Looking good. I think it could do with a bit more beef and gubbins, personally. You've got the orky materials and surfaces down, but the overall structure feels a bit more open and orderly than I envision orkish stuff. Perhaps a few more angled braces, protrusions, and asymmetrical plating might help the thing feel a bit denser. That's my take, at least. Honestly, though, it's nowhere near naked. It works just fine, as is.
[edit] P.S. - I see you've bashed some boardin' planks together, which I like. If you haven't used the trukk's wreckin' ball for anything else, swapping the ball for a hook makes a very convincing winch, which might tie in rather nicely.
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