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I'm willing to give Chazz time until CoF 1 is done.

 Kharne the Befriender wrote:

2BlackJack1 wrote:By save the day, I'm sure you mean Fishman unloads a storm bolter into one enemy while Birdman gets into a knife fight and brings home the villain in a doggy bag.

Fishman will probably make a Khorne Berzerker blush... and Bird man can take home the leftovers after fishman gorges himself

Buttery Commissar wrote:I'm gonna say we all need to be a little more patient.

I'm a little concerned that chazz is gonna be this distant throughout. Some reassurance either way would go a long way.
But giving time to respond is also necessary.

I agree, I'm willing to give him until monday

Ok, Monday to do what exactly, I have the first post of COF 2 already written I'm just waiting on the current crusade to wrap up. I believe we should finish what we have before we move on to seconds, If you guys can't wait I can post it here now

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Kharne the Befriender wrote:

2BlackJack1 wrote:By save the day, I'm sure you mean Fishman unloads a storm bolter into one enemy while Birdman gets into a knife fight and brings home the villain in a doggy bag.

Fishman will probably make a Khorne Berzerker blush... and Bird man can take home the leftovers after fishman gorges himself

Buttery Commissar wrote:I'm gonna say we all need to be a little more patient.

I'm a little concerned that chazz is gonna be this distant throughout. Some reassurance either way would go a long way.
But giving time to respond is also necessary.

I agree, I'm willing to give him until monday

Ok, Monday to do what exactly, I have the first post of COF 2 already written I'm just waiting on the current crusade to wrap up. I believe we should finish what we have before we move on to seconds, If you guys can't wait I can post it here now

Till Monday for a reply, it has been given. Now I'm willing to wait until the end of CoF 1

I'm waiting until COF 1 is good and wrapped up before I post my revised Eldar intro. My Knight intro will stand as is

I don't expect to have an intro done for for CoF: SS, but I imagine some people (myself included) were wondering if we could have some light shed on the freedom/plot amount in the next crusade. TS has tried answering our questions, but he hasn't really been able to do much.

So, one question we've had as of late is whether we still have the ability to decide what our factions do, and the writers come up to why they're doing it, with no outside force saying we cannot do that, like how the first crusade went. I don't imagine that there is any problems, but I'd feel better having this confirmed.

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Kharne the Befriender wrote:

2BlackJack1 wrote:By save the day, I'm sure you mean Fishman unloads a storm bolter into one enemy while Birdman gets into a knife fight and brings home the villain in a doggy bag.

Fishman will probably make a Khorne Berzerker blush... and Bird man can take home the leftovers after fishman gorges himself

Buttery Commissar wrote:I'm gonna say we all need to be a little more patient.

I'm a little concerned that chazz is gonna be this distant throughout. Some reassurance either way would go a long way.
But giving time to respond is also necessary.

I agree, I'm willing to give him until monday

Ok, Monday to do what exactly, I have the first post of COF 2 already written I'm just waiting on the current crusade to wrap up. I believe we should finish what we have before we move on to seconds, If you guys can't wait I can post it here now

I believe to answers about the things in this topic. Stuff folk are worried about.
Though Kharne seems to have a different problem. I'm talking about how much we can mention in intros, how "railroaded" the campaign may or may not be (TS brought it up) and how often you'll be in contact once it rolls out.. That kinda stuff.

 Buttery Commissar wrote:

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Kharne the Befriender wrote:

2BlackJack1 wrote:By save the day, I'm sure you mean Fishman unloads a storm bolter into one enemy while Birdman gets into a knife fight and brings home the villain in a doggy bag.

Fishman will probably make a Khorne Berzerker blush... and Bird man can take home the leftovers after fishman gorges himself

Buttery Commissar wrote:I'm gonna say we all need to be a little more patient.

I'm a little concerned that chazz is gonna be this distant throughout. Some reassurance either way would go a long way.
But giving time to respond is also necessary.

I agree, I'm willing to give him until monday

Ok, Monday to do what exactly, I have the first post of COF 2 already written I'm just waiting on the current crusade to wrap up. I believe we should finish what we have before we move on to seconds, If you guys can't wait I can post it here now

I believe to answers about the things in this topic. Stuff folk are worried about.
Though Kharne seems to have a different problem. I'm talking about how much we can mention in intros, how "railroaded" the campaign may or may not be (TS brought it up) and how often you'll be in contact once it rolls out.. That kinda stuff.

