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People are posting while im typing un my post, this confuses me greatly!

Anyway whats the plan of action at the moment?

sillyboy wrote:Read it..... A brawl....Really Guys?!.....*sighs*

Hey, don't look at me, my character doesn't run on testosterone.. dang, it's hard adjusting.

EagleArk wrote:People are posting while im typing un my post, this confuses me greatly!

Anyway whats the plan of action at the moment?

Wait for the almighty GM to kick your collective arses for brawling, then head into space after the post-graduation party I mentioned earlier.

I can see the confused look on Harrab's face when reading this xD.

Snarky wrote:Just trying to spice things up...

Admit it, I do a good job.

Indeed.

Snarky wrote:I can see the confused look on Harrab's face when reading this xD.

The more confused the GM is, the more of an advantage we humble players have over him. Until it gets too much and.. thread self-destruct lock.

So we the top of the alliance navy, at the epitome of six years of hard work, finally realising or dreams...

.... And we've got a over-emotional girl and a brawl......

This is just... I can't even find a word for it...

sillyboy wrote:So we the top of the alliance navy, at the epitome of six years of hard work, finally realising or dreams...

.... And we've got a over-emotional girl and a brawl......

This is just... I can't even find a word for it...

Politically incorrect?

sillyboy wrote:So we the top of the alliance navy, at the epitome of six years of hard work, finally realising or dreams...

.... And we've got a over-emotional girl and a brawl......

This is just... I can't even find a word for it...

ahh,humans.

Grunting in anger at what just happened, joesph walked quickly towards a private space, letting out his anger as he did so, allthough his method of doing this was to pucnh a wall, one of the reinforced compund walls. Ouch. Crying in pain he realised the implications of the brawl, he was going to get a major ass kicking from the admiral.

Darkvoidof40k wrote:

sillyboy wrote:So we the top of the alliance navy, at the epitome of six years of hard work, finally realising or dreams...

.... And we've got a over-emotional girl and a brawl......

This is just... I can't even find a word for it...

Politically incorrect?

Also known as idiots

Can't wait until harrab kicks your collective asses.

Whoa, it was the cave-man from Pluto who started it. An honorable Terran such as myself would never start a fight...

IC: issac look at all around him.a crying girl. 2 guys pissed off. other watching.him laughing. he smiled,and yelled. "WHO WANT TO PLAY A GAME!?!?!?"

Garan re-enters the room, along with Natalie, and is sees his class mates brawling infront of him. "Break it up," Garan shouts, "The admiral, and the fleet marshal are outside!"

You guys are all a bunch of meanies! Except for you other guys; you're safe. But those guys.. damn they're not nice. Glad I have my other guys to look after me though. Thanks, guys. As for the rest of you miserable guys, get outta ma sight. Crazy fool-guys.

issac smiles at the girl calling him mean. "ok,im mean.aw well."he walks over to her and pats her on the head. "ill leave then." he say with a grin and goes and sits in a corner.

Walking over to Joesph, Dylan trys to comfort the other Officer " Don't worry. I'll cover your a/s. I say You didn't Have a part in it. Trust me you'll be fine" He says walking away. "Oh and the chairs, much better to punch"

The door opened, the new officers fell silent as Admiral Sharpe stepped through, seething with silent rage.

"Step away from Commander Rose." she ordered, her voice perfectly calm and controlled, the others did so they had never seen the admiral so angry and had no desire to be anywhere near when she exploded.

The Admiral moved to stand face to face with the younger woman, and rose saw for the first time the extent of the burns on her superiors face, they ran like tiny rivers across her smoother skin, but it was the eyes that kept her gaze, steel grey and furious.

"Do you know where you are, Commander?"

"yes ma'am. Fort Norton Ma'am."

"And do you know what we do here?" Still that calm tone, seems the fuse was still lit.

"train-.. Train Officers for Ship Command, Ma'am."

"and do you know who that man with me was?"

'yes ma'am, Fleet Marshal, Ma'am."

"Indeed it was, and do you know what he had just agreed to do? Something I just stuck my neck out to get?"

"No Ma'am."

"I had just gotten him to agree to assign you to the most advanced ship in the Navy, despite considerable opposition from my peers, a ship so advanced the public doesn't even know about it, do you think i'd do all that for someone i feel couldn't handle it?"

"no ma'am."

"You almost proved me wrong. and if you even think of do so again, i'll have you out of this navy so hard it'll make any previous embarrassments look like spring picnics with all your friends, are we clear?"

