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Snarky wrote:

lord commissar klimino wrote:

Snarky wrote:

Lord Harrab wrote:ANOTHER GM POINT

Your characters have been in close proximity for six years, that enough time that you'd either adjust or be kicked out, remember the Alliance values co-operation and someone being racist and attacking other personnel would end up out on his arse in quick time.

Thing is Klimono attacked me first.

In a room full of eyewitnesses. All the posts are missing this, if anything, he would get in just as much trouble as me. My character just responded, it's called "Self-Defence". Any modern tribunal (yes even modern military forces have trials) will find him in fault and not me.

yes my guy was in the wrong,but your was to.less,but still.my guy was defending his fellow officer. we both lacked that to be honest and at this point your guy would be found in the wrong.my guy stayed to get his punishment,your went 'AWOL' and left.

can we just put this behind us/ it happend,its done with,your guy can punch mine later

Point is, in a modern court YOU would be the one in trouble, and my guy would get off scott free.

it almost seems like your taking this personally.no offense but i find the whole thing kinda funny. and thats one of the problems i have with courts today.both of us were guilty.mybe i was more but your guy should still be punished.oh wait,we both already have anyways the GM saud she was putting you back with us and that was the end of it.

Disregard, more awesome post below.

Gak it all backwards, I want to post. But my character is in sillyboy's tender care alongside Raptors', so I'll leave it be. Besides, I have GCSE revision to get on with for tomorrow that started at 6 and included several hours on facebook and Dakka.

Gottagetitdone..gottagetitdone..gottagetitdone.. Damn this self motivation stuff doesn't work.

Popping his noise into place with a scream, Dylan walked away. HE went into the bathroom and began using papertowls to wipe the blood off. Not the first time he had his nose broken from his big mouth. Likely not the last. "Im a LT. I can't believe I did that" He gave himself a rough concussion test, quiting due to the fact he was doing it wrong.He smoothed his hair out, then walked back to his classmates. "Where is Sharpe" He said seeing her absense( If she left if not I'll edit this)

Two medical teams were already en-route to fix your character up, TWH, so they're likely rather pissed.

And Sharpe did a real number on Dylan, more than just a simple nose-break. She beat the living sh*t out of his head - he'd be bleeding and knocked senseless.

Disregard most of the previous post then.

While waiting for the Admiral on the shuttle pad, Garan had time to look over the craft that would fly them to the station. A MkIII Halicon Class shuttle, with a capacity of 16. Maximum range of 145,000 Miles between fuleing. A nice ship he thought, basic, but nice. Inside, it had red fabric seats, and thick, reinforced windows. It wasn't that big, only being a shuttle, and he would be glad to get off of it at the station, and onto his carrier.

(Going rage on dylan, proves his comment even more XD JK JK)

RaptorsTallon wrote:While waiting for the Admiral on the shuttle pad, Garan had time to look over the craft that would fly them to the station. A MkIII Halicon Class shuttle, with a capacity of 16. Maximum range of 145,000 Miles between fuleing. A nice ship he thought, basic, but nice. Inside, it had red fabric seats, and thick, reinforced windows. It wasn't that big, only being a shuttle, and he would be glad to get off of it at the station, and onto his carrier.

/is confused

Garan jumped from being with Natalie and Trix to being at the shuttle pad.. easily explainable, yes, but it wasn't.

Gahh, too many posts at once due to too many people being online at the same time.

We defo need a new thread for discussion, despite my earlier contrary belief. Well, when I say defo, I actually mean maybe. If we can just control the quote pyramids and make sure to re-read everything so as not to miss details (which has happened a lot, and I seem to be the one pointing them all out).

issac looked at garan checking out the pod. he stretched.he had a feeling he was going to get beat soon,so he wanted to be ready. if he saw reynold,he would apologize...and probably smile as the dude punched him again. he pulled out his sword again and took his shirt and polished it a little. "oh man,im nervous. what the heck is taking everyone so dang long? didnt they pack ahead of time?"

OOC: I left natalie about half way down the last page, and went to the shuttle pad. I though we had dropped her off at her room, and that Trix was still with her.

Enjoy...

