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OOC: Klawz could you change the writing colour for you IC posts, I'm finding that one difficult to read.

I'll also be away for a week starting on sunday, so will it be alright with everyone if I 'freeze' the whole of Naruke South in time (fluff reason: the time bubble malfunctioned and the whole area became 'time locked' meaning everyone in the area is stuck their until I get back.)

OOC my bad ill change it now

Dastardly Dave wrote:OOC: Klawz could you change the writing colour for you IC posts, I'm finding that one difficult to read.

I'll also be away for a week starting on sunday, so will it be alright with everyone if I 'freeze' the whole of Naruke South in time (fluff reason: the time bubble malfunctioned and the whole area became 'time locked' meaning everyone in the area is stuck their until I get back.)

I look to South, and I feel a strange resonance. The Time bubble's been locked! I need to find those humans!
I look down on my hands, carbon skin overcoating an iron body. I do not look human. I look more than human. I am more than human. I am the Emperor's chosen, and I need to fulfill the primary directive.

Klawz wrote:

Dastardly Dave wrote:OOC: Klawz could you change the writing colour for you IC posts, I'm finding that one difficult to read.

I'll also be away for a week starting on sunday, so will it be alright with everyone if I 'freeze' the whole of Naruke South in time (fluff reason: the time bubble malfunctioned and the whole area became 'time locked' meaning everyone in the area is stuck their until I get back.)

I look to South, and I feel a strange resonance. The Time bubble's been locked! I need to find those humans!
I look down on my hands, carbon skin overcoating an iron body. I do not look human. I look more than human. I am more than human. I am the Emperor's chosen, and I need to fulfill the primary directive.

Not exactly page 10, but w/e. Just for the sake of whatev's, I CBA to kill the tyranid hive, lets just say that we're going back to the hq.


BIC:

Arkus and his companions finally reached the extraction point, weary but alive... well, some of them were atleast. Seven space marines had died this day.

OOC: i am in the Time lock bubble with 75% Remaining of the squad i came with.

Katavus wrote:OOC: i am in the Time lock bubble with 75% Remaining of the squad i came with.

OOC: ah, sorry about that, that complicates things. I was just going to leave it for a week while I was away, and let everyone else work around it, but If you're inside, then unless you don't mind not RPing for a whole week, the time bubble will have to open up again.

I could use my phone to post, but any posts I make will likely only be small.

The humans won't trust me, if the guardsman's memories are anything to go by, if I look like this. I take control of the living cells that make up my outer shell, and morph. Long thin fibers sprout from my back, my body becomes sleeker, and a flak jacket forms, instead of skin. There will be no need for them to see more of my body besides this. Now I need to think of a name for this lady, armed with the lasgun I took from the corpse. Jessica will be her name. I load the gun and go hunting for other guardsmen.

OOC: Klawz, mind actually shedding some light on what the hell is going on?

That would be the Deciever, no?

Alternately, its a terminator (non-40k)

OOC: Now that I think about, ker-bleh. Sounds like the deceiver, but in the first we heard of this guy, there was some rubbish about pistons. Well, it's only rubbish if it IS the Deceiver.

Also, Dave, remember, I before E except after C.

Deceiver*

Darkvoidof40k wrote:OOC: Now that I think about, ker-bleh. Sounds like the deceiver, but in the first we heard of this guy, there was some rubbish about pistons. Well, it's only rubbish if it IS the Deceiver.

Also, Dave, remember, I before E except after C.

Deceiver*

OOC: oh the Irony...

As for the Deciever, now I think about it, it can't be, its 'the emperors chosen' must be a morphing assassin.

Riding in the Rhino they began to discuss the plans for what was to happen next.

"There is a brother out there and he needs us!" Leroy shouted against everyone.

"We need to get to the extraction point." Vera replied calmly.

"Brothers! Would he not do the same!? Would he not come save us if we were in distress? HE WOULD DAMNIT! With that Leroy slammed his fist against the inside of the Rhino.