She turned and walked over to Issac, then laid him out with a punch to the gut, Joseph received another, then Sharpe straightened up and turned to the rest of room.

"You all have embarrassed me more than i can express. You failed to support a fellow officer in trouble, you started brawling scant minutes after you received your swords from the Marshall himself.." she scanned the faces, noted the absence and her frown deepened, "Where's reynolds?"

A nod of the head was all of joesphs ego could give, but the nursing of the hand was the "cheers" in disguise.

issac replyed."?ummm.he left...i think. is he the one i pushed? meh,cant remember..."

Reynolds could hear the Admiral barking at the other officers, she must be mad. He was just outside the complex taking a smoke when he heard her start shouting.

"Better lay low for a while.." he thought as he slinked away.

Walking over to Kessler Dylan whispers "I think she's on her period"

'Permission to speak Ma'am' Garan said in the official naval tone they had been taught.

'Granted' Replied the Admiral

'May I request details of our orders, and of when we leave for orbit Ma'am?'

God, how the hell am i going to protect speople, who fight amongst themselves... *shivers*

And what's up with the one-sentance rp's?!.... I mean come on, they don't really add to the story or you character depth.

As an example, me running after darko:

You can write this:

Trix watched as tears fell from Natalies eyes. "Hey, are you alright?" She asked placing her hand on Natalie's shoulders. "I'm fine." she said before turning and running away. Trix looked at the Data-pad, trying to find out what upset her. Her eyes grinded to a halt as she saw it. A Battleship. No wonder she ran away. They were friends from the moment they sat foot in this academy, they spent years together. They knew what the other one tick. And if their was one fear, She had it was great responsibillity. Trix sighed, she knew Natalie would never admit it. But she didn't wanted to be alone. She followed her trail outside, seeing her running across the courtyard. She prepared to run, when suddenly the voice of the admiral boomed in the air. "Natalie, you really chose the wrong moment to break down." She quickly tagged along with the Admiral stepping towards Natalie. If she threw in a good word, then maybe this wouldn't end badly.

Or this:

Trix follows her crying friend

The first one is much more pleasant to read, you know what chars are thinking, and gives your character depth. (plus leaves more time between rp's to avoid story conflicts)

... just helpfull critiscisme

The pain in his stomach was huge, more than he could imagine the admiral could give. He hobbled over to the couch, splaying himself over it, nursing his stomach.
Unfortunatly, he could feel the bile rising in his throat, he ran out the room passing the still fuming admiral and dived into the toilets, he then proceded to empty his guts down the bog.

(see what happens when i faint? )

Oh this is so delicious.

sillyboy wrote:God, how the hell am i going to protect speople, who fight amongst themselves... *shivers*

And what's up with the one-sentance rp's?!.... I mean come on, they don't really add to the story or you character depth.

As an example, me running after darko:

You can write this:

Trix watched as tears fell from Natalies eyes. "Hey, are you alright?" She asked placing her hand on Natalie's shoulders. "I'm fine." she said before turning and running away. Trix looked at the Data-pad, trying to find out what upset her. Her eyes grinded to a halt as she saw it. A Battleship. No wonder she ran away. They were friends from the moment they sat foot in this academy, they spent years together. They knew what the other one tick. And if their was one fear, She had it was great responsibillity. Trix sighed, she knew Natalie would never admit it. But she didn't wanted to be alone. She followed her trail outside, seeing her running across the courtyard. She prepared to run, when suddenly the voice of the admiral boomed in the air. "Natalie, you really chose the wrong moment to break down." She quickly tagged along with the Admiral stepping towards Natalie. If she threw in a good word, then maybe this wouldn't end badly.

Or this:

Trix follows her crying friend

The first one is much more pleasant to read, you know what chars are thinking, and gives your character depth. (plus leaves more time between rp's to avoid story conflicts)

... just helpfull critiscisme

I agree, it is much more interesting to read paragraph length posts, but not all of us are capable of writing in the detail and depth required for this sort of posting.
I always try to make my posts more indepth than one line, but can rarley achive the detail required for this.

I absolutely agree sillyboy, except in situations like this where lots of us are online and quick updates are required.

Collective Character Status: "We suck."

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Collective Character Status: "We suck."

amen

issac watched joseph leave to go throw up. as he stood,he looked around.the admiral flaming,others standing straight. what a mess. he looked at his fellow officers. "permission to speak mam?"