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thank you and your right about the thunder fire cannon i have one and it was very hard to build but it turned out great and ill have to assume so will the landraider thunderhead

It's pretty good so far. I like the fact that you're not getting discouraged by some of the negative criticism here. Instead, you're willing to listen to other's ideas and make changes for the better. It shows a certain amount of maturity for someone so young.

The fluff is one of the hardest things to do when designing a new unit. I know I've always had problems with it. Your fluff is getting better.

Gamewise, I think this tank can use a slight increase in its points. It's basically still got all of the firepower of the LRC and in addition, is boosted by the firepower of the TFC. Although you lose the transport capacity, that doesn't quite make up for the 100pts of added firepower. I'd suggest increasing the cost to 275pts....250 (LRC) + 100 (TFC) - 50 (No transport) - 25 (Loader Jam drawback).

This is a good tank, especially now that the weapons load-out is more balanced and suited for the one roll.
One thing though, concerning the fluff, "Blood Iron Fists" sounds a little long-winded and silly, maybe cut it back to just "Blood Fists" or "Iron Fists".

Is Iron Fists not taken?

jy2 wrote:It's pretty good so far. I like the fact that you're not getting discouraged by some of the negative criticism here. Instead, you're willing to listen to other's ideas and make changes for the better. It shows a certain amount of maturity for someone so young.

The fluff is one of the hardest things to do when designing a new unit. I know I've always had problems with it. Your fluff is getting better.

Gamewise, I think this tank can use a slight increase in its points. It's basically still got all of the firepower of the LRC and in addition, is boosted by the firepower of the TFC. Although you lose the transport capacity, that doesn't quite make up for the 100pts of added firepower. I'd suggest increasing the cost to 275pts....250 (LRC) + 100 (TFC) - 50 (No transport) - 25 (Loader Jam drawback).

but your forgetting that the tfc comes with techmarine 50 pts plus servo harness 25 points all for 100 points so that means its 25 so were at 225 plus 50 for added mobility and survivability of tfc minus 25 for loader jam and no transport so its 250 btw ty you for the post

LORDEATSALOT wrote:Is Iron Fists not taken?

Yeah, I think it is actualy, I was just tossing around some ideas.

and thank you boss i was still naming my chapter so ill change it to blood fist

Cool, now you need to think of a colour scheme! Maybe grey with red fists?

oh i have a colour scheme that goes with my chapter it starts with chaos black prime then airgun the model with chainmail and do various parts red start with red base then do scab red then blood red. Gold trim it and paint symbols gold start with tin bitz then burnished gold then shining gold

That sounds real good thinking about it. Could you post some pics?

sure as soon as i find camera lol