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this is my first DE model fully painted so give me ALL the feedback, i don't care if its harsh

Not bad! Looks like the red went on a bit thick in some areas - you can see some brush strokes and whatnot.

With what you have, the things that come to mind is finding a way to break up the large swaths of red. Those lines between the panels are prime candidates for some contrast. Same, too, are those "bumps" you see on the wings and fins - I'd consider setting them off as some kind of light, rather than just a nodule in the wing.

M.

Quite nice for an early model! Good choice of colours and I like the white freehand designs. Panel lining could work well, as Infantryman suggests.

It looks great, but consider a pin wash on all those lines and crevices. Just take a thin brush and trace a line of black wash on the wing panels and around all the details. It’s good to do as a step before that light edge highlight, so you can clean up anything that goes past the lines at the same time.

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