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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/08 12:11:21
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Adolescent Youth with Potential
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The idea of Deathwing was to try and improve my painting and aas i like the terminator models and thought they would have enough detail to try things while having a nice overall effect on.
An army list will be posted shortly however it will consit of an assault squad, tactical squad, HQ is undecided and a LRC. If i have enough points i might add a dread in, however this should reach apporximatly 1000 points easily.
So here I am, Painting by myself as always but after finding this community I was very excited to post up some pictures. I want them to be table top standard if not more and I am currently un happy about the way my termi's have turned out. I havn't painted in 6-7 years and the colour scheme was used from a vid i found on youtube and the rest was bits and bobs i learnt from various other videos and articles.
So this is my first squad ( WIP)
This is the first one painted, almost done however do not have any skull white at the moment to tweak bits.
The front of him - The pictures are VERY close up - might take more later.
And the Back
I will be posting the whole squad once they are complete/flocked etc...
Any comments or ideas to improve these would be brilliant and if i like the idea I will impliment it and show you guys the results.
Thanks All Automatically Appended Next Post: Goals:
1. Build and paint Assault terminator squad.
2. Build and paint Tactical terminator squad.
3. To convert a model for my HQ.
4. Build and Paint LRC.
5. For all models to have time and dedication put into them. Build and paint Tactical terminator squad.
6.To produce a 1000 points fully painted, wyswyg Deathwing Army.
7. Put them into battle.
These will have dates edited next to them when complete. Automatically Appended Next Post: Update:
Spent most of the day painting and have skull white in the post so got to wait untill I get it to improve the skulls on these guys. Any tips on gold would be nice, doesn't seem to be working out too well but much happier with them in general.
This is Member Alpha
This is the squad of 4 - still working on the seargent but unsure if he will be included in my Army List.
Standard will be added shortly.
C&C very welcome!
I have spent much time on these models and they are the first i've done in a long time, so every bit of help is taken in to consideration. Any ideas i like i'll try it and post an update asap.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/09 12:25:01
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Adolescent Youth with Potential
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Update:
Going to re-do the gold today add felsh wash and finish of the sergent
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/09 12:44:56
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Massive Knarloc Rider
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Theyre looking very nice, but the powerclaws could do with maybe some highlighting, and maybe a wash to add depth. Just my 2 pennies! (I will not use American dosh!)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/09 14:28:27
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Human Auxiliary to the Empire
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Nice I would love to see a dred
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/09 17:44:25
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Adolescent Youth with Potential
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ghosty wrote:Theyre looking very nice, but the powerclaws could do with maybe some highlighting, and maybe a wash to add depth. Just my 2 pennies! (I will not use American dosh!)
Thanks Ghosty! I think I am going to do some ice blue mixed with skull white highlights (when the skull white comes). For washes to you mean on the claws or in general? I have bought some washes today to do the skulls on pads/legs so looking forward to doing that.
yimkin101 wrote:Nice I would love to see a dred
Aye I am very much looking into doing a dred but will not be for a while, Thanks
General Update:
Decided to use a chaos Lord conversion as my HQ choice, Currently trying my first attempt at green stuff - will post pictures when its done (might be a few days)
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:08:50
Subject: Re:Moprium's DeathWing
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Adolescent Youth with Potential
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Update:
Spent alot of time thinking of how im going to do the conversion, but going to do my next tactical termi squad first!
Here is a pic of my assualt terminators, amost complete, gonna do a few tweaks which won't even be reconisable on the photos anywho!
I am very pleased with the basing and happy how they turned out now.
Theres one missing and thats because i've had trouble painting the shield and thunder hammer, there will also be a standard on one of these guys as my standard bearer.
C&C Please - even if there not nice :p
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:34:14
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Leader of the Sept
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They are a little browner than other Deathwing I've seen. Also I think the right shoulder pads are needing some insignia lovin'. Otherwise, very solid work. The lightning claws are nice and subtly awesome
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:39:19
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Adolescent Youth with Potential
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haha cheers!
I'm using a mix of graveyard earth and bleached bone I didnt want them to stand out to much.
I really wanted to get the DW special made shoulder pads but it would add up.
I'm gonna be sticking some small shields etc on them now my Darkangels conversion pack thhing has arrived  Once they are painted ofc.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:42:09
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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They're nicely executed, indeed!!!