BIC:.......; a Rocky start.........

Trix, Garran and Natalie walked down the corridor. "I'll take it from here Garran, thanks." "No problem Trix, just be in time." Don't worry, i don't want to miss that." Trix watched as Garran dissapeared. Now it was time for the big work. "Natalie what happened?" She looked up to Trix. "Did you see it?.....I didn't wanted this, i just wanted to be in space. Not being responsible for so many men." "Hush, Natalie you'll do fine, Like the Admiral said. If were that bad, we would never even be commisioned a ship." "But what if I..." Trix smiled. "I Know you Natalie, you're too stubborn to let it happen. Besides, i'll be standing behind you just as always." Natalie smiled, as fresh energie poured into her body. "Thanks, Trix. I needed that." "No you didn't, you're an excelent commander and the only one not seeing that is you." Natalie nodded and gave Trix a hug. "Now collect your stuff, time is ticking. The Admiral is pissed and wants us up as fast as possible. Natalie jumped up, and quickly ran to her room. Trix scratched her head, today wasn't going well. But she had to press on, her House would be proud.

She took her backpack, everything she owned was already inside. Trix never was one who needed luxury, if you already had what you needed. What was your excuse for the rest then. She placed it on her back and walked outside. "Now where is that Darn Reynolds again." she muttered. She opened a comm- link with the schools mainframe. Quickly shifting trough the available Folders she found him. In jail. "The blittering idiot" she cursed. "What's going on?" Natalie asked appearing out of her room, carrying to bags. "I have to get Reynolds. Just go ahead, ill be there soon." "Okay." Natalie said as she watched Trix running down the hall. Now who was going to help her , with her bags. she sighed, as she puled them up and slowly walked to the launch-pad.

Trix ran as fast as she could, The univeristy prison, wasn't far. She could make it. Meanwhile she ploughed too as much data as she could, trying to find a way out. She jumped inside the building, narrowly avoiding two MP's. She calmed down and walked to the desk. A grumpy looking man looked at her. "What do ya want?" He muttered. Trix waited, trying to find a way when her search in the mainframe stumbled on it. "I'm here to transfer prisoner #0000124" the man looked at his data-pad. "not scheduled for release, or relocating kid." The man looked away. "Hey, i'm not done, this is on the direct order of Admiral Tranesch." "Why would the Admiral be intressted in him, he's just a low life." Trix tried to keep an even face. "That's not your problem soldier, obey your orders." The man sighed. "Very well, please verify." the man held out a small datacube. Trix quickly made a link to the device, transfering the data she had found on the mainframe. Trix was relieved when the datacube accepted the code. Luckily there was one Admiral who had forgot to encrypt his code today. Within a few moments Reynolds stood before her, the guard released his handcuffs. Reynolds stood silent, carresing his wrists, not sure what was going on. "Prisoner #0000124, Admiral Tranesch has requested your presence. Follow me."

Slowly they walked outside, away from the prison. Once out of view Reynolds started laughing. "Thanks Trix, you came at the right time" Trix grabbed him by his collar and pushed him against the wall, ignoring the looks of fellow cadets. "You fething Moron" she cursed. "Pull that trick once more and i'll make you eat you're own heart. You almost singly handed destroyed whatever honour we had left. I fething lied, threw my honour away. So that you would get there in time and the others would still have some. Do it once more and i'll make sure you never touch a vessle again. She released the shocked Reynolds. "Now move, time is passing. Reynolds rubbed his painfull neck, that girl was crazy. But she was right, it wasn't him alone, they were a group now. He started running following the trail of Trix.

Trix opened the last door, heavily breathing, Reynolds right next to her. "So you found, the traitor?" Someone said. "Cut it out, guys. Blaming won't help and fighting definatly won't help. " She sighed. "Guys, i don't understand you, i mean is this what you wanted?" She looked at the faces of her fellow commanders. "We all came here with the same dream, to cross the spaces, and see what's behind. I don't care who started it, but we're a group now. And if the Navy says we need a group to fly, then by God i will love each and everyone of you. For helping me realise my dream.... Our dream." Trix watched as everyone bowed there head in shame. "We're in this togheter guys, so lets make it work.

