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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/07 21:30:55
Subject: Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Sword-Bearing Inquisitorial Crusader
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You need to spell check your work. Other than that it seems fine.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 12:10:21
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Barpharanges
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The Council of Syrath are his 130 chosen folowers , each are allies and leaders of Syraths warriors , disscsing invasions and weapons deals .There are the 7 great members , Coraks , Arrius , Farseer Syees , Kar shriack , Blood reaper and the Plauge lord . Guarded by the Elite Black guard Bloodletters , the first daemons to swear themselves to Syrath , each carying great hell blades , axes and pikes.
This is just the start of the story of the Council of Syrath , if there are any qustions about any of the members just ask.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 13:07:03
Subject: Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Sword-Bearing Inquisitorial Crusader
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130 is far too many for a Chaos Council, most chaos followers are power obssessed so any councils would have 1-9 members in it.
Go for nine members in the council and I would suggest: Syrath the Immortal; Arrius the Great; Coraks; Arrius the Fifth; Farseer Syess; The Blood Reaper; The Plague Lord; The Great Trickster and The Secret Keeper.
The last four would be followers of one of the major Gods, with the other 4 being loyal followers of Syrath. And of course having Syrath as one of the members.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 13:18:48
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Barpharanges
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I will make it 13 , cuase it is Syraths sacreded number plus cheak out the Syrath artical on 40k fanon wiki , i added a eldar miyth , plus wat do you think of my Elite Bloodletters?
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This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2010/08/22 13:27:32
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 14:24:18
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Sword-Bearing Inquisitorial Crusader
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blood reaper wrote:I will make it 13 , cuase it is Syraths sacreded number plus cheak out the Syrath artical on 40k fanon wiki , i added a eldar miyth , plus wat do you think of my Elite Bloodletters?
They are a bit 'meh'. 'Two mighty Bloodthirster's of Khorne, bound in warp forged chains, stand guard of the Council of Syrath', Sounds better IMHO.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 14:52:47
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Barpharanges
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I dont no about Bloodthirsters , cuase i think imho , i think Bloodletters are cooler , the Black guard are "elite" Bloodletters , but Syrath "does" have 2 Great Bloodthiersters , but wat do you think of my eldar mith and next sunday will Lord of change be there next sunday?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 15:16:50
Subject: Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Sword-Bearing Inquisitorial Crusader
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Look, you only want 'black guard' because you painted some of your bloodletters that way. Two bloodthirsters seem more powerful and regal than some black bloodleters. Maybe a compromise: Black Guard and the two Bloodthirsters standing guard.
Your Eldar Myth was actually, pretty bad. It contradicts the fluff too much and besides, Syrath is an egotistical Great Daemon of Chaos, he is NOT the saviour of the Eldar. I made some edits so that it fits the fluff more and that Syrath's godhood brings destruction to the remaining Eldar Gods.
P.S. Lord of Change and his friends will be their on sunday.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 15:48:26
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Barpharanges
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SYRATHS GOD HOOD will not bring destruction to the ELDAR GODS! THE BLACK GUARD HAVE BLACK IORN AND BRASS ARMOUR
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 16:14:57
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Sword-Bearing Inquisitorial Crusader
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blood reaper wrote:SYRATHS GOD HOOD will not bring destruction to the ELDAR GODS! THE BLACK GUARD HAVE BLACK IORN AND BRASS ARMOUR
First of all. No need to put the caps lock on. Second, Syrath would bring the end of Eldar Gods, it is written in the Eldar fluff that the Eldar Gods are doomed to die and thirdly, Syrath CANNOT be the saviour of the Eldar, it is an impossibility since more than 99% of Eldar view Chaos as the enemy.
I think the Black Guard idea is actually quite good, since it fits the fluff and is quite cool.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/08/22 16:41:53
Subject: Re:Better fluff for Syraths warriors
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Barpharanges
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Ok im sorry stress is geting to me agien , cheak PM for new messege , i will put a bloodthister as the black guards commander.
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