Nikev and the other Nucians in the Rhino looked in astonishment and fear as these massive men argued between each other. Nikev wondered how Bantine had the nerve to stand up against that one.

"Dammit then! I'll take a speeder bike and I'll save him my damned self!"

"Wait brother! I'll go with you!" One of the marines whose name Nikev did not know began to follow Leroy out the back as the Rhino stopped and deployed a speeder bike for them.

Watching the two marines race off on the speeder bike Vera muttered under his breath. "Emperor Protect them for I fear I can no longer help them."

Dastardly Dave wrote:
As for the Deciever, now I think about it, it can't be, its 'the emperors chosen' must be a morphing assassin.

Actually, think more of a Robot morphing assassin from the dark age of technology, further advanced by the Emperor's tinkering into something half alive, and half machine.

Commissar NIkev wrote:Riding in the Rhino they began to discuss the plans for what was to happen next.

"There is a brother out there and he needs us!" Leroy shouted against everyone.

"We need to get to the extraction point." Vera replied calmly.

"Brothers! Would he not do the same!? Would he not come save us if we were in distress? HE WOULD DAMNIT! With that Leroy slammed his fist against the inside of the Rhino.

Nikev and the other Nucians in the Rhino looked in astonishment and fear as these massive men argued between each other. Nikev wondered how Bantine had the nerve to stand up against that one.

"Dammit then! I'll take a speeder bike and I'll save him my damned self!"

"Wait brother! I'll go with you!" One of the marines whose name Nikev did not know began to follow Leroy out the back as the Rhino stopped and deployed a speeder bike for them.

Watching the two marines race off on the speeder bike Vera muttered under his breath. "Emperor Protect them for I fear I can no longer help them."

Looking into the distance Jessica can see a large tank, a rhino. Two space marines on bikes had just left it, and she could see the hatch still open. She yells out, requesting help. She hopes they'll respond, for Space Marines will serve her.

OOC: i don't mind being inactive for a week no big deal, just let me know if something changes with the Time bubble.

OOC: Cba to roleplay properly, or check my spelling (so if I spell something wrong, lay off) 'cause I'm still ill :(. But should be better in a few days. If the following messes anything up, just go ahead and tell me and I'll delete it. But I figure it's a good idea.

The console blipped, and Kartara looked down at her work station. It indicated that a planet had not paid it's tithe this month, and even then it had taken a long time for this to get to this level of command. She loaded up the information into a data-pad and walked over to her superior. "Excuse me, Lieutenant, but I've found this: a planet has not paid it's tithe this month." she told her superior. "What is the planets' name?" she asked. "Naruke II, lieutenant." "This shall be investigated immediately.. if I recall there was some chatter about Tyranids from those Guardsmen stationed at this post, who were being shipped off to that area. I feel that we need to talk to someone with more... influence."

OOC: There's the first part of that. Idea is, we're eventually gonna get some reinforcements. Hope noone minds actually surviving, do they? Don't worry, they're not gonna eat up all the 'nids and make it better... or something. I dunno.

Dastardly Dave wrote:

Darkvoidof40k wrote:OOC: Now that I think about, ker-bleh. Sounds like the deceiver, but in the first we heard of this guy, there was some rubbish about pistons. Well, it's only rubbish if it IS the Deceiver.

Also, Dave, remember, I before E except after C.

Deceiver*

OOC: oh the Irony...

As for the Deciever, now I think about it, it can't be, its 'the emperors chosen' must be a morphing assassin.

Yesterday, I realised how much of a slow I am xDDDD

Someone carry on my character as my laptop is full of virus's and unusable. Getting it fixed soon. Using freinds computer.
Will say when it is fixed. Sorry

OOC: Error detected! Call the Adeptas Computaris... or the 'chanius... w/e. Well, least we know whats up with you, Viking. Noone's really rp'in' atm, so DW. I'm just trying to get back to the capital, so when I do (with Zindler and my mini-marine heroes, we can defend against the attack. Woop dee doo.)

