I really like the style of the miniatures and the palette choices. The freehand banner is pretty awesome too. I think what I like best is the base though, oddly enough! It looks really good.
I can't make out detail on the faces unfortunately. It is probably the light (and maybe your camera) that is the issue. My own photography is also crap, but the advice I have seen most often is:
- Set up a light box with multiple sources of light preferably coming through photogrpaher's "diffiusion gel" which comes in sheets. This gives you lots of diffuse light which is useful for making out details clearly.
- Photograph against a white or at least pale background to show the detail clearly.
- Use the macro setting on your camera and if possible get a tripod for it to reduce shake.
These are all things I've seen lots of people say and Dakka has an article about it. Gotta admit I don't do it myself!
People who are a lot better at photography than I am have written these articles:
http://www.dakkadakka.com/wiki/en/category
hotography