Hey there,
Your list is pretty good, however like the previous poster stated - there are a few needless upgrades here in there.
I'll go into a bit more detail.
HQ:
-Your
GUO is good, however cloud of flies is a lil pointless, grenades are good - however your I2 - redundant really.
-Your Tzeentch herald should have master of sorcery, so you can split fire. Also this guy should definitely be in a chariot. Nuff' said.
-Your herald of Khorne is good, i'd personally go for another Tzeentch herald on chariot.
Elites:
- These guys should have all upgrades to exploit wound allocation. It's nice having a icon also.
Troops:
-Where do i start..? Well, much of what the previous poster has said is true. Basically if you want to run daemonettes or letters, you need squads of at least 10+. Personally the only troops i run in a competitive game is
MSU's of horrors w bolt and changelling and
PB's for objectives. The troops look nasty on paper and can be effective, however any decent player will shoot them to bits before they reach
CC. I'd run a few squads of
PB's for scoring units / objectives, maybe a few 5 man squads of horrors w bolt and one w the changelling and spend the rest of the points on big stuff.
Heavy support:
-Once again I agree with the previous poster, you only have one
DP - so it will be a high priority - you need iron hide.
MoK is also the weakest king of prince -
MoN and
MoT are undoubtedly the best. T6 or 4++>an extra attack. Period.
I'd look at getting some fiends also. These guys are brilliant. "Walking tin openers" are what there refered to in my gaming circle. These guys will destroy infantry, elite infantry,
MC and most importantly tanks and transports. Theres literally nothing they cant take. GET SOME.
Also i'd look at a Tzeentch
DP - for 140 points you get a
MC that can fire a S8 AP1 bolt at BS5 with a 4++ that can wreck in
CC also. Do it.
Nurgle
DPs are also what i field regularly - these guys get expensive, but a T6 flying
MC that wounds on a 2+ with a reroll 9 times outta 10 can be worth it.
Anyways, good luck with the list.
BBJ