Emperor's Children 9th Company - The Brotherhood of Orion (Pre-Heresy) OOC Thread

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**admiral9**

Thats my bro right there i read the lexicanum allot so i know almost all the basics.

**IHateNids**

Right, so the posting order is poo-poo'd now is it?

@admiral: yes, I know, but standard cron Necrodermis would not do diddley to a bionic eye, beside pop it

**admiral9**

Alright i posted, and dang it i just made a awesome piece about just that can we just say that it was from a command wraith or something please?

And no it isn't TheAngrySquig posted because nobody posted for over a hour and then deadshot continued so nothing is ''poo-poo'd''.

**IHateNids**

Ok, just so I know not to drop this massive post yet is all.

And I suppose it sould be a Transdimensional Beamer's focusing crystal. That would benefit your eye...

**admiral9**

Okay sorry i wanted to add some spice to the story.

But are you saying that i should edit all my posts so it is correct?

**IHateNids**

No it's made of the same stuff. (AFAIK)

**admiral9**

Goodnight boys.

**IHateNids**

I have written up a battle between the Jaded Watch and Kalar vs my own Overlord and some Lychguard.

I will post it in the morning.

**DeathRex**

Posting, if it's too much tell me. Anything I say that doesn't fit ignore.

**IHateNids**

@Deathrex: Pariahs were written out, it would be a Lychguard that you were locked with. I will go offline while I fire up my laptop and then I will post the battle scene

EDIT: I have now posted. Deadshot & Blap: You will find you have been taken prisoner. Now the rest of you have to come rescue them.

**Deadshot**

Will be off all this week during the day. Will not even be on Dakka. My data allowance is dangerously low (1.87 MB!) and if I exceed it I get a hefty fine. Besides I have exams from Wednesday onwards.

**admiral9**

Wait so the fact that we killed a squad of deathmarks and i killed a necron lord and most likely the basilisks and the griffons also killed 1 or 2 doesn't matter the tiniest bit?

**IHateNids**

@admiral: I'm not sure what you are complaining about, please enlighten us?

**admiral9**

No not really complaining just that we killed over 4 necron lords but it seems like nothing happened im not so good with necron fluff but as far as i know they are severely weakened when their command is down.

**IHateNids**

yes, true, resorbs are vital for Reanimation. So if you removed the majority of them then the others would have difficulty standing up, you have a very good point

**admiral9**

Also could you maybe help me with this. I read somewhere that the necrons use a command nexus thingy consisting out of bronze, silver, gold and platinum command is that true or is it just some gak?

**BlapBlapBlap**

I've posted. Either Joker or Admiral.

**admiral9**

I hope i am.

I'm gonna do some lovely deamon corruption piece.

**Deadshot**

I am back. Once Joker goes then me then Admiral.

**admiral9**

Ok im already preparing my piece so i can post directly

**admiral9**

Joker is offline so i think its deadshot.

**Deadshot**

Ok, will get on it. Prepare for return of Chaos.

It is begin to grow...

**admiral9**

My post will also make a piece of chaos still waiting for type what type my deamon will be (nurgle,tzeentch,khorne) i mean the machine deamon.

**Deadshot**

Done. Please note the legendary line at the end.

**admiral9**

I think that in my next black out i will have the deamon order me to create a machine. of something i still need to think about the rest.

**admiral9**

little question can necrodermis try to take control of a body if so i have the best idea of becoming possessed because i need to fight it off.

Oh and can someone maybe say what i did wrong with my post i need to improve myself.

**Deadshot**

I know it might not your first language, but your grammar (just the little bit of punctuation) just really, speeds up the flow of the story. It justs seems to move to quickly. A comma and full stop can help to create dramatic pauses. TBH the stuf you ar writing isn't bad. It is quite ood story, but just the way it is written in terms of grammar make it not as good as it could, and should be.

Just my 0.02p.

**admiral9**

No i get it my vocobulary is good as far as i know but i always have trouble with the punctuation actually this rpg also helps me practice with my writing skills.

**Deadshot**

I hope I did not offend you. I agree that your vocab is very good and the scene I see is very good.

**admiral9**

After reading it again i already see allot of places where i should place commas and end of sentences.