The amiral stood behind the corner softly smiling, they had chosen a bad timing. But at least now they saw the truth. Only as a group could they hope too survive. Two is more then one. She wiped the smile of her face, she couldn't let them see how proud she was. There were still a lot of things to improve. She appeared and all the cadets jumped up saluting her. "Everyone present and accounted for." Trix said. the admiral raised her eyebrow. "Commander Reynolds, you are not allowed here." "There has been a misunderstanding Admiral, Commander Reynolds didn't went AWOl. He had a Personal call, his aunt just died. And he left the room to talk in private." "Is that so? I Recall one off you said he was gone." "Garran jumped up, I was there Admiral, i can confirm Commander Zedong. He was quickly followed by the rest of the group. "Very well, Reynold you're back. Don't let it happen again." "Yes ma'am". "Now lets board Commanders, we've got a long way to go."

RaptorsTallon wrote:OOC: I left natalie about half way down the last page, and went to the shuttle pad. I though we had dropped her off at her room, and that Trix was still with her.

Gah, didn't see the IC post. I'll go back and find it now.

Too many posts at once. /rage

TheWildHost wrote:(Going rage on dylan, proves his comment even more XD JK JK)

OCC: Dude, thats rather tasteless, and i'm not even female, just incase you're misunderstanding why she sent all agro on you let me list her mindset up until that point:

She's managed to get all of her cadets through training, and all with high marks.
Sharpe=happy

Her cadets managed to perform a ceremony flawlessly in front of the entire Alliance and her boss.
Sharpe= very happy

She managed to convince her boss that her start pupil is worth risking valuable tech on

Sharpe = extremely happy


That same pupil has crumbled under the pressure after finding out the ship she's been given

Sharpe = not happy

That pupil then manages to make her earlier words sound false to her boss

Sharpe = angry

She goes to remind her star pupil what she has achieved, and is told by security that several of her other cadets have been fighting

Sharpe= very angry

She arrives, disciplines three of them rather more forcefully than she intended, another of them has wandered off, then there is you, with a sexist comment like those she has had to deal with her entire career.

Sharpe=snapped. Beat downs ensure.

Understand?

sillyboy wrote:Enjoy...

BIC:.......; a Rocky start.........

Trix, Garran and Natalie walked down the corridor. "I'll take it from here Garran, thanks." "No problem Trix, just be in time." Don't worry, i don't want to miss that." Trix watched as Garran dissapeared. Now it was time for the big work. "Natalie what happened?" She looked up to Trix. "Did you see it?.....I didn't wanted this, i just wanted to be in space. Not being responsible for so many men." "Hush, Natalie you'll do fine, Like the Admiral said. If were that bad, we would never even be commisioned a ship." "But what if I..." Trix smiled. "I Know you Natalie, you're too stubborn to let it happen. Besides, i'll be standing behind you just as always." Natalie smiled, as fresh energie poured into her body. "Thanks, Trix. I needed that." "No you didn't, you're an excelent commander and the only one not seeing that is you." Natalie nodded and gave Trix a hug. "Now collect your stuff, time is ticking. The Admiral is pissed and wants us up as fast as possible. Natalie jumped up, and quickly ran to her room. Trix scratched her head, today wasn't going well. But she had to press on, her House would be proud.

She took her backpack, everything she owned was already inside. Trix never was one who needed luxury, if you already had what you needed. What was your excuse for the rest then. She placed it on her back and walked outside. "Now where is that Darn Reynolds again." she muttered. She opened a comm- link with the schools mainframe. Quickly shifting trough the available Folders she found him. In jail. "The blittering idiot" she cursed. "What's going on?" Natalie asked appearing out of her room, carrying to bags. "I have to get Reynolds. Just go ahead, ill be there soon." "Okay." Natalie said as she watched Trix running down the hall. Now who was going to help her , with her bags. she sighed, as she puled them up and slowly walked to the launch-pad.

