I like it, nice to see a special character that is not a
CC beast or some kinda psychic battery, so qudos to you, my only suggestion is the army-wide +1
bs might be a bit extreme, but oh well test it out and see, it might also be interesting to give him a survival save when his vehicle is destroyed, perhaps allowing him to mount up in another one and continue the fight, just give some basic profile for him, the old
IG codex had a rule for crew survival, and even made some minis for them.
All in all I like it very much, I have been knocking around a Gue'vesa character of my own, that rises through the ranks to eventually pilot a custom Broadside, but I digress, also nice job on the info sheet, with a illustration and everything....top notch ( don't sweat the grammar errors
GW has been known to make a few themselves

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