BIC: Afi got high on lho sticks for a couple of weeks. Noone noticed. Little happened. Someone got a badge, that was nice. Little party and reception an' all. They had biscuits, which was good.

'Kay, none of that is true, obv. Just for fun :p, real time, as in over the holiday, there's the explanation. But nah. Y'know what, screw taht. ~shutsthehellup~

OOC: Wow, one person gets a virus computer, one person is gone for a week, and one has been infected by Nurgle!
Thank god I'm okay...wait, spring break is over?

Darkvoidof40k wrote:OOC: Cba to roleplay properly, or check my spelling (so if I spell something wrong, lay off) 'cause I'm still ill :(. But should be better in a few days. If the following messes anything up, just go ahead and tell me and I'll delete it. But I figure it's a good idea.

The console blipped, and Kartara looked down at her work station. It indicated that a planet had not paid it's tithe this month, and even then it had taken a long time for this to get to this level of command. She loaded up the information into a data-pad and walked over to her superior. "Excuse me, Lieutenant, but I've found this: a planet has not paid it's tithe this month." she told her superior. "What is the planets' name?" she asked. "Naruke II, lieutenant." "This shall be investigated immediately.. if I recall there was some chatter about Tyranids from those Guardsmen stationed at this post, who were being shipped off to that area. I feel that we need to talk to someone with more... influence."

OOC: There's the first part of that. Idea is, we're eventually gonna get some reinforcements. Hope noone minds actually surviving, do they? Don't worry, they're not gonna eat up all the 'nids and make it better... or something. I dunno.

Okay....so...you said that there was chatter from some guardsmen....IMO I think you should change that somehow cause I'm sure if there was even a minor Tyrannid threat then the Immperium would quickly swoop down to neutralize it for it may always turn into something much bigger and worse.

Hope you get better soon.

Commissar NIkev wrote:

Darkvoidof40k wrote:OOC: Cba to roleplay properly, or check my spelling (so if I spell something wrong, lay off) 'cause I'm still ill :(. But should be better in a few days. If the following messes anything up, just go ahead and tell me and I'll delete it. But I figure it's a good idea.

The console blipped, and Kartara looked down at her work station. It indicated that a planet had not paid it's tithe this month, and even then it had taken a long time for this to get to this level of command. She loaded up the information into a data-pad and walked over to her superior. "Excuse me, Lieutenant, but I've found this: a planet has not paid it's tithe this month." she told her superior. "What is the planets' name?" she asked. "Naruke II, lieutenant." "This shall be investigated immediately.. if I recall there was some chatter about Tyranids from those Guardsmen stationed at this post, who were being shipped off to that area. I feel that we need to talk to someone with more... influence."

OOC: There's the first part of that. Idea is, we're eventually gonna get some reinforcements. Hope noone minds actually surviving, do they? Don't worry, they're not gonna eat up all the 'nids and make it better... or something. I dunno.

Okay....so...you said that there was chatter from some guardsmen....IMO I think you should change that somehow cause I'm sure if there was even a minor Tyrannid threat then the Immperium would quickly swoop down to neutralize it for it may always turn into something much bigger and worse.

Hope you get better soon.

Shadow of the Warp, silly! Many worlds are overwhelmed without the administorium noticing. There was one case where a world was destroyed and next year a tax collector shows up. Also, the Tyranid attack was a complete surprise.

Im using my parents laptop without them knowing if i post anything okay? And I'm not likely to be able to carry on the rp due to upcoming exams so please carry on the character.
(And Dark void: nice)

Ok, I'm back from my conference, and wow... there has been almost no RPing, thanks for waiting all! Anyway, I'll post more later as it's getting late, but my Character'll need someone to come and rescue him and his squad from their barricade in some heroic fashion. (I'm looking at you Katavus/Nikev )

IC: (the time bubble unlocked)

Jansen and his squad were pouring an unceasing volume of fire into the hordes, but for every shot they fired, and for every pus filled daemon they killed, two more shambled a little closer to the ramshackle barricade...