Trix ran as fast as she could, The univeristy prison, wasn't far. She could make it. Meanwhile she ploughed too as much data as she could, trying to find a way out. She jumped inside the building, narrowly avoiding two MP's. She calmed down and walked to the desk. A grumpy looking man looked at her. "What do ya want?" He muttered. Trix waited, trying to find a way when her search in the mainframe stumbled on it. "I'm here to transfer prisoner #0000124" the man looked at his data-pad. "not scheduled for release, or relocating kid." The man looked away. "Hey, i'm not done, this is on the direct order of Admiral Tranesch." "Why would the Admiral be intressted in him, he's just a low life." Trix tried to keep an even face. "That's not your problem soldier, obey your orders." The man sighed. "Very well, please verify." the man held out a small datacube. Trix quickly made a link to the device, transfering the data she had found on the mainframe. Trix was relieved when the datacube accepted the code. Luckily there was one Admiral who had forgot to encrypt his code today. Within a few moments Reynolds stood before her, the guard released his handcuffs. Reynolds stood silent, carresing his wrists, not sure what was going on. "Prisoner #0000124, Admiral Tranesch has requested your presence. Follow me."

Slowly they walked outside, away from the prison. Once out of view Reynolds started laughing. "Thanks Trix, you're my sweetheart." Trix grabbed him by his collar and pushed him against the wall, ignoring the looks of fellow cadets. "You fething Moron" she cursed. "Pull that trick once more and i'll make you eat you're own heart. You almost singly handed destroyed whatever honour we had left. I fething lied, threw my honour away. So that you would get there in time and the others would still have some. Do it once more and i'll make sure you never touch a vessle again. She released the shocked Reynolds. "Now move, time is passing. Reynolds rubbed his painfull neck, that girl was crazy. But she was right, it wasn't him alone, they were a group now. He started running following the trail of Trix.

Trix opened the last door, heavily breathing, Reynolds right next to her. "So you found, the traitor?" Someone said. "Cut it out, guys. Blaming won't help and fighting definatly won't help. " She sighed. "Guys, i don't understand you, i mean is this what you wanted?" She looked at the faces of her fellow commanders. "We all came here with the same dream, to cross the spaces, and see what's behind. I don't care who started it, but we're a group now. And if the Navy says we need a group to fly, then by God i will love each and everyone of you. For helping me realise my dream.... Our dream." Trix watched as everyone bowed there head in shame. "We're in this togheter guys, so lets make it work.

The amiral stood behind the corner softly smiling, they had chosen a bad timing. But at least now they saw the truth. Only as a group could they hope too survive. Two is more then one. She wiped the smile of her face, she couldn't let them see how proud she was. There were still a lot of things to improve. She appeared and all the cadets jumped up saluting her. "Everyone present and accounted for." Trix said. the admiral raised her eyebrow. "Commander Reynolds, you are not allowed here." "There has been a misunderstanding Admiral, Commander Reynolds didn't went AWOl. He had a Personal call, his aunt just died. And he left the room to talk in private." "Is that so? I Recall one off you said he was gone." "Garran jumped up, I was there Admiral, i can confirm Commander Zedong. He was quickly followed by the rest of the group. "Very well, Reynold you're back. Don't let it happen again." "Yes ma'am". "Now lets board Commanders, we've got a long way to go."

Great Post.
Didn't the Admiral just get him out of jail though?

Darkvoidof40k wrote:

RaptorsTallon wrote:While waiting for the Admiral on the shuttle pad, Garan had time to look over the craft that would fly them to the station. A MkIII Halicon Class shuttle, with a capacity of 16. Maximum range of 145,000 Miles between fuleing. A nice ship he thought, basic, but nice. Inside, it had red fabric seats, and thick, reinforced windows. It wasn't that big, only being a shuttle, and he would be glad to get off of it at the station, and onto his carrier.

/is confused

Garan jumped from being with Natalie and Trix to being at the shuttle pad.. easily explainable, yes, but it wasn't.

Gahh, too many posts at once due to too many people being online at the same time.

We defo need a new thread for discussion, despite my earlier contrary belief. Well, when I say defo, I actually mean maybe. If we can just control the quote pyramids and make sure to re-read everything so as not to miss details (which has happened a lot, and I seem to be the one pointing them all out).

