keep trying, and keep posting your work here!

CadianXV

ty cadianxy but its technically stolen and it was supposed to have huge engine cept my brother in fact finished the boxset this time a wont lem me have the engine but thanks also it more meant to be a random pointless bullet maggnet that works like a deffkopta except explodes just as a concept idea or it could be a mission thingy what do you think

Take your time to write a decent post.

Pictures are too blurry, grammar is too poor. Please put some effort into your spelling, punctuation and so on in your posts - it really helps a lot. As for the vehicle, I can't really see what's going on since the pictures are really blurry. How does the grot fit on?

If you put less detail In the background it will auto focus on the only target ( Your model )

ahhhh Pish off

Rule #1 on dakka: be polite.

on topic nao... try to make it look more orky! the idea looks cool but im not sure how it would be an ork invention. atm it looks eldar-ish (?) are you going to make any rules for this?

Noooooooooooo (politely)(also how am i not polite i know i hav e pretty weird veiws on thing but)

Because you told people to piss off, regardless of how you misspell it.

Umm actualy i didnt in fact corribeafloxapeterianideasismtanosdelocomeunflatairedwuxboxunpsrofflecopterwaffleoaster amardackswantainian.... is the language its written in althugh thats not its whole name its whole name is much longer and it actualy means please stop posting also not its full name (for it full name visit corribeafloxapeterianideasismtanosdelocomeunflatairedwuxboxunpsrofflecopterwaffleoasteramardackswantainianenaddrianieanfaleonwariandadadadaadadaadadaaaaaaaa... (would deffinetly consier copy and pasting)also the language is made up roughly about half the wors mean more than one thing an sound like swear words for example the dreadnote in that in f*k(u=*)(your name is also a swear word in that)( the site has a convertor)

*facepalms*


The blurry pictures aren't great, but for a first attempt we'd let you off.

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