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thoughts?

Not bad perhaps a bit more highlighting would help especially on the brown and red.

The chainsword's red bitz need red gore(thats how you spell it right?) or some darker red in the middle
Armour needs either fortress or codex grey highlight
Dot out the white points in the eyes

Otherwise, perfect



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And umm...Title should be "my 1st lone wolf" right?

You missed some mold lines on the legs, your face looks like your primer is showing through and you misspelled 1st. Keep trying, though. You'll be HAAC in no time.

what's a firth?