Once the COF 2 rolls out I do intend to be available, I assume your forces will be mostly off worlders so you will have to make a chunk about coming to Crion, your are headed to Crion after the Lord Governor sent a general distress call. The High Lords of Terra have deemed the world to valuable to fall out of imperial control and as such has sent your forces to bring the world back to business as usual. The distress call is vague but urgent.

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Buttery Commissar wrote:

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Kharne the Befriender wrote:

2BlackJack1 wrote:By save the day, I'm sure you mean Fishman unloads a storm bolter into one enemy while Birdman gets into a knife fight and brings home the villain in a doggy bag.

Fishman will probably make a Khorne Berzerker blush... and Bird man can take home the leftovers after fishman gorges himself

Buttery Commissar wrote:I'm gonna say we all need to be a little more patient.

I'm a little concerned that chazz is gonna be this distant throughout. Some reassurance either way would go a long way.
But giving time to respond is also necessary.

I agree, I'm willing to give him until monday

Ok, Monday to do what exactly, I have the first post of COF 2 already written I'm just waiting on the current crusade to wrap up. I believe we should finish what we have before we move on to seconds, If you guys can't wait I can post it here now

I believe to answers about the things in this topic. Stuff folk are worried about.
Though Kharne seems to have a different problem. I'm talking about how much we can mention in intros, how "railroaded" the campaign may or may not be (TS brought it up) and how often you'll be in contact once it rolls out.. That kinda stuff.

Once the COF 2 rolls out I do intend to be available, I assume your forces will be mostly off worlders so you will have to make a chunk about coming to Crion, your are headed to Crion after the Lord Governor sent a general distress call. The High Lords of Terra have deemed the world to valuable to fall out of imperial control and as such has sent your forces to bring the world back to business as usual. The distress call is vague but urgent.

Spoiler:

General Distress Priority Omega
Relaying Choir Transmission
--DECRYPTING—18%
--DECRYPTING—38%
--DECRYPTING—56%
--DECRYPTING— 71%
--DECRYPTING— 72%
__ERORR__ (WARP INTERFEANCE DETECTATED MESSAGE INCOMPLETE)
[*** TRANSMISSION BEGINS ***
(static) This is Lord Governor (static) Payne of Crion. We are under attack, (static) orks unifying. (static) separatist scum. (static) Heretics. We are desperate our PDF is incapable of defending against these threats. Any Imperial forces in the area we beg of you to come to our aid. Coordinates follow.

I like this

Disaster over :-)

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Buttery Commissar wrote:

 chazz huggins wrote:

 Kharne the Befriender wrote:

2BlackJack1 wrote:By save the day, I'm sure you mean Fishman unloads a storm bolter into one enemy while Birdman gets into a knife fight and brings home the villain in a doggy bag.

Fishman will probably make a Khorne Berzerker blush... and Bird man can take home the leftovers after fishman gorges himself

Buttery Commissar wrote:I'm gonna say we all need to be a little more patient.

I'm a little concerned that chazz is gonna be this distant throughout. Some reassurance either way would go a long way.
But giving time to respond is also necessary.

I agree, I'm willing to give him until monday

Ok, Monday to do what exactly, I have the first post of COF 2 already written I'm just waiting on the current crusade to wrap up. I believe we should finish what we have before we move on to seconds, If you guys can't wait I can post it here now

I believe to answers about the things in this topic. Stuff folk are worried about.
Though Kharne seems to have a different problem. I'm talking about how much we can mention in intros, how "railroaded" the campaign may or may not be (TS brought it up) and how often you'll be in contact once it rolls out.. That kinda stuff.

Once the COF 2 rolls out I do intend to be available, I assume your forces will be mostly off worlders so you will have to make a chunk about coming to Crion, your are headed to Crion after the Lord Governor sent a general distress call. The High Lords of Terra have deemed the world to valuable to fall out of imperial control and as such has sent your forces to bring the world back to business as usual. The distress call is vague but urgent.

Spoiler:

General Distress Priority Omega
Relaying Choir Transmission
--DECRYPTING—18%
--DECRYPTING—38%
--DECRYPTING—56%
--DECRYPTING— 71%
--DECRYPTING— 72%
__ERORR__ (WARP INTERFEANCE DETECTATED MESSAGE INCOMPLETE)
[*** TRANSMISSION BEGINS ***
(static) This is Lord Governor (static) Payne of Crion. We are under attack, (static) orks unifying. (static) separatist scum. (static) Heretics. We are desperate our PDF is incapable of defending against these threats. Any Imperial forces in the area we beg of you to come to our aid. Coordinates follow.