It's not always easy to manage some clear SM!
Anyway, I do have a few comments:
- there are still some mould lines visible, for instance on the last picture, on his left gauntlet : nothing much to worry about, that's a detail;
- you could add some more highlights on some parts : the chestplates, claws, eyes, etc... they would stand out better!
- if you could afford a Dark Angel conversion kit, it would provide you with much details related to the DA in general, and the Deathwing : feathers, angels, etc... To make the armours feel like ornated and revered relics.
- eventually, I think that you should add some more colours to the models. For me, there's too much "bone" colour on them. I'd try and paint the shoulder pads in another colour, dark green for example... But that's just my personal taste, they're great the way they are!
Oh, and nice work on the freehands, they're simple yet very effective!!!
Keep up the good work,
Cheers,
Yggdrasil
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My WiP -affiliated Traitors - War on Tranch : Renegades
The World Tree's offsprings - Various WIPs : Skavens, Tzeentch & Nurgle CSMs, Marine Swap
My first tutorial - Object Source Lighting
What will I achieve in 7 months? : Radio Omid is online
"Squat Hulk- in space no one knows you no longer exist." - Gitzbitah
"Now you're just being silly, everyone knows red paint tastes fasta." - monkeytroll
"Both servers are on different continents so space meteors or thermonuclear war will not be enough take out dakka hopefully." - legoburner
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:48:10
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Adolescent Youth with Potential
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Yggdrasil wrote:They're nicely executed, indeed!!!
It's not always easy to manage some clear SM!
Anyway, I do have a few comments:
- there are still some mould lines visible, for instance on the last picture, on his left gauntlet : nothing much to worry about, that's a detail;
- you could add some more highlights on some parts : the chestplates, claws, eyes, etc... they would stand out better!
- if you could afford a Dark Angel conversion kit, it would provide you with much details related to the DA in general, and the Deathwing : feathers, angels, etc... To make the armours feel like ornated and revered relics.
- eventually, I think that you should add some more colours to the models. For me, there's too much "bone" colour on them. I'd try and paint the shoulder pads in another colour, dark green for example... But that's just my personal taste, they're great the way they are!
Oh, and nice work on the freehands, they're simple yet very effective!!!
Keep up the good work,
Cheers,
Yggdrasil
Thanks for the lovely comment.
I'll start from the bottom, the free hand was just to see if I could do any - first time, and its one of those things you can only get better at and cant paint over no prob so cheers
The mould marks will be gone tomorrow - didnt really notice them much (im to unobservant) so thanks for that.
They do look pretty dull at times thats why i addedd the free hand, I think i'm gonna add some angels stuff on the body armour etc...its just a matter of finding where it fits nicely as it arrived this morning only been sprayed but many ideas running through my head.
The highlights is somthing i'm working on (never done it before) so trying to add a bit, I added a spotof white on one of the termi's eyes but didn't like it, think its gonna be a bit of trial and error on that part but there's always something to imrpove on!
Thanks for the nice comment!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:52:20
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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You're welcome... Hope they'll get even better!
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My WiP -affiliated Traitors - War on Tranch : Renegades
The World Tree's offsprings - Various WIPs : Skavens, Tzeentch & Nurgle CSMs, Marine Swap
My first tutorial - Object Source Lighting
What will I achieve in 7 months? : Radio Omid is online
"Squat Hulk- in space no one knows you no longer exist." - Gitzbitah
"Now you're just being silly, everyone knows red paint tastes fasta." - monkeytroll
"Both servers are on different continents so space meteors or thermonuclear war will not be enough take out dakka hopefully." - legoburner
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2010/07/10 22:54:27
Subject: Moprium's DeathWing
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Lethal Lhamean
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I think they look good. Easily table top standard. The one thing they are obviously missing to me is battle damage. Thats my level of painting so judge as you will. http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a445/mabbon/P1010502.jpg Also you seem too hard on yourself. Chill, they look good, but unless you paint stuff that most people cannot you only get some comments not a flood. First white is a hard colour to paint. So you have to paint it on in a ridiculous number of layers to get that perfection look I suspect you are looking for. I also think the lighting claws in their present state aren't really working. No real answer to help though. If you want to see someone who can paint awesomesauce look at this tutorial and see how much work is involved. http://www.chestofcolors.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=37&t=5888 Good luck with the rest of the army.
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