Emperor's Children 9th Company - The Brotherhood of Orion (Pre-Heresy) OOC Thread

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**admiral9**

And no im not offended by help from people.
Especially when it comes to English, i want to get as good at it as i can be.

**Castiel**

p_gray, stick to the posting order please!

**Castiel**

admiral9 wrote:I woke up, or at least I thought I woke up. I was in a weird dimension, I heard the sound of machinery everywhere and heard the screams of agony of humans. I looked around and saw the half-machine, half-daemon again, but on the other side I saw the daemon of excess and pleasure.

The machine daemon said. ''Come, I will enlighten you, I will show you the truth of the soul of the machine and the god that you fools on Mars worship. You will be envied by all the others for the machines that you create. I saved you, you are already in debt to me!'' He said the last thing with a sickening laugh.
On the other side the daemon of pleasure said ''Come to me and I will show you the edge of pleasure like you have never felt before. I will make you perfect, everyone will want to be you and follow you. I will make everything you have and are perfect. You are jealous of those other techmarines aren't you, and you want to be like your sergeant? Come and I will make you even better.''

Then they both said in sync ''CHOOSE YOUR SIDE NOW!''

I found myself weakened, I didn't know what to do, but then I screamed. ''I will only follow the machine god and the Emperor as he is the Omnissiah, I will never falter!''
They both laughed and the machine deamon said ''I will wait for you the day that you will fall to me will be soon. Watch the day, boy, your soul will belong to me.''

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I woke up. I heard the sound of explosions and found myself on the battlefield, I got up and ran Sergeant Antioch and said "Sergeant, what should we do? We can't survive, we need to withdraw! But just before he could answer a group of warriors appeared. I took out my autocannon and took my shot, i killed 4 of them but forgot to shoot them for a second time to eliminate the chance of them returning. But instead of all of them resurrecting only 1 stood up and I shot another 3 along with that one. I shouted to Sergeant Antioch "Sir, we need extraction ASAP!"

Here is your last post with the grammar I would have used. Hope it is helpful!

**admiral9**

Yeah, that is way better. Thanks castiel, i will check my grammar more next time i post .

**Castiel**

Glad it was useful!

**BlapBlapBlap**

Glad the thread helps

**admiral9**

I am glad that you guys are glad.

**admiral9**

So isn't it magnus's turn?

**Lord Magnus**

Posted. Segari, Rephosus, Nero, Faberon and myself on going to meet Aloysus.

**Castiel**

We'll be beating the crap out of the nearby Necrons, come join the fun!

**admiral9**

Ok ima switch to a plasma cannon this time.

**Lord Magnus**

Admiral, just have a Storm Eagle deliver supplies, and we can all switch gear if we want.

**p_gray99**

Castiel wrote:p_gray, stick to the posting order please!

Sorry, It's just that I'd missed about two posts so thought I should probably say something rather than leaving it another day and still missing my turn.

**Castiel**

Its cool!

**BlapBlapBlap**

So now it's P-Gray? Or who?

**Lord Magnus**

BlapBlapBlap wrote:So now it's P-Gray? Or who?

P-Gray can post again, that or you are up Blap.

**BlapBlapBlap**

I'll post then.

**BlapBlapBlap**

Done.

Still call me Dreph for now.

**Lord Magnus**

My character will be going to Tzeentch as well, next time I look at Dreph in person I will have a surprising feeling of eminent wisdom and will have admiration.

**BlapBlapBlap**

You don't already?!

HERESY! *BLAM*

**Castiel**

Its not like you're the Captain or anything - waitaminute.....

**Deadshot**

I have become Khorne's servant. Chaos has bein to grow.

Did anyone notice my inclusion of that meme in my post?

**BlapBlapBlap**

Yes.

NOW STOP ASKING

**Deadshot**

Only when Chaos has grown

Now who is up?

**Lord Magnus**

DEADDDSHOTT is up.

**BlapBlapBlap**

CHAOS IS NOT BEGIN TO GROW AT ALL!

DA CAKE IS A LIE!

**admiral9**

BlabBlabBlab are you gonna influence my daemon engine? (That i dont know of i only think it is a normal machine.) Because eventually a deamon has to enter it.

**Castiel**

My Word Bearers would like a word. (teehee, like a word.

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**Deadshot**

Not going to post. Writers block. Skip me.

**Lord Magnus**

Admiral?