Once everyone's caught up i'll do a summary. NO ONE IS TO POST AFTER THEY REACH THE SHUTTLE.

Edit, Feth, looks like my post has disrupted a rather awesome one by Sillyboy, I'm going to edit mine and let Silly's stand

(Where is Sharpe ATM? I need to know)

Dammit, i posted that i would tie it togheter, and get him out of jail....

Did no-one read my post?

sillyboy wrote:Dammit, i posted that i would tie it togheter, and get him out of jail....

Did no-one read my post?

i did. i say we go with sillys.less bickering,less confusion,less punches.

GM said not to post once your at the shuttle,im at it so im waiting

Great post silly, but a few things:

1) With prolonged dialogues, just write them out with each separate section of speech on a new line (basically next person speaking = new line),
2) Unfortunately for you, the Admiral had already gotten Reynolds out of jail.. so.. uh.. the GMs version counts. It wasn't totally wasted though - it was good practice for you. And good it was!

@TWH - just say you got patched up by the medics in record time and just barely made it to the shuttle in time. The Admiral left to get Reynolds.


edit:
Yeah silly, I read it. But like I said, the GMs version goes. And I see you've still got a computer inside Trix's head..

Anyway, can't wait to get my ship, I'll just say Natalie got her suitcases (two) and went to the rendezvous.

Also, make sure to catch up on what you missed sillyboy.

Aaargh i said i would do it.

And i just like to write in paragraphs

EDIT: Computers in your head is Kewl

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Great post silly, but a few things:

1) With prolonged dialogues, just write them out with each separate section of speech on a new line (basically next person speaking = new line),
2) Unfortunately for you, the Admiral had already gotten Reynolds out of jail.. so.. uh.. the GMs version counts. It wasn't totally wasted though - it was good practice for you. And good it was!

@TWH - just say you got patched up by the medics in record time and just barely made it to the shuttle in time. The Admiral left to get Reynolds.

Nope, i'm going to let Sillys stand as what happened, its far better.

EDIT: Wildhost, i'd advise not drawing her attention on you again, I posted her thoughts above and she is not happy with your character at the minute.

"Thanks guys" Dylan said walking out. Getting to the shuttle he sees the others. "Commander Sharpe Rididng with us?" He asks checking his bags and sword.

Oh.. alright.. but it means that the Admiral wasn't planning on letting Reynolds out and hence should be angry that he was released.. sort of.. maybe.. gah.

Screw it, lets go to space where we can all chill out with a crate of Vodka to ease the pain.

(So am I still effed up?)

Lord Harrab wrote:Nope, i'm going to let Sillys stand as what happened, its far better.

*happy dance*

And no more rp, for me today... wrote 3 pages in Words... I'm exhausted.

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Oh.. alright.. but it means that the Admiral wasn't planning on letting Reynolds out and hence should be angry that he was released.. sort of.. maybe.. gah.

Screw it, lets go to space where we can all chill out with a crate of Vodka to ease the pain.

she did say being a navy commander would get you laid and get you free booze

Natalie arrived at the shuttle, and kept her distance from the others, and did not make eye contact with the Admiral. She was too ashamed. She silently waited for departure to begin, suitcases in either hand and sword sheathed at her hip.

lord commissar klimino wrote:

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Oh.. alright.. but it means that the Admiral wasn't planning on letting Reynolds out and hence should be angry that he was released.. sort of.. maybe.. gah.

Screw it, lets go to space where we can all chill out with a crate of Vodka to ease the pain.

she did say being a navy commander would get you laid and get you free booze

My character doesn''t need to be navy commander to get laid.. The booze is just a bonus.

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Oh.. alright.. but it means that the Admiral wasn't planning on letting Reynolds out and hence should be angry that he was released.. sort of.. maybe.. gah.

Screw it, lets go to space where we can all chill out with a crate of Vodka to ease the pain.

She knows, and isn't happy. But she's trying to make a good group. and if we protect eachother it's the first step. So she would let it slide.
The admiral wants results, and she'll do wathever it takes to get it done. (That is if i'm correct about this char's personality.)

edit; my spelling is awfull today...