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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/12/22 11:43:58
Subject: First time: Chaos Chosen, Black legion
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Sacrifice to the Dark Gods
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So these are my first painted minatures, Chaos chosen marines of the Black legion. Any comments and critisism are more than welcome, for I am ever searching for ways to improve my minatures.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/12/22 12:37:09
Subject: First time: Chaos Chosen, Black legion
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Potent Possessed Daemonvessel
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Looking good ! I love the organic aspects of some armor parts, this is really on spot with these models. Edit : One point of bickering though (but maybe it is just the pictures) looks like you have a bent on the left hand of the claw marine no ?
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2016/12/22 12:39:33
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/12/22 12:48:49
Subject: First time: Chaos Chosen, Black legion
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Sacrifice to the Dark Gods
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On further inspection, just a rouge piece of texture paint stuck on the claw  thank you for the feedback !
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/12/22 13:06:52
Subject: First time: Chaos Chosen, Black legion
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Aspirant Tech-Adept
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I really like these. I like your style.
Very dark, unlike the shiny black and bright gold we usually see. Much more to my taste.
If I had a suggestion it would be to perhaps add just a little bit more contrast in places, the bases for example, or brightening up the glowing eyes, etc.
But overall, very nice. I like 'em. It'll be good to see more.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/12/22 13:22:28
Subject: First time: Chaos Chosen, Black legion
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Sacrifice to the Dark Gods
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Thank you for the feedback, will definetly work on the contrast, maybe have A slight OSL effect below the eyes.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2016/12/22 13:37:11
Subject: First time: Chaos Chosen, Black legion
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Potent Possessed Daemonvessel
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Glad to hear it was no bent, that would have been a mess to fix after painting.
Keep it up !
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