The models don't look horrible, but there are some things that are really standing out to me. I know the jetpacks on the Crisis suits are a pain, but you have some serious gaps showing. Rubber bands and filler are your friend. With Farsight, I can see several mold lines, especially on the top of his head and antennae. I know that Finecast has major issues, but taking a few extra minutes to file/sand/scrape down those lines will make a huge difference, and will contribute to the overall look of the finished product.
Aside from the modeling aspect, the paintjob is a straightforward, tabletop quality, or slightly better. Great job on the Dawn Blade's blade, though. That looks great. If you want to take your models a step further, add in some shading, inking, and highlighting to really make them pop. However, I would say that you should strip down some of those models and fill in those gaps before taking them that step further, lest you detract from what might be a really awesome paint job.
Overall, decent effort for tabletop quality, but I would hardly label it as Pro Painted, nevermind charge nearly double the retail value for painted models that are missing antenna parts, a Devilfish with a funky burst cannon, and lots of gaps/mold lines. "Pro painted" gets thrown around way too much on eBay, and frankly, most of the time it's tabletop quality at best, like these models are. Knock about $100 from your BIN price, and I'm sure you'll get a buyer lickety split, or take some time to strip the egregious offenders down, fix their modeling issues, and paint to a slightly better standard,
then charge $450. That's just my advice, though.
Yes. Gone are the silly
FOC restrictions that were 4th Ed. Farsight. Now it's new warlord traits,
SCs, and wargear.