"Sir, I haven't picked up a single vox signal since we entered this place, and my life-sign transmitter has stopped working" shouted Sergeant Karish over the crack of the lasguns.

"So the Commissar has no Idea we're still alive?"

"Affirmative Sir!"

Jansen, along with the rest of his squad, knew what this meant, there was no help coming, and only divine intervention could save them know...

"Keep firing Men! We'll take down as many of these scumbags as we can! For the Emperor!"

OOC: Just wondering, what does everyone think of my RPing posts so far? Am I being ott? Can you all understand my posts? I'd just like generall feedback, thanks.

I like them. Welcome back!
She steps into the Rhino, and all of the men inside look up is shock. She approaches the one dressed as an officer, and I show him an icon in the palm of her hand, before the man has a chance to yell. It was a golden eagle, sitting on a skull.

OOC: Thanks, Viking. I'll just RP your charry for now.
Dave, tbh, it's all pretty good... but you don't put enough description into it. Your posts are pretty much just speech seperated by a blank line. Sure, it's great and it's well written, but no description of the enemy (except there's loads of them) for example, in the last post you did.

Anyway, on another note if anyone cares, Katavus is still around for the holiday. He joined one of my RP's earlier.

Although, guys, I'm going away for 2-3 days. Relatives
But I'll be taking my Laptop and I might be able to get a WiFi connection in a pub or something, so I'll keep you guys posted on that.

Klawz, wouldn't guardsmen be in a Chimera? Or did you say at some point they were SM's? I don't remember. oO

BIC: Arkus and co. are still wandering around killing 'Nids.

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That's all for now unless I post with my laptop.


Oh yeah, Dave, it's not OTT. But it doesn't cover much time, maybe the space of 30 seconds? Because those Nurgle Daemons... against flashlights. Think game terms: 6's to wound, isn't it? Then the 4+ save and FNP I do believe.

ALSO just a suggestion, but incase anyone becomes busy (which tends to happen during holidays) maybe we should just freeze the RP where it is until after the holiday, to make sure everyone's back. I dunno, what do you guys think?

OOC: sure, i agree to that

Darkvoidof40k wrote:
Klawz, wouldn't guardsmen be in a Chimera? Or did you say at some point they were SM's? I don't remember. oO

They were traveling with SMs. And yes, it probably would be a good idea to freeze it until everyone's back.

Crap.....Wait......I don't understand this freezing.....you all must be in the same time zone area or something because I know nothing of this. I'm in America and I don't have any holiday's comming up anymore(Just got off Spring Break from school) sooo.....what are you guys talking about.

Dave- I don't know what your gonna wanna do...I mean I'm in a Rhino so the coms may be better. Your character could send something and be caught on the Rhino and we send a vehicle back so you can catch up....(of Course this will be after the unfreeze of the post.)

DarkVoid- We wouldn't be in a Chimera....Scout Marines saved my troop and we are traveling in what they brought....a Rhino XD

Dave- Personaly I enjoy your posts.....I actually like the way you seperate the lines with space.this is actually my first RP and your "style" i guess you'd call it really stuck with me. Thats why I type the way I type. ^.^

Shas- Even though you told me to control the Marines you should everyone in a while even if its small ad something for Vera and the Marines with the Guard. I'll write the long things for Leroy and the other guy.

Also DarkVoid - Is your character still in trouble. Because I had 2 Scout Marines leave the main troop I'm with to come and save you. Do you still want Shas's Marines to rescue you?

Of course all the things will be once the unfreeze takes place. :/

Okay and Klawz....I need you as well to tell me about this being you are.....I know people hear figured it out but I cannot find where you are named. PLus I don't know how to react if I have no Idea what you are....other than put a bolt round in your head cause all commissars are Xeno-Phobic jk jk I'm not Xeno-Phobic....I just don't like that which looks like it could kill me ^.^