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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 21:53:32
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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This is my tester for my final attempt at putting a mini up for this years golden daemon..!
Thought and feed bck needed..! thanks
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 22:18:07
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Possessed Khorne Marine Covered in Spikes
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Looks fab! Nice, tight painting and you've really captured 'Old Man Yarrick'.
Only odd thing to me is on the last photo the hat looks half wet / varnished, but may just be the light.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 22:19:51
Subject: Re:Commissar Yarrick
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Waaagh! Warbiker
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Yeah, i agree with him, also, try adding some detail to the base, maybe a dead ork or two.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 22:22:36
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Nigel Stillman
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Looks great,
I feel that If I say more I may jinx your chances.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 22:28:09
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Thanks guys ! the last pic is the lighting he's still unvarnished .. The base was just one i had laying around.. thanks for the comments guys :0)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 22:34:44
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Sure Space Wolves Land Raider Pilot
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Nice didn't know that he had so much red on his coat!!! Good painting on the face, brings out the twisted old man with a justified grudge against Ghazkhull!!!!!!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 23:52:40
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Hooded Inquisitorial Interrogator
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Good work on actually giving him a RED sash.
The coat looks a bit on the plain side. Have you thought about adding anything along the edges besides the simple outline?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/05 23:57:41
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Hi yes on my entery one i'm going to add some type of pattern or lettering not to sure yet which one .. yes i thought the red would help break up the gold and black nicely. Thank you for your comment
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/06 05:42:38
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Long-Range Ultramarine Land Speeder Pilot
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Great job mate!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/06 15:19:14
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Theofilos wrote:Great job mate!
Thanks for the comment man
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/06 17:34:06
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Drop Trooper with Demo Charge
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Very nice work! You're clearly a very skilled painter!
One comment though; I think it would have looked better if not all details would have been painted with the same technique. The golden sword handle for example is probably a quite different material than the sash but they look the same. Same thing goes for the red on the hat and the red on the power klaw.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/06 22:10:19
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Stalwart Space Marine
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I LOVE this
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2011/07/06 22:47:51
Subject: Commissar Yarrick
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Mizeran wrote:Very nice work! You're clearly a very skilled painter!
One comment though; I think it would have looked better if not all details would have been painted with the same technique. The golden sword handle for example is probably a quite different material than the sash but they look the same. Same thing goes for the red on the hat and the red on the power klaw.
I understand what you are saying but for the gold when painting in non metalic style it is very hard to get a dif feel for metal and cloth as for the hat i agree with you perhaps a futher highlighting just to seprate the two materials..!
the main reason for this posting was to get feed bck which i really appreciate so thanks.. this is not my final mini though is was a test model 1 which i do not intend to show and as i dont play the game dout il ever use so most def will have a few coats of paint stripper of the nxt few days of i may just sell it.. thanks again for the feed bck it really does help
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