Thanks chazz. I wasn't having a go, just explaining what seemed to have gone on over the last 3 pages.

Looks good Chazz. Now, who will be the Imperial command representative? Space Wolves, New Order, House Valorn, etc? We mentioned it earlier but IIRC we never reached an actual agreement. We could use this planetary governor as well, but there's a few problems with that:

1) SM won't like answering to some backwater governor
2) Some could very well execute/impeach the governor for incompetence for allowing the planet to rebel, and probably caused a shortage tithes to Terra because of the war.

What about something like the Mournival in the early HH books?
Where you have one leader but four (or however many) council/advisors. Each could be from a different imperial faction.

This could be fun, we have multiple proud space marines coming including a chapter master. 1st founding former legion, a younger chapter with point to provez and some very old outsiders....

Judge Silas? New order. So we have as senior marine chapter master but bwill they obey him
Ulfric storm claw, first founding and loud, proud and egoed.
Space shark super salty Libby
Emperors hounds captain
Grey knights?

That would be pretty cool. I don't really mind who is the head honcho, since it doesn't really change my approach at all, since my Kroot are just a support for Imperials and Eldar, and do some work for Chaos, depending on what it is. The Kroot would be very, very hesitant to do anything that makes them a target for the Imperials.

Don't forget the High Queen of my and TS's Houses. They'd want to be in on any command decisions. But otherwise I like it

Well there's also House Fairfax and the Admech of Mars.
I figured maybe the council/mournival idea allows for openness without folk pulling rank.

Maybe it's over complicated, but it gives a platform for the imperials to speak as equals.

In my original introduction i said that the inquisition requested my marines but seeing as i wanted to change a few things anyway i'll update it. Not sure when and or where to post it however. Here or just wait for the CoF 2 thread to be made?

Both is fine.

Either one is fine, Irish. Also, which Ordo is Chazz? Ordo Xenos, right?

I would think Ordo Malleus given that he has Grey Knights with him

I like the Space Shark super salty libby... that made my day.

 War Kitten wrote:
I would think Ordo Malleus given that he has Grey Knights with him

Yup

Oh good. Then you'll have no interest in trying to murder my Eldar. That's good, now I only have to worry about the Space Sharks I think

 War Kitten wrote:
Oh good. Then you'll have no interest in trying to murder my Eldar. That's good, now I only have to worry about the Space Sharks I think

And the EC. And the Admech. We hear your tech is very pretty.

 Buttery Commissar wrote:

 War Kitten wrote:
Oh good. Then you'll have no interest in trying to murder my Eldar. That's good, now I only have to worry about the Space Sharks I think

And the EC. And the Admech. We hear your tech is very pretty.

How could I forget the Predator and the Tin (Wo)man? Shame on me

Hmm, what's the Malleus' policy on xenos mercenaries? Not just for my sake, but I have a recommendation for bringing the Gutrippas in for annuva go. If you don't want to, I can understand, but I think it'd be funny to have them around again as a mercenary band for your force.

 2BlackJack1 wrote:
Hmm, what's the Malleus' policy on xenos mercenaries? Not just for my sake, but I have a recommendation for bringing the Gutrippas in for annuva go. If you don't want to, I can understand, but I think it'd be funny to have them around again as a mercenary band for your force.

I don't think we've seen the last of that plucky band of Kommandos, I'm waiting to see how this crusade ends

Fair enough, yet I was wondering if they would have another crusade to cause mayhem in. But, as I'm not well rehearsed in Ordo fluff, does the Malleus make use of xeno mercenaries? I know that it isn't out of the question given their nye on infinite power, but I don't know how much they dabble in xenos allies. Of course, the Grey Knights have some necron tech in their weaponry, but that's a different matter IMO.

Gallus is sure to be present to that leader thing, inject some human grunt sense into it

War Kitten wrote:Oh good. Then you'll have no interest in trying to murder my Eldar. That's good, now I only have to worry about the Space Sharks I think

you have no idea...

Buttery Commissar wrote:

 War Kitten wrote:
Oh good. Then you'll have no interest in trying to murder my Eldar. That's good, now I only have to worry about the Space Sharks I think

And the EC. And the Admech. We hear your tech is very pretty.

So... the Carcharodons are known for having a ton of Mk V Heresy armor and heavily modified and thrown together armor and the such. I think your AdMech can be a very useful ally...
Plus, I might have some goodies for you